So I Have A Second Original Story That I'm, In My Head, Calling It "the Better Warrior Cats" Because
So I have a second original story that I'm, in my head, calling it "the better Warrior Cats" because it's about cats who live in groups and it doesn't have a name
I'm testing the waters to see if this is something other people would like to see
The main character is a cat called Amethyst. She's basically my version of Firestar. She's a ginger cat and comes from outside of the main cat group (however they live far away from humans, so she's not a house cat)
She joins the cat group, but instead of becoming a warrior (or my version of warriors, the role has a different name), she becomes essentially an oracle. It's like a Firestar medicine cat AU but with different characters
Her mentor is the grumpy older cat who gets a prophecy vision about a ginger cat. this character is called Greysight and he's like a healthy mix of Bluestar and Yellowfang
Her best friend is a goofy class clown who is the first to meet her outside of the cat group. This character is named Apricot and she's sort of based on Graystripe and in some cases I added a dash of Ravenpaw and I also sort of added a bit of Sandstorm in the way that she ends up the love interest and her mentor is a very important cat in the cat group (Whitestorm equivalent)
There's no Tigerstar 1 equivalent due to the plot following more of a Broken Code idea but with less possession and lore retcons
I'm also ensuring that ALL of the cat groups are culturally different! The main one has more of a WindClan circa Tallstar's Revenge vibe and there's another one that's super-duper ultra religious. One is kind of like firefighters, basically, but also a healthy mix of what ThunderClan and SkyClan were allegedly supposed to be like. And another one is basically RiverClan but also mixed with arc 1 ShadowClan but also not? Idk how to describe them, honestly, aside from "water and sometimes evil"
The ancestors are also going to have clear rules and limitations. I want them to be more like arc 1 StarClan but even more mysterious and weird
I'm also going to write out the whole code they live by before I start going willy nilly with mentioning the rules because damn do the Erins need to remember their own lore
I'm also going to add new roles that young cats can aspire to be aside from leader-deputy-medicine cat. I'm also separating the medicine cat role into two roles (similar to how Possumbreath does in their own story centered around their OCs)
Also the naming system is going to change a bit to make sure I don't completely copy their system, lol
Anyways, I have ref sheets for Amethyst and Apricot already done, so I might end up posting about this story anyways, but I just wanted to see what people think
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Old man! /gender neutral
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Oh godddddd 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
He's being so sweet to the kid who's training with him waahhhhhhhh
He's such a great big brother wahhhhhhhhh
Taking care of the poor lynx kid while he's sick and giving him his own meal to make sure he gets better wahhhhhh
*this post was written while watching "Totosai's Rigid Training"
Watching Inuyasha again (I never finished it but it's technically a rewatch where I am), and I think Inuyasha (the character) would make a good big brother
I mean, the way he treats Sota (Kagome's younger brother) is SO big brother coded. PLEASE tell me I'm not the only one who thinks this
*this post was written after watching "Terror of the Ancient Noh Mask"
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I mean, the man's blind and probably has ADHD (i'm projecting) so he doesn't pay attention to how the words turn out, he just types and sends shit as soon as he's done
also, he's a chronic 'teh' user instead of 'the' because I say so
no I am not projecting my mistyping onto him, I am telling the truth.
my source is trust me
More info on my AU :)
Sunset Shimmer got her degree at the same time as Twilight and recently got her license to practice medicine
Trixie changed her last name to Lulamoon to distance herself from her family... and cuz it's a better stage name than 'von Gemhouser'
Empress Amore, Queen Celestia and Princess Luna's dad is Starswirl the Bearded, who disappeared a couple thousand years before Celestia became Queen
Amore, Celestia and Luna's mom was called Supernova and she had dominion over the stars and deep space as well as being the first queen of Equestria
Celestia sent Luna to the moon due to a vision she had of Luna being evil, which led to Luna becoming the very thing Celestia feared
Celestia spun the tale of Nightmare Moon to justify her actions
Luna became corrupted due to the sheer amount of magic on the moon (because prolonged magic exposure = corruption and/or insanity)
Blueblood is Cadance's older brother and was sent to Equestria when Emperor Sombra started trying to take over the Crystal Empire. Celestia took him in as her own when he arrived
Filthy Rich is the Mayor of Ponyville, therefore feeding into Diamond Tiara's ego
Chrysalis takes Shining Armor's place to feed off of Cadance's magic when hearing about the union between Cadance and Shining
Discord's statue was in Starlight’s village and he was worshipped as a god there
The magic Luna used to break free cracked Discord's prison and allowed for him to be fully set free when some kids were messing around with his statue
Starlight later claims that she can communicate with Discord after he was freed, therefore allowing the people to fall under her manipulation
Diamond Tiara thinks she's better than the CMC because Sweetiebelle's got a stage magician older sister (disgrace), Scootaloo's parents don't care about her and she's got deformed wigs, and Apple Bloom is just lower class
Apple Bloom gets into a lot of fights due to DT's bullying
Scootaloo's parents honestly didn't want her but kept her to make them look better
Scootaloo is sometimes forced to be a child actor when her parents are short on money
Fleur Dis Lis is Scootaloo's aunt who sends her nice gifts and stuff but never sees her cuz she has the same attitude of Scoots's parents
Alicorn = ascending to royalty. Very rare for an alicorn to be born
The Castle of the Three Sisters was where Supernova sent her kids when she didn't want to deal with them
Pinkie's dad and Mr. Cake are brothers
Changelings in their unpurified form need magic to survive. To purify, they need to show the capacity to care about things beneath them and those around them
Cheese Sandwich is a comedian and sometimes he and Pinkie perform together
Zecora is from over the sea and was once a diplomat. Now she just lives here
Cloudsdale and Ponyville are trade partners
Bright Mac & Pear Butter (AJ's parents) died in a Bug Bear attack
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Big Mac & his wife, Sugar Belle, are the heads of the Apple Farm now that Granny Smith is getting older
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Sunset and Sunburst are siblings (Sunburst is older)
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Uhh yeah. Sorry this is all over the place. I'll probably have more info to come in later reblogs
Compiling all the little details for my MLP AU (now named the Stars and Sun AU) in one post so that I can come back to it, add onto it and so on. Yay!
Dr. Twilight Sparkle is the head researcher and astrophysicist at the Canterlot School of Science and Magic at only 26 years old! Wow!
Spike, age 17, is Dr. Sparkle's only apprentice and closest confidant
Dr. Sparkle's relationship with her parents is messy, but she's very close to her brother, Shining Armor (who is a diplomat)
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Spike's family used to live in the Dragon lands but moved to Canterlot when he was a baby
Spike is very proficient at magic, hence why he is allowed to be Twilight's apprentice
Apple Jack is the sheriff of Ponyville and main apple cider brewer in town
AJ and Pinkie's moms are cousins
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Rainbow Dash is the deputy sheriff of Ponyville and local daredevil
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