This Is A Super Cute Design!!!

This is a super cute design!!!

I love the colour combination and pastels!!! The baker theme is cute and the wisk weapon is very unique!

MARIE MURA 〜♪

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Hi Seal!!!

hiiiii!!!!! hi chiffon!!!

hows it goin?

The more I look at Shinoha, the less satisfied I am with her design. I think I'm going to try and redesign her with a clearer theme and colour palette.

I did it again!!! Meet my second PMMM OC: Shinoha Murofushi!

More info below the cut *⁠.⁠✧

Basic Info:

Name: Shinoha Murofushi

Age: 16

Height: 5'6

Wish: "'My ultimate dream could come true'... If that's really the case then, I want to get revenge on those bastards!"

Weapon: Dual Swords

Power: The ability to release attacks used against her back at an enemy*

Soul Gem: Bellflower (*also somewhat looks like a skull) located below the chest, with scales on the bottom of the soul gem

Witch: Nemesis

*She can only absorb attacks that have hit her, and will take damage from anything that hits her. She can store damage for as long as she wants, but when she releases it, every attack she's stores gets released at once. However the attack affected her is how it will affect the target she releases on: Ex. Someone punches her causing a bloody nose, Shinoha releases her damage, and the puncher gains a bloody nose and the pain that caused the bloody nose. Ex2. Someone breaks her arm with a baseball bat, Shinoha releases her damage, and the batter gains a broken arm and the pain of a baseball bat to the arm.

Personality:

She's incredibly standoffish and tries her best to be alone at all times. She rarely leaves her room, and hates going to school. She's quick to judge and mistrust others, and it's incredibly hard for her to lower her guard. She's learned to cut her own hair (due to avoiding leaving the house) and while she has exceptional talent doing so, she has no interest in being a hairdresser. She rarely sleeps, and is always tired. She maintains a perfect poker face, but struggles with violent thoughts and self-loathing: becoming a magical girl has given her an outlet for her struggles, although she gets very brutal in fights. Her favorite food is seafood, and she can't stand the taste of sweet things. Despite her dark thoughts, she's very meek, and seldom voices her opinions and feelings. If she's got a problem with someone, they likely don't know until it's too late. Her downbeat nature means she doesn't have many hobbies; she spends most of her time on her phone, and is a closet idol fanatic.

Design Breakdown:

This design was a challenge and a pain. I struggled A LOT to incorporate her "revenge" wish and find a good theming for it, but all I could really work with was "greek goddess Nemesis" (justice/law/punishment theme). I managed to fit in some wing-like shapes (skirt, swords) but I don't know if it's obvious enough(?) Her hair-circle is meant to look like a halo (angel of punishment theme) but I'm not sure if it just looks like a random circle or an actual halo. I included bellflower motifs because... I have no real reason; nice concept, but I can't draw bellflowers well. Her colour palette was the most difficult part (theming second) because no colours fit her??? I don't know how to describe it, but no colours worked right with her personality (not even black or white). I settled on green with grey hair, but it'll probably change if I ever draw her again. I fear her design is a little to "fantasy" not enough "magical girl" (but that might just be my "ruffles/pink" brainrot). I tried really hard to give her a should cloak, then a caplet, and finally I gave up and just went with the sleeves.

Overall: she was a struggle, and I don't think I got across my theming and motifs well. I might try to redesign her in the future, but for now I'm content with this: I think it's good for my current skill level and her current concept.

Trivia:

She didn't believe in magical girls at all, but after much pestering convincing from Komoe, she unseriously made a wish before becoming a magical girl

Her damage absorbing ability causes her to intentionally endanger herself in fights against witches (possible concept)

Originally her plan was to kill her bullies, but she instead opted to use her power to curse them

She would've liked to be the brooding loner type of magical girl, but Komoe had other plans

She has a mini fridge in her room and it's her favorite thing in the world

It's always dark in her room, so she can see well in the dark (potential plot point later[?])

She's a big fan of spy, action, and mystery movies; and has some form of online review blog

She has a mannequin in her room she vents her frustrations and feelings to (she strongly dislikes showing emotions in public and/or around others)

As much as she's tried to fight it, Komoe often comes to her house with groceries, grief seeds, gifts, and other things to give to Shinoha

Although she was initially very unhappy about becoming a magical girl (she kinda became a magical girl on accident), she's slowly learning to embrace her magical girl persona (and becoming more deranged in the process!)

She named her magical girl swords after her two favorite idols, and has begun a personal sword collection (a goal Komoe helped her set was to eventually forge a sword herself)

She once drank a small bottle of vanilla extract without batting an eye (it was dark, she was tired and didn't feel like reading)

She punts around Inkyuu like a ball

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@strawberry-seal77

This is such an interesting concept and design! I love the blending of military and bee themes, all in a magical girl form (the capelet looking like a soldier's shirt is really cool!)! I love the implication of her being in the past (like a historia story).

Her story is very macabre (in a good way!): the concept of using a one-time-all-powerful-wish to bring back someone who comes back wrong- to the point they become an otherworldly monster only humanised by your love for them- is horrific and tragic in a lovely poetic way. The idea of loneliness for both parties is intriguing, and I'd love to see it explored.

New Puella Magi OC alert! Florence Barkley was just 13 years old when she made her contract with Kyubey. Her wish was to bring her older brother, Harold, home from the Great War. Little did she know, her brother was killed in action from mustard gas. Her wish, however, did bring him back home alive, but different. He came home permanently disfigured as a result from the gas. His skin was blistered and swollen beyond recognition, an eerie grey-ish green color, oozing puss all over. Viewed as otherworldly and a monster, he was kept away hidden in secret and rejected by his family, although Florence still loved and cared for him. She visited him often bringing him freshly made iced tea with honey she just harvested from her family's bee hives. Although, life isn't as sweet as honey as a magical girl. She must fight witches, after all. Her weapon is a bee smoker, but instead of the typical calming smoke, it is now mustard gas itself. She has to dawn a gas mask and work alone to be able to use her weapon. Fighting is lonely for Florence, she yearns to make friends with others in her situation, but she mustn't due to endangering others. She's alone, her brother is alone, and there isn't anything either of them can do.

This is a little doodle I made of my sona a few weeks ago (old signature lol). It's in my simple style, but I think the design is fine!