Trying To Look Back And Add/fix Some Writing For The Coffee Because I've Gotten Better At Characterization.

Trying to look back and add/fix some writing for The Coffee because I've gotten better at characterization.

Probably gonna fix the first chapter since it comes off as preachy and I feel like Sylvia would be more worried about Wander leaving the "happy to be single" club over him screwing up a relationship; she KNOWS those two are obsessed with each other. Also gonna dial back on the whole "Wander being downtrodden" to make him worried about the cut contact instead.

Other stuff to note about the series since I'm probably not gonna go back and rewrite old episodes (at least for a while):

- Female Watchdogs have apparently always existed on the ship, so that whole equality segment is trashed

- Hater's backstory changed a bit; the ID number name he had isn't accurate anymore since NASA chimps were named before launch. I'm keeping the whole "remembering being a chimpanzee" thing but I'm going to make it so that it's a lot blurrier for him and he just can't remember/doesn't like his old name.

- Any attempt at a play on words like a "kerson/keyson" in the first chapter is something I hope people completely disregard because it sucks... Sorry!

- Similar apologies for any preachy bullshit, I've gotta get better at the whole "show don't tell" thing

- Any future installment after The Coffee will be posted all at once instead of chapter-by-chapter because I tried that again for this installment and it's been a disaster.

Thank you for being patient with me! I'll try to get writing out as soon as I can, I've just been dealing with some sudden family deaths/depression. I'll post again soon! ;)

GOOD NEWS!

The fansub project is official DONE! All 100 episodes! Including UPDATED SUBS for the original 66 episodes with improved translations!!  (*Except the 3D special but I was gonna wait til I got a better quality video…)

So you can either watch em here: https://www.dailymotion.com/playlist/x7bmum  (apologies if there are ads, I can’t actually control em! I hear Firefox with Ublock origin can block em)

Or download em here!

Softsub MKV: https://mega.nz/folder/ql9CxZrD#Oe4-8NvmOzwmJP8Rt5b50w

EDIT: also on Internet Archive if Mega gives you trouble) https://archive.org/details/operation-hnk-kirby-of-the-stars-subbed-v-2

Hardsub M4V: https://mega.nz/folder/e4UlxaQT#gNrHnDaEeDLVs4ge9Rz4Hw

Or raw vids: https://mega.nz/folder/Lo0TWLyR#23nRRrFd5iCpIRpMATrsKw

Please share this so more people can see! :D  We worked really hard on this so it’d be appreciated!

* Softsub means the subtitles aren’t ‘baked in’. This means higher quality video and you can modify the subtitles if needed. You’ll need a program like VLC or Media Player Classic to view them and they may not work on phones! Hardsubs are ‘baked in’ so you can view em, anywhere, but there is a slight reduction in video quality

Updated the first chapter! I've gotten back to working on the third, and again, thank you for your patience!

Howdy! I don't usually do this, but I decided to post the first two chapters of my fic early! Go ahead and check out the full series if you haven't already!

I working on other projects atm but I’ll be going back and cleaning this up later bc I love this scene so so much

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Alright, I was right to initially think there were no female watchdogs on the ship, that's still canon to the story now!

Referring to the comment I made on this post; Peepers has been proven to not be very sexist if at all, but he's not technically in charge. Hater is.

Even if he is the one deciding who gets let in, he still doesn't hire women because of Hater! It's not their fault, he just doesn't want Hater to be anymore distracted

"calm down son its just a drawing" no because I wont stand for this slander

original tweets from Craig

My stupid ass overthinking this because it made no sense to me