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LUAAAA. gosh you’re really being so sweet, thank you so much for writing your lil review here!!! you’ve literally been there through most of my endless brainstorming and listening to me ramble on and on about this hahah i’m so excited for how excited you are!!
i’m so glad you liked this opening crawl (teaser)!!!! i tried my very best to nail the right tone of writing, so i’m really glad you think i succeeded at that <3 omg i listened to john williams’ opening score so much while writing this LMAO
i am honestly so so so so excited to keep writing this and your excitement only pushes mine beyond words!! you’re really so kind omg i’m feeling so praised rn haha 😭😭
attack on the jedi ; ot7 ― teaser
SERIES MASTERLIST.
― POV: ot7. ― PAIRING: platonic ot7, later mxm pairing. ― RATING: m (18+), minors dni. ― WORD COUNT: 166 words. ― GENRE/AU: star wars au, sci-fi, fantasy, action, adventure. ― TEASER WARNING/S: explosion, death - also specified parental death, natural disaster, climate change.
CONTENT WARNINGS for the entire fic can be found in the series masterlist as well as more specified on each posted chapter.
TAGLIST: if you wish to be on this fic’s taglist, please either send me an ask or a dm, and i’ll add you <3
Troubled waters surround the Republic.
It has been four years since the tragedy of the planet Lohm Eq. After its lethal destruction, the uproar across the galaxy inevitably quieted down and what caused such devastation remains a mystery still.
That is until countless distress signals sent from the small planet of Sheeua ripped up old wounds from the past. Rescue operations were belated and insufficient. The once thriving planet ultimately gave in to the drastic overheating and exploded. More than half its population, including the King and Queen, were killed in the explosion and those successfully rescued are now scattered across the galaxy as refugees.
Among the survivors is Prince Jimin, who has just arrived at Coruscant to take his parents’ seat in the Galactic Senate.
Meanwhile, the Chancellor in office has received news of a third planet experiencing worrying climate change. He is now requesting help from the Jedi High Council with further investigation.
They assign this mission to the proficient Jedi knight Min Yoongi.
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AUTHOR’S NOTE: my utmost and sincerest thank you to @luaspersona, who has been my actual number one, like you fully listened to be rant and ramble on and on, you helped me brainstorm (even if i ended up coming back with something completely different lol) and you’ve showered me with confidence and interest when i’ve felt low <3 furthermore, big thank you to @kookimonster and @monvante for equally listening to my never-ending rambles, listening to me brainstorm and for encouraging me day after day to write this!!! also thank you to the beautiful people of @thebtswritersclub for answering all my (sometimes dumb) questions, however small. i am very grateful for y’all<3
BETA READER/S: @luaspersona, @kookimonster, & @monvante.
gosh.. i rarely receive feedback and absolute compliments on this level and i am gobsmacked! i’ve been reading this so many times and just pouted and squealed bc i’m so, so, so flattered!!! thank you so much for your kind words, i genuinely am feeling so happy and utterly praised hahah
i’m so glad you liked this chapter and i of course hope that you’ll come to like the following chapters equally as much!!! thank you so much for reading and reblogging with your review <33 i appreciate it tons.
my heart just grew a couple sizes reading what you had to say. i’ll treasure this for a long, long time. bet you this is what’s gonna fuel my continued writing haha
attack on the jedi ; pjm ― ch. 1
SERIES MASTERLIST.
CHAPTER 1 ; Destruction of Sheeua
SUMMARY: After landing on Coruscant, the determined Crown prince Jimin has a bone to pick with the Chancellor in office.
― POV: jimin. ― PAIRING: none. ― RATING: m (18+), minors dni. ― WORD COUNT: 3,610 words. ― GENRE/AU: star wars au, sci-fi, fantasy, drama. ― CONTENT WARNING: explosion, death - also specified parental death (minor character death), natural disaster, climate change, politics, refuge, heavy grief.
TAGLIST: @pjmparadise ― if you wish to be added to the taglist, please send me an ask and i’ll add you.
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Desperate and aggressive, the young man takes longer strides than usual as he exits a smaller spaceship that escorted him there. He makes his way across the concrete landing pad, heading towards the entrance of the dome-shaped building towering over the citizens of Coruscant.
No more than a month ago he watched all that he held dear be obliterated, engulfed in the heat and power of the grand explosion. Confusion had ruffled the feathers of his mind, making him question why, why, why. But questions were worth nothing if not accompanied by answers, and so the newly orphaned Prince Jimin got up from his bed tainted with sorrow, and dedicated himself to what remained of his people.
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AAA thank you so much for reading and leaving a review, my friend!!! i’m super happy to hear that you enjoyed reading and is excited for more <3
also omg yes i’ve tried to incorporate the structure of star wars, like you said with the way it jumps straight into action! so im glad to hear that it translates haha stitching in some of the structure of the movies is something i aim to do! and yes, the chancellor speaking like a true politician lol
again, thank you so much for reading and giving the chapter a review!!! i appreciate it greatly and am very grateful <33
attack on the jedi ; pjm ― ch. 1
SERIES MASTERLIST.
CHAPTER 1 ; Destruction of Sheeua
SUMMARY: After landing on Coruscant, the determined Crown prince Jimin has a bone to pick with the Chancellor in office.
― POV: jimin. ― PAIRING: none. ― RATING: m (18+), minors dni. ― WORD COUNT: 3,610 words. ― GENRE/AU: star wars au, sci-fi, fantasy, drama. ― CONTENT WARNING: explosion, death - also specified parental death (minor character death), natural disaster, climate change, politics, refuge, heavy grief.
TAGLIST: @pjmparadise ― if you wish to be added to the taglist, please send me an ask and i’ll add you.
vsualitae © 2023. all rights reserved.
Desperate and aggressive, the young man takes longer strides than usual as he exits a smaller spaceship that escorted him there. He makes his way across the concrete landing pad, heading towards the entrance of the dome-shaped building towering over the citizens of Coruscant.
No more than a month ago he watched all that he held dear be obliterated, engulfed in the heat and power of the grand explosion. Confusion had ruffled the feathers of his mind, making him question why, why, why. But questions were worth nothing if not accompanied by answers, and so the newly orphaned Prince Jimin got up from his bed tainted with sorrow, and dedicated himself to what remained of his people.
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