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AAA thank you so much for reading and leaving a review, my friend!!! i’m super happy to hear that you enjoyed reading and is excited for more <3

also omg yes i’ve tried to incorporate the structure of star wars, like you said with the way it jumps straight into action! so im glad to hear that it translates haha stitching in some of the structure of the movies is something i aim to do! and yes, the chancellor speaking like a true politician lol

again, thank you so much for reading and giving the chapter a review!!! i appreciate it greatly and am very grateful <33

attack on the jedi  ;  pjm ― ch. 1

SERIES MASTERLIST.

CHAPTER 1   ;   Destruction of Sheeua

SUMMARY: After landing on Coruscant, the determined Crown prince Jimin has a bone to pick with the Chancellor in office.

―  POV: jimin. ―  PAIRING: none. ―  RATING: m (18+), minors dni. ―  WORD COUNT: 3,610 words. ―  GENRE/AU: star wars au, sci-fi, fantasy, drama. ―  CONTENT WARNING: explosion, death - also specified parental death (minor character death), natural disaster, climate change, politics, refuge, heavy grief. 

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Desperate and aggressive, the young man takes longer strides than usual as he exits a smaller spaceship that escorted him there. He makes his way across the concrete landing pad, heading towards the entrance of the dome-shaped building towering over the citizens of Coruscant.

No more than a month ago he watched all that he held dear be obliterated, engulfed in the heat and power of the grand explosion. Confusion had ruffled the feathers of his mind, making him question why, why, why. But questions were worth nothing if not accompanied by answers, and so the newly orphaned Prince Jimin got up from his bed tainted with sorrow, and dedicated himself to what remained of his people. 

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WEBSITES FOR WRITERS {masterpost}

E.A. Deverell - FREE worksheets (characters, world building, narrator, etc.) and paid courses;

Hiveword - Helps to research any topic to write about (has other resources, too);

BetaBooks - Share your draft with your beta reader (can be more than one), and see where they stopped reading, their comments, etc.;

Charlotte Dillon - Research links;

Writing realistic injuries - The title is pretty self-explanatory: while writing about an injury, take a look at this useful website;

One Stop for Writers - You guys... this website has literally everything we need: a) Description thesaurus collection, b) Character builder, c) Story maps, d) Scene maps & timelines, e) World building surveys, f) Worksheets, f) Tutorials, and much more! Although it has a paid plan ($90/year | $50/6 months | $9/month), you can still get a 2-week FREE trial;

One Stop for Writers Roadmap - It has many tips for you, divided into three different topics: a) How to plan a story, b) How to write a story, c) How to revise a story. The best thing about this? It's FREE!

Story Structure Database - The Story Structure Database is an archive of books and movies, recording all their major plot points;

National Centre for Writing - FREE worksheets and writing courses. Has also paid courses;

Penguin Random House - Has some writing contests and great opportunities;

Crime Reads - Get inspired before writing a crime scene;

The Creative Academy for Writers - "Writers helping writers along every step of the path to publication." It's FREE and has ZOOM writing rooms;

Reedsy - "A trusted place to learn how to successfully publish your book" It has many tips, and tools (generators), contests, prompts lists, etc. FREE;

QueryTracker - Find agents for your books (personally, I've never used this before, but I thought I should feature it here);

Pacemaker - Track your goals (example: Write 50K words - then, everytime you write, you track the number of the words, and it will make a graphic for you with your progress). It's FREE but has a paid plan;

Save the Cat! - The blog of the most known storytelling method. You can find posts, sheets, a software (student discount - 70%), and other things;

I hope this is helpful for you!

(Also, check my gumroad store if you want to!)

50 WORDS TO USE INSTEAD OF “SAID”

Do you ever find yourself over-using the word “said” in your writing? Try using these words/phrases instead:

stated

commented

declared

spoke

responded

voiced

noted

uttered

iterated

explained

remarked

acknowledged

mentioned

announced

shouted

expressed

articulated

exclaimed

proclaimed

whispered

babbled

observed

deadpanned

joked

hinted

informed

coaxed

offered

cried

affirmed

vocalized

laughed

ordered

suggested

admitted

verbalized

indicated

confirmed

apologized

muttered

proposed

chatted

lied

rambled

talked

pointed out

blurted out

chimed in

brought up

wondered aloud

(NOTE: Keep in mind that all of these words have slightly different meanings and are associated with different emotions/scenarios.)

YOONGI! I AM FERAL THAT HE IS HOLDING HIS WHISKEY WHILE LISTENING AND THEN DRINKS IT 🧎‍♀️

i think it might actually be beer? but yes. he is very sexy. this is an unflattering cap bc i was assessing the liquid but even at an unflattering angle he still makes me anxioussssss. what a baaaabe!!!

Some Things I Wish I Knew as a Baby Writer

You can find writing advice of every shape and form online, and most of it will never fit your process entirely.

I wish someone had told me that it's ok to disagree with the advice you see, even if the person is more experienced than you.

I wish someone had told me that writing is part craft part art; there is no right way to build a fictional concept, only tried and tested ways to bring it to life.

I wish someone had told me that it's ok to fail.

So I'm telling all of you this:

Failure is a blessing because we can learn from it

Success is dangerous because it can make us complacent

The joy of creation outweighs the comfort of acclaim

Persistence matters more than talent in most cases

Writing as a hobby and writing as a job are two different beasts, neither is better or worse

The stories you hate most may be your best because they have tried you and frustrated you; we rarely see the beauty in our own faces - our writing is no different.

You deserve to love your stories, but it's not the only way to measure growth.

A list of winter aesthetics

Holding hands under blankets

Listening to old songs and letting them carry you to an another time

Owning a journal and filling it with your favourite moments of the season so you won't forget about them because they will become moments from your past one day so they are important

Picking up a random book from your dusty shelf and daring to finish it

Covering yourself with tones of clothes from head to toe

Sleepovers with friends

Having lunch dates with friends in their car while the rain is pouring outside

Hydrating and moisturizing

Drawing symbols on the windows covered with humidity

Spending your free time napping or getting cozy under your blankets while watching your favorite movie

Making handmade cards then sending them to your dearest people

Rescuing stray cats and giving them shelter

Romanticizing your life by thinking that everything you do is worth the care and admiration

Reading, reading and reading

Going to art exhibitions of artists you've never heard of

Long walks alone or with your friends and making up back stories for people you see on the street

Waking up early than usual when the world is still asleep

Listening to some playlists made by strangers on the internet

The agreeable warmth of your cocoa cup between your hands

Feeling the delicate coldness of the snowflakes on your skin