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Please I Need That Extended Ellie Killing Joel Scene

Please I need that extended Ellie killing Joel scene šŸ™

Youā€™re wish is my commandšŸ”Ŗā¤ļøšŸ”„

There are two versions of this. The first one that I rewrote for the fanfic before finishing the final chapter and an alternate version I wrote after it was done.

TW: Written Graphic Violence

Please I Need That Extended Ellie Killing Joel Scene
Please I Need That Extended Ellie Killing Joel Scene

The reason I changed the first one was because of three reasons.

1: I came up with the 3 bullet idea later into writing, after I had written it, and I thought it was better than just a random amount.

2: With what happens right after, I didnā€™t want it to feel contrived. Like, she couldnā€™t run out, because then what happens next wouldnā€™t be able to happen, but I wasnā€™t sure that if she started shooting, sheā€™d stop for a reason other than a new threat or running out of bullets. It just felt weird to stop randomly.

3: I donā€™t think thatā€™s how physics works??

And the reason I didnā€™t use the alternate version, even though I was pretty proud of the writing was that I thought the image of Ellie trapped under the corpse would be more impactful generally. A little more bleak and sad and fit with the story a bit more.

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