One Helluva Night

One Helluva Night

Raian Kure x GN Reader Raian Kure x Reader

Synopsis: You are a married woman with a man who is nothing but a piece of trash to you. You barely know him due to the fact that it was an arranged marriage. He has a dark secret that could cost him his life. He's being hunted down by a skilled and primal assassin who was given the mission to annihilate your husband.

Warning: ⚠️ blood, gore, Explicit, violence, angst, brutality, trash husband, Brutal Raian Kure, profanity, rough sex, rough kissing, unprotected sex, M and F oral, breeding, trigger warning

MDNI 18+ only

Side note: some of the stuff on the warnings won't come until later but I'm letting you know what the story will have. And I'm trying to make this one really long at least. It's Raian bro! He needs to shine!

Gif Credit: @hoe4rairai

Word count: 1,707

You got home and saw your husband Kevin kissing another woman in the living room. It was his secretary Nina. "Kevin! What the fuck!" You Bellowed with rage.

Kevin looked at you and rolled his eyes in annoyance. "What!? Am I not allowed to have fun at least!?" He says as he glared at you. You weren't shocked at the response he gave you because you already knew the type of person he is. He was always trying to justify his actions even if they were wrong.

Nina just mockingly laughed at you and smiled smugly as she hugged Kevin tighter to her. You only sighed heavily in annoyance and rubbed your head in frustration. You never let anyone know what type of person you really are. And Kevin and Nina are this close in finding what your other side is truly about.

"What can I say.....you're fucking boring you wear the same shit everyday....you don't even excite me! You never had! You're just a money maker for me! Your family is rich and I'm just taking their money!" Kevin laughed wickedly as he sips is whiskey. Nina joins in laughing mockingly at you.

"So that's what it's about....you think my parents are the ones who are rich?" You begin to laugh hysterically. "What's so funny? Huh?" Kevin replied annoyed.

"do you want to know why I never told you anything about me...about my identity...who I truly am? It's because I knew one day you would do something as stupid as this." You say with manic laughter.

"What the hell are you bitching about-" he doesn't finish his sentence as you send him flying to the wall with a powerful kick to his head.

Nina screams as she falls off of Kevin's lap and hits the floor as he sees Kevin get sent flying towards the wall.

"WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!" She bellows in disbelief

Blood comes out of Kevin's head as it drips down his face. you then smile wickedly at Nina who tried to crawl away. You grab her by her hair and pull on her hair hard. you slapped her violently across the face discombobulating her.

"You really thought I was a push over huh....well you thought really wrong Nina. The next time you try to mess with me.....well......I won't just slap you.....I'll make sure you'll never see the light of day...do you understand." You growl with fury as you slam your fist through the concrete wall 2 inches away from her face.

Nina flinched and nodded her head fervently in fear. Kevin slowly got up but he seemed discombobulated. You punched him once more in the face in which he then laid on the ground knocked out with two black eyes.

"You can have him Nina...I don't need him nor will I ever need him. Trash goes together with trash. Besides once he's finished with you he'll move on to the next bitch and you know it. I bet he has another side piece right now." You say to her mockingly as you show her pictures of Kevin with another woman.

Nina stays quiet. "You actually thought he cared....oh how cute.....you really thought he gave a fuck....you really are pathetic." You laugh mockingly at her seeing as the tables have turned for Nina.

"Moral of the story....don't fuck with me." You say as you laugh in amusement and walk away. You walked out of the apartment complex with your head held high and a triumphant smirk.

Unbeknownst to you that someone in the shadows watched the whole thing go down. But it's not like he was there for you anyway. He was on the hunt for your now ex-boyfriend.

He kicked the door down violently breaking it into tiny pieces with his unbelievable strength. "Who the fuck are you!" Growled Kevin with rage as he stood up all wobbly and off balance.

Raian's grin grows even wider as he looks at Kevin and grabs him by his throat chocking him. Nina screams in horror and tries to run away but Raian closes off the exit by throwing the coffee table her way.

"That woman from before did a whole number on you. I'm a little pissed that she didn't fucking let me beat you up first but....I'd say your ass is already far gone.... you're one sick bastard!" Laughed Raian as he began to choke Kevin.

"STOP IT! YOU'RE GONNA KILL HIM!" Screamed Nina in horror but Raian continued to laugh wickedly as he continued to choke Kevin.

Nina tried to hit Raian with a glass bottle on his head but that didn't work and Raian didn't budge. Raian with that sinister grin of his was eager for the fact that he was going to have fun with Thai hit. He slammed Kevin down to the floor and through the wooded floor.

Raian cackled sinisterly as he violently punched Kevin in the face multiple times giving him no mercy.

Nina did everything she could to stop Raian from hurting Kevin but it was no use. Kevin's face was squashed with Raian's brutal punches. And in a matter of seconds Kevin was dead.

Raian was covered in blood and panting heavily grinning with satisfaction. "It's your turn now bitch!" Replied Raian with his corrupt expression with a creepy sing song tone.

Nina shook and trembled with fear. She cried and begged him not to kill her too. "Please! Have mercy!" She cried in fear.

However Raian didn't let up. He grabbed her by the collar of her shirt and he kneed her in her stomach fiercely. It felt like her insides had exploded as she coughed up blood.

With one last bloody murder scream Nina realized it was over for her as Raian stomped down on her chest breaking her rib cage as bits of bone struck her heart killing her instantly.

Raian couldn't hold back his Malevolent laugh. He soon got his phone out and called his grandfather Erioh.

“Oi, i'm done with my hit. Send someone to do the clean up. I'm out-”

“All the clean up crews are busy. you know how to clean a scene. Do it yourself.” Replied Erioh dryly.

Raian growled in annoyance as he began to clean up the abomination he just got rid of.

“This guy and his wench don't even deserve to get a proper burial. Fucking bastards stole money from the Kure Clan, are traffickers, they were a whole lot of shit and the person who asked for this to happen was someone who wanted revenge for their girlfriend. So annoying!” Yelled Raian with rage as he broke the mop in half.

Soon Raian finally finished cleaning up and he left, leaving the two bodies to burn in the fireplace. Raian jumped out of the window and climbed to the rooftop of the apartment complex.

He cackled wickedly as he inhaled the air into his lungs. He soon begins jumping from rooftop to rooftop heading back home when he suddenly notices you looking outside your window noticing him.

Raian’s face was serious at first, but as soon as he saw you looking at him his face grew with straight up amusement. He began to grin sinisterly, showing off those pearly white teeth which meant business.

“What the fuck?!” You exclaim in shock as you see Raian heading towards you. You shut the window close but that wasn't enough to stop the almighty Raian Kure. He broke through your window like nothing.

Not a scratch was on him as he broke through the glass. “Shit! Who the hell are you?” You exclaimed as you got in your fighting stance.

Raian slowly walks towards you with that Malevolent grin of his. You throw blow after blow, punch after punch, kick after kick. Some blows did land but he was mostly dodging them or stopping them with a counter attack.

“You suck! And you were the one who did most of fucking damage to that Kevin guy!I don't believe that! You can barely land a blow on me!” Laughed Raian in amusement as he continues to grip both of your wrists tightly.

“AUGH! What are you talking about? How do you know my ex-boyfriend?! What the fuck is going-mmph!” Was all you could speak as Raian smooshed your cheeks together making your plump red lips pucker.

“Do you know what kind of person your ex-boyfriend was….I bet all that time you were going out with him you didn't realize what he was doing besides fucking his secretary.” Replied Raian with a sneer.

You look at him with wide eyes trying to escape his grip. Raian leaned in close to you, his hot breath tickling your neck and ear.

“Your ex-boyfriend and that bitch secretary Nina were involved in some pretty fucked up shit. I bet you didn't know you were dating a corrupt evil bastard.” He whispered in your ear still with that vile sneer of his.

You just stood there shocked with your eyes wide open. Raian pulled back and let go of your face. He eyed your red plump lips, your neck, your collarbone and your big cleavage.

He grinned devilishly as he cupped your chin lifting it up so you could look up at him. You begin to blush as you never had a man cup your chin and force you to look at him like that.

Looking at him closely. He wasn't bad looking. Though intimidating and crazy….he looked fine as hell to you. Your heart fluttered, and a chill ran up and down your spine as the excitement began to give you butterflies in your belly.

“I've decided. I’ll take you with me back to my clan. You’ll be of good use, well to at least get someone off my back.” Cackled Raian wickedly as he threw you over his shoulder like a sack of rice.

“Oof! Wait! I haven't agreed to anything yet! I don't even know who you-Aaaaaahhhh!” You scream in bloody murder as he jumps out of where your window used to be three stories down to a tree where the two of you disappeared into the night.

To be continued: ......

#TEAMRAIANKURE ....

One Helluva Ritual part 4

Raian Kure x GN Reader Raian Kure x Reader Raian Kure x female reader

Synopsis: You are in cloud 9 with Raian Doing the ritual to where you become his wife by surviving a whole night with him.

Warning: ⚠️ blood, gore, Explicit, violence, angst, brutality, trash husband, Brutal Raian Kure, profanity, rough sex, rough kissing, unprotected sex, M and F oral, breeding, trigger warning

MDNI 18+ only

Side note: some of the stuff on the warnings won't come until later but I'm letting you know what the story will have. And I'm trying to make this one really long at least. It's Raian bro! He needs to shine!

Pic credit: Gold Dust

Word count: 1,731

Raian was violent and ruthless that was clear to you. But for some reason the way he made love to you was quite exhilarating.

Raian growled as he pounded into you with such primal instincts bending your lower body towards your upper body into the breeding position. His arms were between your head gripping the futon and blanket as he brought his body and weight forward towards you.

He bent your lower body even closer to your upper body, impressed by your flexibility as he continued to pound into you like a primal ape.

“AH! AH! AH! AH! OH GOD! OH GOD!” You yell at the top of your lungs with pleasure.

Raian cackled viciously as he slammed his huge bulge into you. His balls slapping your ass as he rammed into you violently, deep inside of you all the way to your cervix.

“NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU SCREAM, CRY, AND BEG ME TO STOP! I I WON'T STOP UNTIL I’M SATISFIED!” Growled Raian as he continued to fuck you in such a primal manner.

You could only whimper and mewl softly seeing as you were getting exhausted. He grunted a bit as he cummed bucket loads inside of you once again but he kept thrusting violently into you going all the way in.

“Ah….ah….ah….Rai…..an……ah……how long will you last……ah….ah……fucking me….” You whisper softly as you desperately clung onto his shoulders. but Raian just laughed wickedly as he continued to violently thrust all the way into your cervix.

Meanwhile outside, Reiichi and Fusui looked at each other. “You know….we all have to do this ritual one day but when it comes to Raian…..I honestly don't know what to think…..” Spoke Reiichi with a nervous look.

“Yeah…..but…..look I know….my older brother can be…..strange and….. he's one odd fellow but…..I think…he chose her for a reason…so again…let's just see what he is up to.” Spoke Fusui a bit worried as well.

“Ah…..oooh…..ooh….ah.” you moan softly as you are riding him in the reverse cowgirl position. He sneered devilishly as he laid on the futon with his arms on the back of his head as your bubble but jiggled on his cock.

He noticed a few of your back moles and your back dimples looked irresistible. He squeezed your ass and then he smacked it.

“RIDE FASTER BUNNY!” He bellows as he bruisingly grips your left hip.

You ride faster and you start to feel the urge to cum once again. Your juices squirted as you kept riding him. He rubs your clit and you twitch and squirm and you ride him faster.

“Ahhh!” You explode your cum on his cock. He roughly pushes you down and starts to quickly thrust into you and explodes his cum deep inside of you once again.

He then flips you on your back and he begins to lick and devour your big perky breasts. You mewl softly squirming and twitching underneath him.

He licked all the way down to your stomach until he got close to your bottom warmth. Where he sucked in on it for a moment. He grinned sinisterly and he began to devour your warmth.

You gasp loudly and grip his hair tightly pulling it as he devours you ravenously. You arch your back and lean your head back on the pillow buck your hips desperately into his face.

“AHHH! RAIAN! OH GOD!” You cried as tears she down your cheeks and your vision was getting blurry. He took it up a bit notch and he inserted his index finger and middle finger as he continued to devour you ravenously.

He looked at you with a glare as if he was telling you ‘scream all you want I won't let up’ look and it excited you even more. The tingles on your warmth came back and mewled and squirmed some more as Raian thrusted his fingers faster while continuing to eat you out.

You lost count of how many times you cummed in his face that you were still high on cloud nine from his advances. “No matter how much I cum on his face he continues to devour me down there….ah…ah….. he's such an animal…..but it's not bad…..not bad at all…..he makes me….ah!” You think to yourself as you're slowly slipping deeper into cloud 9.

He goes on for what seems like hours until finally in just a matter of minutes he finishes eating you out. He licked and sucked on his fingers tasting your sweet nectar.

“You don't taste half bad bunny.” he chuckles as he looks at you like a wolf looking at its prey. You smile and you get up and push him down on the futon and you kiss him passionately. You pull back and strands of saliva come out of your mouths.

He stands up and he slaps his cock on your face. “you're going to eat it! So open wide bunny!” Cackled Raian with lunatic laughter.

Without hesitation he thrusts his cock deep into your throat. “Glk! Glk! Glk! Glk! Gllkk!” Was all the noise that came out of you as you gagged and choked on his cock.

It didn't look like he would slow down anytime soon. He thrusted erratically in your mouth. Tears streamed down your cheeks as Raian didn't let up on his thrusts.

“Mph! Mmmph! Glk! Glk! Glk! Gllkk!” You hummed softly and gagged and choked even louder as he continued to thrust into your mouth violently.

Your vision was getting blurry, you felt like you were going to faint but your inner self was too stubborn to lose your consciousness so you pulled through.

Soon Raian cums deep inside of your throat. “Swallow it whole! I'm not taking my dick out of your mouth until you swallow all of my jizz!” He continues to laugh psychotically.

You gulp down every last drop of his cum. He finally pulls out his cock from out of your mouth as it dripped with your saliva and some of his precum.

Raian then grabs a fist full of your hair and pulls on it to make you stand up. he inserts his cock from behind you all the way and he fucks you aggressively.

You're on your tippie toes standing on his feet as he continues to thrusts into you senseless. “Ah….ah….ah….ah!” You moan louder in ecstasy. Moments later Raian’s softening cock releases bucket loads of hot cum deep inside of you, making you gasp and whimper softly as his cum leaked out of you while he was still buried inside of you making a puddle underneath your feet.

Raian takes out a small compact and opens it with one hand taking out a blue pill. He shoves it in your mouth.

“Mm! What's that?” You asked a bit taken aback.

“It's so you won't bear my heir….I ain't ready yet.” He growled in your ear. It was late already and you were exhausted. He laid on the futon and you laid on top of him snuggling up against him.

His hands were behind his head as he just looked up at the ceiling not saying anything nor wrapping his arms around you but he didn't push you away either.

You sigh softly as your sweaty bodies stick together. You snore lightly and go into a deep slumber. The next morning, you wake up and you find that you're by yourself in the room again. There's a knock at the door and a few women along with Fusui come in and you hide yourself under the blankets because you're still naked.

“What the heck is going on here?” You asked confused.

“Well….you survived the ritual and grandfather has ordered for you to be taken care of.” Replied Fusui with a bright grin.

“The thing is…Raian ripped off my clothes so…. I'm naked….. underneath the blanket.” You say a little embarrassed and very sore from last night's session.

“That's alright! We knew something like this might happen so we prepared you a bath next door. And don't worry there's a secret door in here that leads to the bathroom next door.” Fusui says calmly as she and the other woman take you to the bathroom next door.

“Sorry I'm a little sore from last night.” You say with a small smile.

“It's alright.” Says Fusui as she helped you get to the next room along with the other women.

A few minutes later you're in the bathtub getting washed from head to toe by all of the women there. It was as if they were pampering you.

It kind of felt nice but you really felt awkward at the same time. They soon blow dried your locks, they helped you out on a beautiful pink and white kimono with cherry blossom petals on the bottom that hugged your hourglass figure perfectly. They styled your hair into a beautiful updo putting a beautiful flower hairpin as decoration for your hair.

“That hairpin used to belong to my mother. So think of it as a present from me to you. Okay. So please take good care of it.” Said Fusui with a sad smile.

“But I couldn't-I shouldn't-” but no matter how much you refused and tried to give the pin back to her she insisted on you keeping it.

They put a little makeup on you and you were finally done. When you came out everyone gawked at you. You looked like a goddess even if your look was just simple.

“Well I'll be…Raian found himself a quite divine beauty….hmmm…..but that still doesn't explain why he chose her.” Thought Erioh to himself.

All of the men blushed and swallowed hard as they kept eyeing you. They too wondered how Raian hit the jackpot.

You wondered where Raian was. You were so exhausted last night that your soreness was starting to hit harder. You were trying your very best to not show weakness. Suddenly Erioh Kure the head of the Kure Clan approached you and you bowed to him respectfully.

“Such a beautiful woman that Raian has found himself. I apologize for my grandson's general way of thinking. Lets have some tea in the garden shall we?” Replied Erioh with a smile.

You only nodded your head a s followed behind him.

To be continued: ..........

The unforgotten night

Ohma Tokita Part 1

Tokita Ohma x gn reader|smut|fluff|

⚠️18+ content/smut/NSFW⚠️

Warnings: swearing, cream pie, mentions of soreness, one night stand, tears, f oral, m oral, dominant, a few positions, drunk,

Okay so this is my first written smut. I love this series so much. Anyways I hope you enjoy.

18+ only Minors DNI

After Ohma's fight with Inaba ended with Ohma coming out victorious in battle, you, Ohma, Kaede, Kazuo, and Lihito went to one of the restaurants on the island where Kazuo Yamashita ordered lots of victory meat for Ohma.

Lihito and Ohma sat on either side of you at the table. Ohma scarfed his meat down. He looked up at you with slate gray eyes as he watched you drink your beer slowly. "Hey y/n...so uh...are you single." Asked Lihito with a cheeky grin.

But before you could answer Kaede stepped in. "Lihito...stop trying already....you got rejected yesterday what makes you think she would say yes to you today....besides... some else already has his eyes set on her. If I were you I would stop now before he loses his temper." Replied Kade with an indifferent glare.

"Pfft! Like I'm scared of the guy who wants her too! Who is he anyway why don't we settle this with-"

"Um Lihito.....sorry but I'm not interested......." You say with a sheepish smile as you continue to eat your meat.

Lihito just sighed and he ate his food in silence. Ohma just grinned smugly as he knew that he was victorious once again.

Kazuo decided to break the tension by making a toast to Ohma's win against Inaba. "Ohma.....did you get yourself looked at.....you have scratches on your face." You say with a calm demeanor.

"I'm fine..... it's nothing life threatening y/n." Replies Ohma with a slight smile.

You blushed as Ohma smiled at you so you turned away quickly drinking your beer fast. Ohma only chuckled softly as he noticed your red face. Everyone drank to their content until you couldn't handle it anymore.

You laid your head on Ohma's shoulder already to your limit with your liquor. You laughed softly and snuggled on his shoulder unaware of what you were doing because you were wasted. Ohma chuckles softly once more as he caresses the top of your head.

Kade soon walks away with Kazuo to help him take a drunk Lihito back to his room leaving you and Ohma alone together.

"Ohma......Hic-up!" You laugh with joy. Ohma looked at you with a gentle look, He thought your flirtatious side was cute. But what got him the most was the way you would look at him with such longing and desire in your eyes.

He soon picks you up bridal style and he takes you back to your room. You begin to to shower his lips with small kisses. Ohma just chuckles with amusement.

"Mmm...Muah....Muah..." You giggled with joy as you kissed while he carried you back to your room.

Ohma continued to chuckle as seemed to enjoy this affectionate side of you. The two of you don't make it inside of your room yet and he sets you down in front of your room to which he pushes you up against the door as your lips crash against his. Ohma presses his body against yours kissing you deeply.

"Mmm...." You moan into his mouth as the two to you continue to kiss with so much passion. Ohma cups your chin as he slides his tongue inside of your mouth exploring your mouth.

"Mmm....Ohma....ah.." you moan softly.

Ohma's hands begin to caress every inch of your body. Ohma slides his hands underneath your shirt and he begins to knead your breast gently. "Ah.......Ohma......mmm." but Ohma didn't let you utter another word as he continued to firmly kiss you.

"these are mine." He says while he squeezed your tits whilst pinching them playfully.

"Ah.....Please.....lets go inside....to do this..... someone might see us....." You say with a shaky quiet voice.

Ohma licks your lips his eyes full of lust as he then kisses you once again deeply. You continued to whimper softly. "These soft lips of yours....are mine." He sensually whispers in your ear.

"Hurry up and open the door....." Spoke Ohma with a hoarse voice while biting your bottom lip.

You gasp softly and moan. "Ohma-"

"Open the door....." He says in low husky whisper as he gives her a sly peraly white smirk.

You nod your head slowly and you get your hotel key out and open the door. As soon as the two of you got inside Ohma slipped off his shirt. You can see his huge member bulging and twitching inside of his sweat pants.

Without warning he slides off your shirt and your bottoms leaving you with just your black and red lace lingerie.

He pushes you down on the bed where he then rips off your lingerie towering over you yearning for you.

Ohma slides off his bottoms revealing his huge bulge. He gets in between your legs and he begins to lick your neck and bite down hard on it. "Ah.....ah..." You let out a small moan.

Ohma trails his kisses to your collarbone. he licks your collarbone where bites down hard on it as well, making you arch your back and lean your head back pleasure.

Ohma begins to suck on your breasts. He suckles and licks on your right nipple as he then bites down on it hard while you squirm underneath him. "Ah! Ohma!." Ohma only chuckles at your reaction.

His kisses continue to trail down your stomach to your lower abdomen. "Ohma! Wait! Wait! Not there! I'll lose my mind if you go down there! " You say already blushing crimson red feeling a little shy.

He licks your left inner thigh and then he bites down on it hard leaving a purple mark on it as well. Your neck, your chest, and your lower abdomen had a couple of hickeys however that didn't matter to you seeing as he was just marking his property.

Your legs rested on his shoulders while your feet were pointed on his back your toes coiled , your legs twitch as he begins to orally stimulate you.

"mph.....oh ......oh.....ah...." You continue to lean your head back on your pillow gripping the sides of it tightly as you begin to breathe heavily.

You look at him as he continues to eat you out. You can hear him sucking and slurping his nose digging deeper inside making you shiver and trembling with pleasure.

"Oh God......ah....he's so good at this." You think to yourself as you bite down on your bottom lip to hold back loud moans.

Your hips begin to buck on their own as Ohma begins to pump two of his fingers in and out of your cunt while he continues to lick your clit. You desperately grabbed on to his head gripping his hair tightly.

"Ah......Ah..... AH! AH FUCK!" You moan louder forgetting about the fact that Kaede's room is next door to yours.

Ohma smirked in amusement as he continued to lick you p****, he liked the way you reacted while he continues to suck you senseless while pumping two fingers in and out of you.

"ooh.....ooh....Ohma.." you whimpered his name softly. Your body trembled and twitched with pleasure as Ohma dug his face deeper devouring you senseless.

It got to the point where you couldn't take it anymore. You were getting close to your orgasm. "Ohma! I'm cumming! Oh God!" Your whimpers continued to get louder, you buck your hips faster gripping his hair tighter. You moaned louder and breathed heavier.

"AH! AH! AH! AH! AHH!!!!" You finally reached your climax exploding your sweet nectar all over Ohma's face.

He pulls away from your c****, licking his lips tasting your sweet nectar. You lay on the bed trying to catch your breath covering your face with your arms. Your hair is messy and wet from the sweat. Ohma grins playfully as he wipes his face with his forearm. "You tasted good ..... Just as I expected." He replied with a small chuckle.

He crawls onto the bed and he towers over you again. His huge bulged shaft rubbed against your p****.

"O-Ohma...." You gasp softly as you grab on to his shoulders tightly.

"No matter how much you moan, scream, and yell ....I won't stop." Replied Ohma with a guttural whisper.

You only nodded your head as you looked up at him biting your lower lip in anticipation.

To be continued

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THE UNFORGOTTEN NIGHT

OHMA TOKITA PART 2 Ohma Tokita x GN Reader Ohma Tokita Smut |⚠️ Warning: 18+| Smut| Fluff| Explicit| ⚠️| Explicit content: |cream pie| on

Part 2 is up⬆️

Let's Scare Your Readers!

Combine the techniques below with the techniques for building suspense to give your readers a palm-sweating sensation!

Darkness

If absolute darkness doesn't make sense in your story, aim for semi-darkness: dusk, a single lantern/candle, heavily curtained windows, a thick canopy of trees, etc. Flickering lights that create confusing shadows can also be effective.

Let the darkness pool gradually around your MC. Show the night or fog rolling in, the camp-fire subsiding, or the candles burn down one by one.

Examples:

The candle sputtered. The light wavered.

The lamp cast its smoky light on the brick walls.

The night was silent, but for the dry rustling of leaves as the wind whispered through the trees.

Sound

Of all the senses, the sense of hearing serves best to create excitement and fear.

the clacking of the villain's boots on the floor tiles, the ticking of the wall clock, a dog barking outside, the roaring of a distant motor, a door slamming somewhere in the house, water dripping from the ceiling, the chair squeaking, the whine of the dentist's drill, the scraping of the knife on a whetstone, a faraway siren wailing the heroine's own heartbeat thudding in her ears.

When the surroundings are dark, your MC will grow to be more aware of the surrounding noise, even if it's not relevant to the plot.

Chill

Make it uncomfortably cold for the MC, and your readers will shiver with them.

powercut cutting off the heating, nightfall naturally bringing in lower temperatures.

winter, evening, a cool breeze that chills everything, survivors running our of fuel, the ceiling fan is over-active, stone builindg/caves/sbuterranean chambers tend to be cold.

Describe how the cold pinpricks the MC's skin, stunting their thinking and making them shiver.

The opposite can also be effective: turn up the temperature using a stove, an overheated motor, or the sweltering sun to make the MC sweat.

Isolation

This is a common technique: let the MC face the monster alone with no external help. It's also easier to limit the resources and escape routes available for the MC.

an abandoned factory, remote mountaintop, the depth of an unexplored cave.

It can also be more everyday locations: a construction site, the sewer, a malfunctioning bathroom.

Meet the Monster

When describing the threat, spread out your descriptions so that (1) the scene has constant action (2) you have material to build up later.

Good details to show:

hands, fingers, nails, talons, claws

the sound of the voice, growl, roar

the smile, teeth

the texture of skin, fur, scales.

Get Visceral

Never tell your readers that the MC is scared. Describe the fright using these physical effects:

the skin crawling, breath stalling, scalp pricking, clenching of the chest, stomach curling, heart thudding, sweat tricking down, clogged throat, pulse in the ears, cold sweat, chills up/down the spine, stomach knotting, breathless, etc.

The Gory Bits

Instead of describing everything, limit yourself to particular details, keeping overall description short. Non-stop gore doesn't shock - its bores.

Create a contrast: the child's mutilated corpse still clutches the doll. The brains from the baby's plt skull spill across the fluffy pink blanket.

Use similes, comparing gruesome buts to something from ordinary life. The intestines look like spaghetti in tomato sauce. The blood spilling from the mouth looks like lipstick.

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