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This is such an interesting concept and design! I love the blending of military and bee themes, all in a magical girl form (the capelet looking like a soldier's shirt is really cool!)! I love the implication of her being in the past (like a historia story).

Her story is very macabre (in a good way!): the concept of using a one-time-all-powerful-wish to bring back someone who comes back wrong- to the point they become an otherworldly monster only humanised by your love for them- is horrific and tragic in a lovely poetic way. The idea of loneliness for both parties is intriguing, and I'd love to see it explored.

New Puella Magi OC alert! Florence Barkley was just 13 years old when she made her contract with Kyubey. Her wish was to bring her older brother, Harold, home from the Great War. Little did she know, her brother was killed in action from mustard gas. Her wish, however, did bring him back home alive, but different. He came home permanently disfigured as a result from the gas. His skin was blistered and swollen beyond recognition, an eerie grey-ish green color, oozing puss all over. Viewed as otherworldly and a monster, he was kept away hidden in secret and rejected by his family, although Florence still loved and cared for him. She visited him often bringing him freshly made iced tea with honey she just harvested from her family's bee hives. Although, life isn't as sweet as honey as a magical girl. She must fight witches, after all. Her weapon is a bee smoker, but instead of the typical calming smoke, it is now mustard gas itself. She has to dawn a gas mask and work alone to be able to use her weapon. Fighting is lonely for Florence, she yearns to make friends with others in her situation, but she mustn't due to endangering others. She's alone, her brother is alone, and there isn't anything either of them can do.