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wow when I state I don't have money I get three donation asks
I'm not mad. I'm dissapointed
from now on I'll be deleting them because it's in the ask button that I don't have money
Hi!!
I was wondering if you could maybe be my beta reader? I’m writing a new fan fiction story and I would like ideas, double check my spelling, feed back, and constructive criticism.
Summary: Titanic story line, but, with a twist. Gilbert and his little sister boar the Titanic after the unexpected death of their parents. Hoping for a better life. Anne comes aboard the Titanic with Marilla after loosing Matthew hoping for a better life as well. When the three of them meet, it’s a strong bond that nothing can break them. Not even the devastating tragedy of the Titanic can break that bond.
I always thought Gilbert would make a great big brother. Can I make this work? Would I get reviews on it? That’s my goal is to get reviews and people to like my story.
Hello, @shannyh25!
Thank you for your inquiry, but I have no experience in beta reading.
While I am familiar with the story of the Titanic, I know nothing of the characters you speak of. I'm not sure I would be able to support you properly.
Making sure it gets reviews and likes depends on your audience. I never thought my stories would get this kind of reaction from others, so I started writing for myself. I still write for myself.
While it is true that I have a Patreon and do ask for reader input with polls, this is mostly to help me clarify where I would go with the stories or to make sure I am still making things clear.
As for spelling and grammar, my go-to is Grammarly! It saves me every time and points out my unhealthy relationships with commas and ellipses.
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"Indeed We Haven’t Talked Much, But It Would Be Nice To Talk To Each Other More," Aradia replies
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19. My muse will get yours flowers.
> Erisol walked up to the jade blooded troll, his wand out at his side. He then raised his wand up and said a couple magic words then at the tip of his wand a dozen roses pop out. The thing was, the roses were not red, they were jade colored, just like Aradia’s blood.
“Here, they’re for you.”