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A/N: This can also include Jason Todd as Robin and Arkham Knight, but this is in general more Red Hood oriented as that is his main alias. Batman: Wayne Family Adventures and comic book versions of Jason are the main inspirations for his character but all are welcome to imagine whichever version they like.
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Kissing In Between Pages
Pairing(s): x Fem Reader
Reading with Jason ends with some kisses and nosy siblings.
Content: Fluff, romance, established relationship, romantic gestures, romantic Jason Todd, soft Jason Todd, smitten Jason Todd, flirty Jason Todd, flirting, declarations of love, Jason Todd-centric, Jason Todd feels, Jason Todd is a Batfamily member, Reader is a Batfamily member, cuddling/snuggling, nosy Batfamily, napping.
Warnings: None.
Under the Christmas Lights
Pairing(s): x Fem Reader
You and Jason share a moment in Wayne Manor surrounded by lights and the festive season.
Content: Fluff, romance, established relationship, slow dancing, Christmas Special, soft Jason Todd, smitten Jason Todd, romantic Jason Todd, Jason Todd-centric, Jason Todd feels, Jason Todd is a Batfamily member, Reader is a Batfamily member, Wayne Manor, poetry, love poems.
Warnings: Mild language.
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Springās Touch
A/N: 50-ieth post of this blog. Thank you all for 200+ followers. I hope you may continue enjoying more of my stories.
Fandom(s): Persona 3
P3 Male Protagonist x Fem Reader
Summary: You spend some time resting under a tree, just enjoying springās warmth. Having your quiet leader by your side makes it even better.
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Content: Fluff, romance, established relationship, napping, sleeping, reading, ArsĆØne Lupin reference, comfort, no hurt comfort.
Warnings: None.
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Your eyes are closed as your mind drifts off, basking in the gentle breeze. The lap your head is lying on is warm, including the hand that is gently caressing your hair, brushing any invading strand away.
Minato is holding a book with one hand, focusing on its contents as his earphones play his music. Thereās a relaxed expression on the blue haired teenās face. It may not be so noticeable for people who donāt know him well, but you can easily spot such a visage.
With a sigh you turn to face him, a single cheek pressing his thighs. Slowly opening your gaze, your tired eyes naturally look up to see the blue haired male in all his glory. You canāt help but admire his current state, where he wasnāt burdened by his endless tasks.
āMinato..?ā you softly murmur, voice drowsy.
His eyes calmly went over to you, still just as at peace as when he was zoned in on his own world. Minatoās hand doesnāt stop petting your head.
āCan you read to me a little bit?ā
A small smile spreads his lips, gaze soft. As much as he wasnāt a talker unless necessary, he was easily swayed for you.
āAll right.ā nodded Minato. āThen Iāll start where I left off?ā
āThatās fine.ā you lazily beam at him, eyes getting ready to close again.
āāIt was indeed, the famous necklace, the legendary necklace that Bohmer and Bassengeā¦āā
Minatoās mellow tone continues to ring in the air, returning you to your peaceful slumber.
Hello. Sorry for my late response, iāve been quite sick recently and just didnāt have the energy. Anyways, as for my writing blog I am not focused on one fandom for the most part. I like fluff bc itās easy and i donāt mind angst. Though since i like writing hcs the most idc what im writing. I suppose if the form is easy everything else comes together. But my personal favourite is hurt/comfort (reader giving, character receiving) and some good bittersweet romance. I guess that's mostly bc I like writing for my faves and I can't see them in a 100% healthy relationships for the most part, at least when canon takes place. That has me curious - what relationship dynamics do you like to write? And what tropes do you like your x readers to fall into?
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Well Iām making a late response myself, Iāve been busy caught up in other things. I definitely prefer writing healthy relationships. Iām not into the dark ones: manipulation, gaslighting, toxicity, etc, sure itās a part of real life but that doesnāt mean itās good or morally/ethically right for anyone.
And my tropes just tend to go with what I want to do, though writing a slow burn, for example, would be hard because I wouldnāt have that much patience. Iām not into the enemies-to-lovers and forced proximity trope. I like that my character list fits into the open minded category that doesnāt go against their personalities. The star-crossed lovers shtick isnāt my thing either, though I donāt mind the angst so long as thereās a happy ending, but Iām not sure I could pull off writing something like that smoothly. Thereās a lot of donātās here but itās a start of what I stand by.
ur opinion abt violet is pretty based ngl š she also striked me off as an iffy or obviously 'waifu' character
Thank you for a kindly worded opinion. I felt like I had to personally be prepared for any moment of an online cyber attack of toxic fans going crazy at me for these honest thoughts the moment I decided to post my rant. And I thought it would be a unique ice breaker for seeming like a distant-silent-writer-with-a-writer-blog to others.
I was even hesitant on doing so because of it, knowing that the Persona fan base is no different from any others, fan bases all have their meaner sides. But the more reasons I found out about her, and I found a lot, it just wouldnāt leave my head whenever I saw even a mention of her in Persona fan content. And with Persona coming to Xbox, PC, and Switch, I just felt like I had to let it out or itād give me a headache. It made me wonder why people love her so much when she has all these things about her that clash. Itās not like they were secrets. Theyāre literally in front of your face. I just had to let these opinions out and see if there was anyone at all whoād thought the same and I wasnāt alone thinking differently.
i have to be honest u were lowk one of the people who dug me deeper into the persona hole but like in a good way š i just really love ur writing
Thank you very much. I mean, I am an amateur writer and the most knowledge I have with literature were during my old school years from the smallest lessons in elementary to the big ones in high school. I also like to set up my posts to be pleasing while giving you enough information on what my works are about and whatās in it. Like the summary, warnings, and the banners above āKeep Readingā.
Hi hi! I'm back. I kind of shocked you took your time answering me, I'll be honest. I thought you'd just dismiss everything I said (specially with such a lengthy text). So thank you, really!
I'm going to answer you back as well, if you don't mind. And once again, I'm not attacking you, just giving you my honest opinion. And once again, I'll tackle your points in order.
- When I get my anxiety attacks and depressive episodes, I act just like Sumire on her slumps. Maybe that's why I can resonate so much with her on those first ranks. Maybe it's a difference in our life experiences and how we tackled it? You think it's lackluster, I think it's subtle enough. And I agree with you on how she slowly was trying to regain herself but Maruki's actualization kept in check. I think that's how we got the little snippets of the real Sumire inside (the bento incident).
- I think the other athletes thought she had lost it and she was going crazy. In Japan, mental health issues is a real sensitive topic and people try to avoid "different" people. It may be a little graphic, but if you have time read about the Sagamihara stabbings. Also, that's the issue. Sumire had her Shiho. Her Eiko. It was Kasumi, and she lost her. And we, in fact, get to talk to her trainer twice so there's our "person in the area".
- About the phone: I don't think it was really broken, nor it was Kasumi's phone. It was Sumire's phone. The lag, the malfunctioning, it was all due to Maruki's interference. When she calls you and we get to listen to her first call ever, her voice is all Darth Vader like. Plus, Joker calls her Kasumi because Sumire carries Kasumi's student id, issued before her death. Joker being Joker and helping out is the reason we can reach the true Sumire. After all, if you don't advance her confidant you can't reach the Royal route.
- I think you're partially right on your point about the Phantom Thieves and their friendship. I do think their friendship get the usual flow: meet, persona time, join the team, funny banter. They like her, they are friends. But you're right, it isn't a rank 10 friendship between them. That's evident with the last cutscene. The gang joins up to help you get to the station, but she arrived there first? Why didn't she go with them? And what the fudge I HATE THAT SCENE. It's so lackluster for her character. A disservice.
- I think BOTH of her awakenings show a Spirit of Rebellion, yes. First time she's rebelling against common sense. About the fact she has to accent she isn't Kasumi and never will be. Hence, the dialogue about "these are the shoes that you chose". The second awakening, rebellion is against MARUKI'S SOCIETY. Remember, he had already changed the entire world at this point and he's saying "it's okay, you can keep on dreaming. Your pain will go away." At this time, she rejects this version of the world, thus finally embracing herself and achieving the "true glass slippers": her own self.
- About connection with the player, well, even with the new brief Haru scenes I still couldn't like her and her confidant. Both of them suffer a LOT by being the last kids on the bunch, and after you get her rank 5 there's not much else you can do together until Sumire becomes relevant again. Thinking about it, Akechi sometimes disappears as well aka you can't raise his confidant in some months. Now, about the goals, the only ones I think it can trully compare are Ann and Yusuke. She does decide to be an international model, but only AFTER you do her confidant. She wasn't serious before. It was a hobby. Ryuji goes back to track at the end of the game. Haru is busy with the company, but at the same time she always has time for you. She's always tending her garden. I don't know.
- Is she the only well known athlete? Yes!
Remember, the star of the school was Kamoshida and the volleyball team. After he confessed, Shujin's reputation was in shambles and only the Yoshizawa twin(s) were left. And about the dance... they did say they were busy/going home. And her dance is even after you have a romantic rendevouz with a love interest and Ryuji, so they really don't have a reason to stick in school.
- Giving you once again the point that Cendrillon (and her clothes for that matter) should have changed after her true awakening. Specially with the knowledge that Personas have the form of one's true psyche. And Cendrillon fits like a glove -- or, rather, a shoe -- in the themes. Your argument is that "[Cinderella] doesn't fight for a cause for other and themselves." That's true. But so doesn't Carmen. Or Milady. Or Captain Kidd. So what does a pirate, two femme fatales, a legendary thief, two vigilantes and fairy tale princess have in common?
They're all tricksters!
Yaldabaoth made two Main Trickers, Joker and Akechi. But the other personas are just as much tricksters as them. Milady is a femme fatale that doesn't have a clear side. Captain Kidd was a corsair. Robin Hood and Goemon stole from the rich to give to the poor. Arsene Lupin was a gallant thief and Zorro fought for his people.
Why is Cinderella/Cendrillon a trickster?
Because she disguised herself to go to the ball, so much so her family could recognize her. She TRICKED them and the prince, making him think she was noblity!
- The eating trope. I dind't mind it, but I read a lot of shounen. What made me cringe was the beach scenes, yukata scenes, fhe fanservice. But again, japanese game.
- Romance: You can avoid their romance, but Haru already loves you by the point you reach rank 9. And if you say you're only friends, she asks to be left alone and goes to her room. Plus on many moments on her confidant other people ask if you two are a thing or not. Other than her, I THINK Chihaya? She reads her cards? I don't know she's the second worst romance I rushed it.
- Getting new glasses for her dad deserves a rank? Yes because it's not about the glasses. It's about Sumire choosing something by herself. She was ready to leave that responsibility to Joker, but he gave her his moral support and she did get to choose it. She even lampshades it.
- When you like your therapist, you develop this bound in which they become kind of like your second family. You can talk anything to them. Maruki did say, at the beginning of the game, that she was a former patient of his, we get to see when and how he changed her cognition. And, remember, she was depressed because her sister had died and suddenly after only one t
visit she's all better. It's a miracle! He's THAT good! He helped her on her worst moment! Maruki is as important for her as Joker.
- Effect of her student status: in what way? I mean we saw how everyone acted before and after she started underperforming. Other students gossip she can take tests whenever, skip class all the time with no repercutions. I think it's enough. She's special. More explanation would go into exposition territory.
- About her processing about her twin death, I just thought about something reading your point. Maybe her recovery was fast because she was already processing the death. It IS a reach but, say. Sumire, pretending to be Kasumi, came to terms to her sister's death. Okay. Once Sumire went back, since she was already processing the loss, the shock went full on "wtf who am I really?" And I think most of her trauma came with the guilty that she contributed to her sister's death.
- What was Maruki doing? I think it's what we saw. He helped Rumi. Kept his research in secret while taking care of some patients. One of them was Sumire. She was a drastic case so he helped her. I don't think he helped more people at this time, and if he did, they were extreme cases like Rumi and Sumire. They were irrelevent, tho. Because they were like Rumi and Sumire. If he did help more people, they were unremarkable to him. Sumire was his second successful case. His Persona wasn't fully awakened yet, keep that in mind. He got the job at Shujin to keep an eye on Sumire while finishing his paper and keeping up with the kids.
- The blue butterfly: only the persona users could see it. And the party members did get invited to the Velvet Room and talked to both Lavenza and Igor, with the exceptions of Akechi (probably went before tho bc Yaldabaoth) and Sumire.
- She stalking him and the important job: Mona knew amd talked about it, so most likelly it was Phantom Thieves business. Why else would a talking cat care?
- But it was for the betterment of society and saving it from injustice. Maruki wanted the world to like by his rules, he had good intentions but his views were flawed, as seen by that part in his palace where you answered quizzes with what was right and wrong. Plus, remember, at first Sumire didn't agree with the Phantom Thieves changing hearts because she wishes for people to be able to solve their own problems by themselves. People should be able to stand on their own, without relying to a god, a group of teens or someone dictating their lives and take away the pain. Free will and struggle are too important for her, which is also a shock when you realize Maruki's meddling with her cognition. BTW I think this is also one of the moments where we can see, deep down, this is Sumire's view of the world. If she was only mimicking Kasumi, when we explored the palace she could have agreed to Maruki or wouldn't feel unconfortable on the quizz part. The question about "give up on your dream and get a new one" really hurt her.
- Marinette is a static character. Her views get challenged, she gets more roles (being the new guardian and everything) but at the end of the day she's still the same old Marinette. They even get TIME TRAVEL ffs Astruc. On the other hand, the Sumire from the start of the game is not the same from the end, the whole "stole identity act" aside. She gets braver, she stands up for herself and what's right, she finally can reach international competitions, comes to terms with her sister's demise and even gets her self confidence back.
OOF! DONE!
Sorry if I made any spelling mistake, english isn't my first language, it's 1 am over here and im tired.
Once again thank you if you took your time reading, I'm loving our talks.
NOTE: This will be my last post over this discussion as I will not be accepting messages regarding this debate topic anymore. My original post that led to these exchange of views was just meant for me to let these bubbling thought go, leaving it behind and moving on with my continuation for writing. An outlet. And while I appreciate the responses of different opinions, please understand and respect my choice that I am done with it and am moving on.
Your long discussion is something else, Iām impressed by you making an extended analysis and outlook. And itās kind of hard to dismiss a message from my inbox with such a lengthy text. I feel like Iām kinda overwhelmed seeing the time you take to message me again regarding the topic further. Though I have to admit that this subject has brought burnout for me, as I am brought to think about her again when I was going for moving on from her. But Iām not pointing fingers at you or anyone else. My opinion on her has hasnāt changed much, she is a poorly written character who is still my least favourite, but she had potential to be something if under the right circumstances.
Though I can see your point of view, I canāt help but diverge from them as well. There are gaps where we probably wonāt totally look at things about the character the same way, which I understand and mean no rudeness by it.
Also, thank you for the follow. Though Iām not sure if my regular posts would be appealing to you following me based on our discussion, considering I run a storytelling blog, aside from the inbox discussion which is not actually my preference to do on Tumblr. I thought the other debate would leave a different impression but Iām glad it didnāt.
Anyways, back to my point of view.
For the slumps, I suppose I just view them from the writing perspective for the most part. I can see it being subtle as well, but perhaps too subtle to the point where itās not elaborated enough for her story. I think Atlus shouldāve done more to link her connection with Maruki further, like her routinely going to his sessions so heād keep her cognition in check, more showy in being off putting if not, etc, since it felt like she stayed the same when acting as her sister until the reveal happened. Everyone has slumps, but herās canāt be different she is not introspective enough that thereās more to it then that. If she was more about the loss of her sister when acting as Kasumi then thereād be a reason for the difference in her slumps.
It makes sense for Japan to walk around topics from mental health as a country who thinks about it differently from others. Iām not going to put a label any more than that as these subjects are never to be defined by others as one thing or be something that everyone agrees on. I wouldnāt put Kasumi as being Sumireās Eiko or Shiho since I was actually meaning about her association currently instead of the past. Especially when we know more about those two unlike the real Kasumi. I would say she was more like Sae for the sister aspect, including the predictable similarities the Yoshizawas have with the Niijimas and the grief and loss of their father, and Futabaās mother Wakaba. Her trainer wouldnāt be quite the same as sheās only in Yoshizawaās life when itās about her training and classes but nothing so familial. When the real āperson in the areaā shouldāve been her parents after losing one of their kids. And their lack of involvement is disappointing. Her words spoken when choosing to battle Joker and Akechi show that she hadnāt accepted her sisterās death with healing and affirmation during the times she impersonated her. That is not how a person overcomes grief. Acting as a deceased loved one and ignoring the reality of it is not acceptance, itās avoidance and a coping method of blocking out the truth. Itās unhealthy. And her parents are pretty crappy because of how they respond to that situation. Her father makes only a rare appearance, they arenāt being constant figures in her life, and they let her parade around as Kasumi when they shouldāve sat her down and talked to her about what she is doing to herself and to them as a family. Sumireās cognition only affects her, so they know the truth. Itās not how anyone should go about loss and sorrow when it doesnāt resolve anything but a painful reminder. If they had bothered to care more about their daughterās situation and be more present and involved in her life, Sumire wouldnāt be so pushed to the edge of her inner struggles when she could talk to them about it. And a point that youāve mentioned on how people had distanced themselves from her is saying that, aside from her parents, coach, and obviously Joker and Maruki, there has apparently not been a single decent person at all in her life besides the obvious four where two are not around enough. This just proves that whatever so called bond she has with the thieves is so minuscule and inconsistent when she doesnāt even consider them. Theyāre the ones out of the other confidants of Joker that she interacts with, yet those interactions have no substance as she discredits them compared to Joker, who she only gives her real attention to when it shouldāve been in fair amounts in regards to having anyone decent in her life.
To have her phone be malfunctioning by Maruki is a bit strange to me since his powers are a little confusing. That detail doesnāt happen to the other thieves when he grants their wishes and affects their mentality. It may be the side affect of her cognition, but if that were the case then only Yoshizawa wouldāve been the only one affected by her phone malfunctioning. But we can notice the malfunction, too. So it has to be that she took her sisterās phone or her phone was broken herself from the impact of the traffic accident. But that would depend on if the twins had their phones on their person in their bags. Yet that is also iffy when her phone goes back to normal, so sheās either gotten herself a new one or something. Itās just confusing and weird. Yoshizawaās ID is all Joker had to go off of in identifying her anyways, but thereās creative opportunities in finding out her real name. Since everyone apparently knew what happened and her backstory, it mustāve landed on the news. Iād think that advancing her confidant didnāt need to be the reason to reach the royal route when Maruki is the star of Third Semester, a confidant, and has interactions with everyone that can leave a more interesting opportunity for royalās route. It revolves around him like Nyx, Izanami, and Yaldabaoth. And he is similar to Nyx and Yaldabaoth in the sense that the three are both responding to what people wanted. While she answers to humanityās desire for death and extinction, while he and Yaldabaoth are about granting deepest desires, which compensates for their own benefits.
Maybe the point Atlus made for the end meeting of Yoshizawa was that sheās fine to go back to her life as nothing ties her to the thieves anymore. Because her one true objective was defeating Maruki, and having achieved that, went to continue her career as a gymnast. Which would majorly diverge her path from others due to absences, different goals, that kind of thing. Since the only thing she cares about is gymnastics, itās her priority that she holds above all else. Which could even transcend the thieves. It makes sense that her and Cendrillon are the odd ones out.
I feel like her first awakening needed more than just āgoing against common senseā. Her failings of gymnastics other than for her own personal goals mean nothing else to her. The dialogue for her first awakening explains that thatās the reason for her rebellion, what others have said about her. When, in contradictory, she factly states that she does not care for her special treatment, the schoolās approval, or her honour student status, who she herself is opposing the terms upholding said status that she also doesnāt care about. All of her āpotentially losing her statusā is just by a result of her own actions and self-knowledge. She is fully aware that keeping the honour student-athlete status all depends on her only and that the consequences of it taken away are the results of her actions. Not anyone elseās. Like being in third place. That all came down on her alone. Yet she spins it as if itās unfair and that sheās being wronged. Making a commotion because she is unable to deal with her slumps that she claims is affecting her gymnastics, which is not delved upon further detail, is not worth the attention of storytelling when there is nothing off about the school staff warning her about the loss of status. Thereās just no injustice. She wonāt let anyone speak ill of her dream? Why when she doesnāt even care about anyone has said. Does she tell every person what she wants to be when she grows up? Nothing about her getting third place was rigged, itās just the result of her performance that she failed to meet in the end. Thatās it. And fake Kasumiās reaction over losing her younger twin is not impactful. She brushes pass her ādeathā with mild sadness and grief and continues off on her merry way. Even Sumireās fake appearance in the Palace was small. If fake Kasumi had cared about her sister more, and the situation around her, then weād have something more interesting to go off of. To say that her awakening was just about her identity crisis doesnāt fit because that wasnāt what was presented in the dialogue or the scene leading up to her gaining a Persona. And she said that her name was Kasumi, she was still in firm belief that she was the older twin, not that she accepted that she couldnāt be her sister. If that were the case, then we, as the player, wouldāve known her true identity sooner as a result because her lines wouldāve given evidence. The reveal of her actual sister shows that she genuinely thought it was the other way around. Cendrillonās words like āRather than accept a life in cinders, youād strive towards splendor, you know the risk. Well, if those really are the shoes youāve chosen.ā works with Yoshizawaās, albeit rather poorly, motive for awakening. Cinderella had strived to have the freedom to do what she wanted without being held back, to be something a little more than what she really was. It aligns with Yoshizawaās goals when as fake Kasumi: to reach the level of gymnastics on a higher level for herself, since thatās the only thing that matters to her. The student status goes with the athlete status, but she doesnāt even care for it. She wants to be a star, to be the best of her club and proceed bigger goals. Her āRiskā is being stripped of her honour student status title as the result of her inability to meet the requirements of first or second place tournaments that come with the athlete terms she is consciously aware of. Thereās no fowl play, no rigging, no unfairness. Itās simple understanding and consent by both parties. She knew exactly what to expect depending on the outcome.
The āshoesā sheās chosen can be more than just her filling in her sisterās place. Cinderella puts no effort to be someone else, sheās just perceived by that impression from others after her fairy godmother makeover. She stays the same person as when she attended the ball and never had to put on an act. The thing about Sumire achieving Kasumiās dream for her by being as her is obviously a major flaw, thatās not how life works. Sumire is aware that to accomplish a goal like reaching to the top, to want to put oneself in a higher position requires the person themself to truly reach that dream. She knows that thatās what Kasumi wanted, not only with her but also for herself by her own efforts. And being in Kasumiās position was the most notable thing about what Sumire wanted, she wanted what her sister already had. But for Sumire, her inferiority complex and jealousy isnāt simply a mild thing, itās pushed to the edge to the point where itās so unhealthy that it consumes her and her treatment of the people in her life. For fake Kasumi, the shoes can be a representation of her ideal objective, because itās a symbol of success like how Cinderella got her happy ending from those shoes, which she keeps to the end. So fake Kasumiās version would be to reach gymnastics on the global scale that sheās mentioned before. Because thatās the only thing she cares about. How Sumire and fake Kasumi think are an interesting comparison. And itās also only based on Sumireās interpretation of her twin, but still a sort of instinctive reflection of herself. Judging by Marukiās powers, itās clear that what the wisher desired is a likelinesses of oneself. Unlike some of the other thieves, Sumire never wanted Kasumiās return. And I donāt think itās because she āaccepted her deathā when that can be open to a different meaning. She literally confessed when opposing Joker and Akechi that she couldnāt stand remembering the truth. Her being Kasumi is not a way to heal from grief. She couldāve viewed it as āKasumiās gone. I was the cause and I donāt want to remember that. Iāve always wanted to be like her, to move like her, all of it. I can be rid of my guilt and be the person Iāve always wanted to be. And I can reach the top like we had strived for. As the twin who had everything.ā kind of mindset. To her, Kasumi and Sumire cannot coexist, there needs to be only one that remains. While it can be seen that her desire to be Kasumi is of survivorās guilt and that her sister shouldāve been the one who lived, it can also be for herself. She envied Kasumi to an unstable amount, and itās implied that the two lacked communication about each otherās feelings. She wanted to be Kasumi, to be in her position as the best, to be thought of as such by her peers, and a spotlight dedicated for herself. This can be viewed as the unstable selfish side of Sumire regarding her inferiority and possible resentment towards her sister, because that also stems to jealousy. Her growing issues and struggles not only affects her, but also the people in her life. It isnāt just one defined thing that she believed Kasumi shouldāve lived when she has a layer of internal issues that canāt be simplified.
To say her second awakening is about her rebelling against Marukiās society is off. Including Maruki āchanging the worldā, because that is a doubtful outcome. Nyx is an exception since sheās an ancient being thatās been around for eons. She was brought up to answer humanityās wish, death. Which has been their growing desire thatās been built up after thousands of years. And she was to bring the end to the entire world. Yaldaboath and Izanani, on the other hand, are different because their powers only stretch within Inaba and Tokyo. As far as we know anyways, Yaldaboathās influence has only been over Tokyo. Like how the Dark Hour only happens in Tatsumi Port Island. The Dark Hour happened from the broth of the Kirijo Groupās meddling and failed experiment. Inaba fog and TV world was an experiment by Izanami who pinned P4 Protag and Adachi against each other to see whoād win. Yaldaboath made a bet with Igor over similar circumstances. Him with Akechi, Igor with Joker, and whoād be victorious with their own morals. It sets the reasoning behind the other worldās locations being in these places. It is an improbable chance that Marukiās abilities are capable of affecting the whole world when he is a human being with a Persona and a Palace. Yaldaboath is the one with the obvious possibility of affecting the world into distortion and twisted desires, heās a supernatural entity with inhuman abilities. Marukiās may be amplified by his Persona with his Palace to back him, that doesnāt mean his powers are unlimited. They would reach to the extend of his own location. While Personas are capable and grow by strength, they are not invincible or superiorly godlike. Like taking over the globe. So the idea that Maruki took over the world in comparison to the true antagonists is inconsistent.
Yoshizawa had willingly agreed with his empathetic, yet misguided view that everyone can be happy. She wanted to go back to being Kasumi, not only so sheād forget her cause of death, but also to continue in a happy place of ignorance and position where she was the elder twin who had everything. Marukiās Actualisation focuses on the deepest desire of a person becomes true. But that is not forced on everyone; aka, Joker and Akechi. Joker is easy to understand, heās in a place where he is fine where he is, the present. He has no lost loved one, heās free of his record, heās made allies, heās released the chains of fate tied to him, freed the city from corruption, heās just in a good place where his life was already on track. Akechi has never been one to bow to false happiness and accept deceiving fantasies of having his own mother return or anything like that. It works for them beu see they are a mirror of each other that went down different roads in life. Though Sumireās second awakening is at least a little more consistent, as she embraces her real identity, it doesnāt align that sheās rebelled against Maruki or rebelled at all. She has no will of rebellion in either awakenings, yet her both awakenings didnāt really matter. Atlus just added it for audience sake. Because deep down sheās already made that choice when returning to the real world and living as herself. Marukiās powers werenāt forced down her throat, she wished for it and got what she had wanted like the thieves. But she already had this figured out when returning from his Palace. Her sisterās death is still fresh, her internal struggles havenāt gone away, her selfishness is still there, she accepts that Kasumi is dead but hasnāt made peace with it before her mind was blocked for fake Kasumi, something that was by her own choice.
Sumire and fake/real Kasumi had always wanted to be gymnasts as their profession before they even met Joker. And despite absences of confidants like Akechi, she was always the one with the least amount of appearances. Akechi plays an important key role for Joker, they are two similar yet different individuals who go as two sides of the same coin. Yin and Yang. Rivals. Haru only being relevant until Yoshizawaās return is just one of many script changes by Atlus so that weāre reminded that Yoshizawa is actually supposed to be important.
Itās obvious that Kamoshida and the volleyball team were considered the āstarā when volleyball was the most mentioned sports in the school, with track second. And that was the case because of the Kamoshida drama. With the reputation of volleyball being under fire just as the schoolās. Yet it is baffling how out of an entire school, Yoshizawa is the well known athlete when there should be absolutely way more recognized athletes that isnāt just defined by the volleyball team who do other sports. Itās a plot hole. Itās like saying sheās the only honour student in school, when Makoto and Iām sure other star students fit the slot, too.
The reason for Jokerās friends not attending the dance is a pretty lazy excuse. A plot hole. Saying that theyāve all unavailable for going home sounds so inconsistent. Especially since almost all the thieves attend the same school, including even Mishima, and with the number of them, at least one wouldāve made sense to stay. And of course the dance scene is mandatory, even after a romantic event with someone else, because itās too literally focus solely on Yoshizawa. Thatās the whole reason Atlus made the dance interaction in the first place when it doesnāt happen in vanilla p5 during the festival.
The thing about me going about āCendrillon doesnāt physically changeā is the matter that Sumire, being fake Kasumi, carried the cognition that she was in full belief that she was someone else with a different conscience mindset. Even if Sumireās mind may have been repressed and kept as a form of subconscious, what fake Kasumi believed in was real to her. As Iāve stated previously, fake Kasumi truly thought that she was the older twin until the reveal. Persona; the physical representation of a psyche, leaves some gaps. Because things like identity crisis, amnesia and other similar situations can affect and influence a personās psyche greatly. Itās about knowing yourself, knowing who you are and what you stand for and stand by. Personas are foreshadowings and representations of the charactersā stories. They donāt change because the stories fill out all the way to the end.
Another thing, Cendrillon doesnāt fight, period. Not for others, not for a cause, not even for herself. Carmen and Milady are not the same as the fairytale damsel. Also because they are not damsels, theyāre femme fatale oriented characters who do more in their stories. Theyāre fighters, in personality wise and mentally. They do not let men or anyone walk all over them. Carmenās death goes with the lines that she will always be free, tied down by no one. Sheād rather choose to die than be bounded in life. While Milady, made as an antagonist with no remorse for her actions, is executed for her crimes. The two women share many traits like deceit, sneakiness, cleverness, living their lives by their own rules with no regrets, even with the consequences. Cinderella can hardly be considered a Trickster. When, as Iāve mentioned before, aside from her fairy godmother makeover, she does not change in any way apart from her appearance. She didnāt even try to trick anyone when no body but her stepfamily would recognize her, and yet the stepfamily donāt even interact with her at the ball. The only characters (excluding animal friends depending on what version) that do anything in the whole story, are the prince and fairy godmother. The prince just lets her identity slip by him because of physical attraction and ālove at first sightā. Heās the reason for how Cinderella ends turns out in her life, he made the decision to test every woman am with the glass slipper and put it into action. Thatās really the glory of the slippers; her doing nothing and him doing something by hormonal attraction by first meeting. She can hardly even try to lie because he doesnāt bother getting to know her enough like a rational person when he immediately sees her and instantly decides sheās the one to marry after a dance and a conversation, which wouldnāt be much from a first meeting. She looks just like everyone else at the ball, so of course nobody would notice. This was all the fairy godmotherās doing in the first place.
Remember, Persona 5ās whole theme is about Tricksters, rebellion, and characters who stand by free will. Thatās the entire point of the gameās story and symbolism. Itās Persona, all the games in the series have a theme with Personas basing off them.
The romance thing with Haru isnāt really anything new. In vanilla p5, Atlus pushes Joker and Makoto more as a couple, and they even had to act like one for Eiko, and have scenes in Futaba and Saeās Palaces, or the other girls in a more mild way. But in Royal, it is so blatant that they changed things to ship Yoshizawa instead since sheās the poster girl. Okay
How does getting her fatherās glasses have Sumire making her own choice when she was actually Kasumi? Her mindset was from her cognition when that event happened. It wasnāt actually her being herself. Her making her own choice can be the case for any scenario, but one that sheās always made was letting real Kasumi do what she wants. That was a choice. Theyāre twins, supposedly meant to be close, so sheād had to let her sister make choices for her when she couldāve spoken up about it at any point. And her being ready to leave the responsibility up to Joker can just be seen as consideration since he came all this way for a simple task. Thatās normal for politeness and matters. Itās not that significant.
Her friendship with Maruki is normal, itās not abnormal. But Maruki gives small amounts of manipulation and gaslighting to have her and everyone else under his powers. Maruki, youāre a considerate guy and all, but please NEVER counsel anyone ever again. To say that heās ājust that good of a therapistā by getting her all better is, ludicrous. How does this obvious shift of transition from her turning into fake Kasumi a sign that heās a amazing at counseling when EVERYONE can see that sheās masquerading as her sister. The school knows this, her club, her teachers, her trainer, for the love of god her parents. Youāve also mentioned this that they do. She even vocally calls herself Kasumi and carries her sisterās ID. Itās clear to everyone, minus Joker and maybe others who donāt attend Shujin, that she is not fine. Itās such a weird contradiction that the people in her life are fully aware that sheās pretending to be her sister and yet act like thatās a completely normal thing when itās her cognition, by the power of Maruki, thatās actually being affected. I feel like Iām repeating my points again, but parading around as a deceased person who has been in your life, is not how a person healthily recovers and heals from loss. That is not natural or normal. People should know that! Especially her parents! It doesnāt make any sense why itās going this route other than another plot hole that Atlus made as an excuse so Joker wouldnāt find out about her identity sooner. Itās absurd.
Iāve mentioned the effect of her student status in the other points Iāve made a few times. Itās not about the gossip, the tests, skipping classes when she does not care for any of that unless it involves her personal goals of gymnastics. Otherwise, she doesnāt care for it at all. And I also talked about her processing of her sisterās death.
Which of her stalkings? Because Morgana did not even know about both these cases. Her confessing to tailing them thieves left just as much of shock to him as Futaba and Joker. The same for when she pops up in Marukiās Palace on her own.
Joker has been the only person to see the blue butterfly. Heās a wildcard, he has the fool arcana, heās contracted to the velvet room. Of course he can see it. Morgana can as well because he was created by Igor. Velvet room attendants can alter their appearances based off the other games. They are capable of turning invisible to the human eye when going into the human world or be apparent. But they are always viable to their guests. The thievesā reason for being in the velvet room in the first place was because of Yaldoboath, the false god took them to repress their strive for justice and tried to manipulate Joker for a deal because he cheated on his bet with Igor and infiltrated the velvet room so heād win. Impersonating Igor and splitting Lavenza so she wouldnāt recognize his true identity. None of that was Igor or Lavenzaās doing. Itās a similar scenario to P3ās the answer. Where it was that SEES reached their conclusion and conviction and were able to follow Aigis to the velvet room, just like the thieves when they reach their resolve and are able to leave their cells. Lavenza even stays in the nurseās office as Joker recruits everyone to meet, but not all of them appear at once. The entrances to the velvet room are all in various locations between the real world and the supernatural. Public places that can by stumbled upon mind you. And nobody in SEES, Investigation Team, or the Phantom Thieves have been able to actually see the entrance. The Persona-Users. They just think the leaders are lost in thought or daydreaming. And as Iāve stated before, the interaction of the thieves being in the velvet room wasnāt even by the residentsā choice because of Yaldaboath. He infiltrated the velvet room.
The Phantom Thieves were put as a public symbol of inspiration for society to solve their own problems if they could help it. Of course everyone knows that the thieves canāt fix everything and make everyone hunky dory. Marukiās rules arenāt necessarily by his rules, as the power of his actualisation depends on the person he can affect if they have a wish so deep, like bringing back the dead. It feels like Yoshizawa undermines the meaning of solving oneās own problems when there are times solving things on your own just isnāt enough.
Thatās the thing with Sumire on the Marinette similarities. They get no consequences from the result of their actions, itās excused and passed off, or the repercussions are light. While Sumire gets self confidence, no matter the little amount of time it happened, she goes back to being the same character as we saw her in the beginning. And wardrobe and hair are a big part of visual representation on characters. Her hair goes back into a ponytail with the red bow, and her glasses are gone. She looks exactly the same as when Joker first meets her in the ending. Everythingās the same. Just like her thief attire where she had truly sought for herself to be her sister. Thereās nothing that differentiates them apart. Regarding Marinette, most of my opinions over her are similar to Youtuber Cyrus the Greatās analysis videos on the show if youāre curious. Heās pretty detailed and makes interesting notes about her and the cast.