Sebastian Looking At Some Bs In My Math Notes.

Sebastian looking at some bs in my math notes.

So next up on my The Masked Queen rewrite, we have Hannah!

So Hannah has had a bit of an overhaul, with not even her original name being kept. I wanted her to stand out as more of a social chameleon that pretends to be a social butterfly, mimicking how the other girls at school dress, talk, behave, etc.

She’s still Evan’s childhood friend, so there’s still the fun ~ twist~ at the end of the story. However, instead of the two being best friends and extremely close like how they were in the original story, in the rewrite they will have grown apart a little, hanging out in different circles and only interacting outside of school. There’s a reason for that… but we’ll save that for later~. But just like in the original story, once Evan starts investigating things, she’ll team up with him.

I’m also planning to dive a little bit more into her backstory, which should be very fun~. Tbh, out of all the characters, I’m the most excited to rewrite her. I was never 100% satisfied with how I did Hannah’s character, and I can’t wait to finally do her justice.

A little side-view of Chloe!

10/10, toots!

It’s time for the bitch, Rachel

She’s a bitch. She will always be a bitch. Literally the only thing I changed about her is her name lol-

Rachel is Evan’s bully, and while this was briefly implied in the original story, but I really want to go into it in the rewrite. This will become especially important once Rachel’s… well, killed. Because this leaves Evan conflicted. But he knows The Masked Queen is involved, and that Rachel didn’t deserve to die… right?

I’m still going to keep her bitchy attitude towards Mackenzie’s disappearance. For those that don’t know: When Mackenzie disappears ( well, dies in the original story) Rachel thrives, enjoying all the attention being on her as “ Mackenzie’s poor bff”. Mackenzie and Rachel had a very toxic relationship, with Mackenzie constantly putting Rachel down and Rachel talking shit behind her back/ spreading rumors. Needless to say, when Mackenzie is gone, Rachel barely blinks.

Now, while Mackenzie was rude due to her indifference, Rachel is straight up cruel. She will do everything in her power to make your life a living hell, ripping you apart from your deepest fears and insecurities. Due to this behavior… she makes a lot of enemies. Including The Masked Queen.

Meet

The Empress

The owner of the Solar Spire Casino and Resort and Las Vegas’ major crime lord, for as infamous as she is- unless you’re involved with her crime syndicate- no one knows anything about her. She stands as a mysterious figure, trying to keep to the shadows as she runs her “ empire”.

She isn’t Zephyr and Atlas’ bio mom, but she’s raised them as if they were her own… her own personal weapons, that is. The Empress has never seen them as children, but rather as two people she can mold to do her bidding.

She has always favored Zephyr, as he was the stronger of the twins. So when Zephyr threatened to run away, she punished him severely, then gave him a sliver of mercy by letting him leave the Solar Spire… as long as he works for her as her personal assassin. Once Zephyr was further from her reach, she turned her attention to Atlas, who was craving the moment his mother finally gave him the attention he deserved.

Time has passed, and now The Empress his faces with a problem: a young detective known for sniffing out crime lords. But it shouldn’t be an issue, since she has Zephyr to eliminate the problem, right?