Writing Him Is The Bane Of My Existence - Tumblr Posts

so I’m looking for a beta for my mafia (and dragon age but mostly mafia) fanfiction. I’m sure my grammar could use some work (I flinch when I reread old chapters and posts), but I’m honestly more concerned with narrative structure and consistency who is equal part willing to go along with a critique stylistic choices.

Writer’s block is the biggest bane of my existence and I’m hoping that someone can look at what I’ve written and help add some insight to what I’ve done.

my biggest problem right now is Sam. I’m trying to explore my interpretation without woobifying him. I don’t want him to lose his agency and that’s for good and ill, but he is also in a super complicated and precarious position. If anyone is willing to go with me on this journey please do, because I’m still trying to climb over the edge into the actual boat.