WORDS TO USE INSTEAD OF: CRY / CRIED / CRYING

WORDS TO USE INSTEAD OF: CRY / CRIED / CRYING

Do you ever find yourself over-using the word “cry” (or “cried” or “crying”) in your writing? Try using these words instead:

sob / sobbed / sobbing

wail / wailed / wailing

weep / wept / weeping

bawl / bawled / bawling

whimper / whimpered / whimpering

howl / howled / howling

blubber / blubbered / blubbering

snivel / sniveled / sniveling

squall / squalled / squalling

yelp / yelped / yelping

whine / whined / whining

shed tears / shed tears / shedding tears

burst into tears / burst into tears / bursting into tears

tear up / teared up / tearing up

choke up / choked up / choking up

well up / welled up / welling up

break down / broke down / breaking down

let it out / let it out / letting it out

turn on the waterworks / turned on the waterworks / turning on the waterworks

open the floodgates / opened the floodgates / opening the floodgates

AAA thank you so much for reading and leaving a review, my friend!!! i’m super happy to hear that you enjoyed reading and is excited for more <3

also omg yes i’ve tried to incorporate the structure of star wars, like you said with the way it jumps straight into action! so im glad to hear that it translates haha stitching in some of the structure of the movies is something i aim to do! and yes, the chancellor speaking like a true politician lol

again, thank you so much for reading and giving the chapter a review!!! i appreciate it greatly and am very grateful <33

attack on the jedi  ;  pjm ― ch. 1

SERIES MASTERLIST.

CHAPTER 1   ;   Destruction of Sheeua

SUMMARY: After landing on Coruscant, the determined Crown prince Jimin has a bone to pick with the Chancellor in office.

―  POV: jimin. ―  PAIRING: none. ―  RATING: m (18+), minors dni. ―  WORD COUNT: 3,610 words. ―  GENRE/AU: star wars au, sci-fi, fantasy, drama. ―  CONTENT WARNING: explosion, death - also specified parental death (minor character death), natural disaster, climate change, politics, refuge, heavy grief. 

TAGLIST: @pjmparadise​  ― if you wish to be added to the taglist, please send me an ask and i’ll add you.

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Desperate and aggressive, the young man takes longer strides than usual as he exits a smaller spaceship that escorted him there. He makes his way across the concrete landing pad, heading towards the entrance of the dome-shaped building towering over the citizens of Coruscant.

No more than a month ago he watched all that he held dear be obliterated, engulfed in the heat and power of the grand explosion. Confusion had ruffled the feathers of his mind, making him question why, why, why. But questions were worth nothing if not accompanied by answers, and so the newly orphaned Prince Jimin got up from his bed tainted with sorrow, and dedicated himself to what remained of his people. 

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WORDS TO USE INSTEAD OF: LAUGH / LAUGHED / LAUGHING

Do you ever find yourself over-using the verb “laugh” (or “laughed” or “laughing”) in your writing? Try using these words instead:

giggle / giggled / giggling

chuckle / chuckled / chuckling

snicker / snickered / snickering

cackle / cackled / cackling

guffaw / guffawed / guffawing

grin / grinned / grinning

titter / tittered / tittering

snort / snorted / snorting

chortle / chortled / chortling

howl / howled / howling

roar / roared / roaring

cachinnate / cachinnated / cachinnating

snigger / sniggered / sniggering

mock / mocked / mocking

crack up / cracked up / cracking up

bust a gut / busted a gut / busting a gut

in stitches / in stitches / in stitches

burst into laughter / burst into laughter / bursting into laughter

die of laughter / died of laughter / dying of laughter

split one’s sides / split one’s sides / splitting one’s sides

(NOTE: Keep in mind that all of these words have slightly different meanings and are associated with different emotions/scenarios.)

YOONGI! I AM FERAL THAT HE IS HOLDING HIS WHISKEY WHILE LISTENING AND THEN DRINKS IT 🧎‍♀️

i think it might actually be beer? but yes. he is very sexy. this is an unflattering cap bc i was assessing the liquid but even at an unflattering angle he still makes me anxioussssss. what a baaaabe!!!

does hybe just no longer give a shit who bts collabs with

attack on the jedi  ;  knj ― ch. 3

SERIES MASTERLIST.

CHAPTER 3   ;   The Conflict Within.

SUMMARY: After leaving Okiyano in fear, Namjoon is being called back to the space station for an exclusive meeting with his Master.

―  POV: namjoon. ―  PAIRING: none. ―  RATING: m (18+), minors dni. ―  WORD COUNT: 3,000 words. ―  GENRE/AU: star wars au, sci-fi, fantasy, drama. ―  CONTENT WARNING: mentions & short depiction of cheating, toxic and entitled mindset, themes of elitism, your general villainous assholery, childhood trauma of emotional neglect, insecurity and past wounds, a very quick sex scene.

TAGLIST: @pjmparadise​, @luaspersona​  ―  if you wish to be added to the taglist, please send me an ask and i’ll add you.

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More.

He wants more.

Like a seductive snake, darkness has clouded his mind and bathed every single thought in endless greed and an insatiable thirst for power. Ever since he first got a feel of the Force, he’s been addicted to it. How it’s buzzing in his skin, twisting and turning in his stomach, signalling to him when, where, why, and how to move, think, and feel. His senses are tingling, aching to reach out and take his place in this world. 

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