Lowkey A Mood But Also Sad That I Didnt Get To Outline ): Still 5 Hours Left Tho?? So Mb Not Too Late

lowkey a mood 😌✨ but also sad that I didn’t get to outline ): still 5 hours left tho?? So mb not too late hehe

another day, another waste. periodddddtttt 💅🏻✨👑👄

Hold up. Same Anon again. Sry I haven’t read right. Just leave Andy behind

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I think I’m a bit confused 🤔 I’m part three your said the baby dies but she’s still pregnant🤔 maybe I missed something

😅 first off, sorry if you’re confused! lmk where I messed up and I’ll fix the part where it says she’s pregnant, bc she’s definitely not. the baby didn’t make it and she’s currently not pregnant rn.

maybe you’re reading scenes where she reflects on how the baby kept her going / how ari initially changed his attitude towards her bc she was pregnant back then?

the fact that hoax pt. 2 has overall less interaction than hoax pt. 3 is funny to me bc then part two gives such middle child vibes

Was ari surprised that the reader was a virgin or did he already knew?

ari was definitely surprised. he hates that family so much and viewed reader as such a villain (sharon plays a role in this) that he placed a million stereotypes on her. so yeah, uhhh i don't have much to elaborate on haha.

currently watching brandon sanderson's lectures from his byu 2020 tips on how to outline / plot fantasy and it's so, so good. honestly highly recommend for anyone who's in the plotting stage!