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[Eng Sub] Official Pilot | Only You The Series | Ch3Thailand
Full Pilot for the new Lesbian bodyguard trope romance series by Lingorm will be released tomorrow by ch3!!! Turn on notifications, you guys! This is all I've ever wanted out of entertainment...
DO NOT STOP WRITING THIS!
I stumbled upon this chapter tonight and went back to catch up on the series, I’m sorry I didn’t leave feedback for every chapter but I was totally hooked and wanted to get to the next part.
This is a truly fantastic story. Richard is very believable, as is Julia’s decent into the complacent victim (I’ve been there). Your Jai is awesome - you’ve got my heart all a-twitter now over this!
I will make a few recommendations, I know I always appreciate it when folks give me some so hopefully you will too. The only ‘issue’ I found with the story is at times there are minor typos or loss of tense but nothing a beta couldn’t fix - I know when I try to re-read my work to edit it for some reason it always sounds perfect in my mind but my beta can always see things I can’t. The second recommendation is (if you don’t have one already) try opening an account on a site just for fan fiction. Tumblr is great but I’ve noticed it’s hard to get real comments going and you really only end up with hearts. I’ve considered publishing my stuff on here but I’ve just been dragging my feet on it. There are several sites I can recommend that I do you use or plan to soon that I think would help you get more feedback and engagement.
If you’re interested in the recommendations, using me as a beta or just asking that I fan girl gush over every chapter please let me know!!
Painful Secrets- Ch. 3 “Catalyst”
TITLE: Painful Secrets Ch. 3 “Catalyst” CHAPTER NUMBER/ONE SHOT: 3/?? of Painful Secrets. AUTHOR: bookwarm85 WHICH JAI/CHARACTER: Jai & OFC, OFC&OMC GENRE: Drama/Hurt/Comfort/Romance FIC SUMMARY: Julia Abbott is a well-respected artist in the art community of LA, she has a boyfriend Richard Clarke who is working towards a promotion at a top PR firm, she has an amazing best friend Jai Courtney who is an up in coming star in the film industry…but she also has “Painful Secrets”, Will her secrets come to light? RATING: MA WORDS: 1,391 NOTES/WARNINGS: WARNING! Graphic descriptions of abuse are in this chapter. You have been warned.
3 Months Later
Julia’s POV
Jai and I have not spoken since that night, Jai has called and texted me every day trying to contact me , but I refused to respond, when Richard threatened to kill Jai I believed him and I refuse to let that happen.
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