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Digimon: My Digital Story Prequel. This Is The Beginnings Of The American DATS Squad.

Digimon: My Digital Story Prequel. This is the beginnings of the American DATS Squad.
Mackenzie was taken to the Digital World as an infant and raised by a digimon because of a crack. Felix, Dillon, and Summer are just enjoying their summer before they get sucked into the digital world. They see a glimpse of Mackenzie before she takes off. The area is controlled by a corrupt leader with Mackenzie as their henchman. They decide to defeat the leader and Mackenzie.
With hard work and bettering the area, they come face to face with him. They defeat him and try to take Mackenzie, but Mackenzie won’t give up. Mackenzie steps up as the new evil leader.
They defeat her for the last time and take her to the human world to get her adjusted. Mackenzie cannot adjust to all the new changes and flee back to the Digital World. With an evil plan in mind, she tries to take over the Human World and is stopped by the group and government.
The government cannot trust her and keep her locked away, along with everyone else. The group propose to make a place to keep digimon related problems at bay.

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I really enjoy odd “novelty” martial arts (as you can tell by my previous posts. I really think dancing and martial arts are similar. Ballroom martial arts would be cool.
Samba and tango can add some pretty intense moments. Their footwork is quick and can be dramatic. Lots of kicks and coordination.
Dancing in general would be awesome to see incorporated with some deadly flair. Hip hop and freestyle can get intricate.
As you can tell, I’m not good at giving examples or really illustrating my ideas. I just want to talk about the episode.
This is a rival centered episode. I want to try to add the rich snake rival into this.
The swan, her best friend, and the protagonist go out to watch some ballroom dancing. The protagonist is not particular interested in anything not martial arts related. After the show is over, the snake, who was a part of the dancers, comes up to the girls and flirt.
The only one really quiet and not gushing over him is the protagonist, which catches his interest. He flirts harder and asks her to be his dance partner. The protagonist doesn’t want to, but the girls push her.
The protagonist changes into a slim dance outfit and is taken to a practice room, with the girls watching. The snake teaches her some of the steps and the protagonist begrudging goes along with it. Afterwards, he compliments her and wants to take her to a higher up competition. He was in the local area just for fun and looking for a new girl.
The protagonist refuses to go until he mentions wanting to pay her. She was never the one to turn down money so she agrees.
At the higher up competition, the swan, her best friend, and the protagonist’s friend group is there watching. The competition immediately gets intense when one of the competitors trips her, lowering their score. The protagonist is angry and now is going to get revenge.
The two work together to take out the competitors. The protagonist crushes someone’s foot so badly they cannot continue. The snake manages to rip a girl’s dress to embarrass her. The two are able to skillfully dodge all the jabs too with some quick spins and lifts.
During the strong opponents, the protagonist is able to slash someone’s face with her heel and the snake was able to trip them long enough for them to stand on them as if they were just carpet. They win the grand prize and the protagonist is really happy.
Unknowingly, the snake approached her for a reason and wants to win her heart just to break it. The protagonist broke up with him in China and he tried to drown himself in the Springs. He got saved by the Guide and with a snake body, he vows to get revenge on her.


Since its still April and we dedicate this month to Danny Phantom, its time to write about the 150+ year sequel. I wanna try writing something a little weird, maybe a little dark. (im horrible at writing so here goes) It will be about Sammy and her little crush Edward 16. Something a bit reverse.
To recap, Sammy is a halfa still learning about the Human World. Edward 16 is the son of Johnny 13 and Kitty who likes to break any rule he can and vandalize the town with his best friend Shadow.
To summarize, its Valentines Month in Amity Park and Edward has been feeling lonely. He looks at his parents and sees love (a very unhealthy version). He goes out and sees couples. He just cannot escape it. He holes himself up in the Ghost Zone for awhile, making his parents worry. In an attempt to make him happy, Kitty goes to her friend Ember and gets her to spell Sammy into loving Edward. She’s rotting in the Ghost Zone and Johnny thinks this might’ve been the wrong move.
Johnny knocks on the door to his son’s room, disregarding the obscene noises he hears behind it. Kitty is currently out for a girls night so this is his only shot of this. He hears the door creak and sees a sliver of his kid.
“Pops? You know I have someone over right now.”
“I know champ but we have to chat now.”
“Baby, I’ll be in the living room!”
The door shuts, leaving him with his shirtless son. He cringes at the whining before taking his son downstairs.
“What is it pops? I’m really busy right now.”
“I know but hear me out. This isn’t right and I think you need to let her go home.”
“Home?! This is her home. This is our home!”
“Son, sit down. You know that girl is a halfa and you’re too busy sucking at her face to even feed her!”
“Then I’ll just give her something now-”
“No, stop it now. She’s not your pet. She needs to go back to the Human World and live her life with the other humans. You can’t keep her here.”
“You and Ma stay here! Why can’t I keep her here! I’ll feed her, give her water, and let her do what she wants!”
“Are you letting her do what she wants by keeping her stuck here?”
Edward quiets down. After a long pause of silence, he goes to the kitchen and sends Shadow to fetch his mom and Ember.


I really like this show, but its so long and takes too many detours. I am thinking of using the concept and making a conclusion to this, only going off memory. I’m adding a twist to it with pokemon adventures.
The series is about a fox spirit and a powerful priest (the correct term is taoist but I don’t know if I want to use that specific title here). The two form an eternal love contract and promise to be together in all their future lives. Since this is uncommon for fox spirits, she pays a big price of her powers and memories. They start the cycle of reincarnation together.
In the modern day, the now younger fox spirit wants to be a matchmaker like everyone else in her species while the priest just wants to lazily go through school. They meet while she is trying to do a successful job and work together to complete the job.
Her two sisters are furious though and just want her to meet her lover again. Once the two fully reconnect, they’re supposed to regain their memories and old powers. The fox spirit does not want this and the priest doesn’t either. The two try to resist their destiny but slowly start to like each other.
I want the fox spirit to be Whitley and the priest as Blake. It seems fitting and I think they didn’t get enough screen time in the manga.
A very cute detail is that the main characters tend to wear what they had before. Whitley would wear two bells on her waist at first but then tie them to her hair once she slowly regains more of her memories. Blake would wear all black at first then once he regains his memories, he will start wearing more blue and a red hat.
Their past lives are White and Black. There is supposed to be a contrast between the two so I will try to make sure to make it distinct enough. White is an ambitious, fierce girl while Whitley is a shy, very conservative girl. It works out since she’s supposed to get push around by her sisters. Black is an easy going guy with a big heart while Blake is ruthless and a playboy. This will be harder to flesh out.
I will have to think of the story more and re-watch the important parts, but I do know that they have to regain all their memories at some point. They have to face their destiny head on and defeat the ongoing problem from their past lives. This includes an enemy, their family, and with each other.
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I forgot, the series is officially named Digital Story. This is the third installment of it. The cast is even younger than the past two. The first group were already adults. The second group were high schoolers. Now, these are middle school kids.
One night, a few kids sneak into the DATS headquarters and get transported to the Digital World, breaking it and scattering themselves. Vallura and Kenny have to navigate through the strange world to get home with her partner Lunamon and her friend ToyAgumon.
They find out Maria, Brian, and Scott have joined the enemy, while Abby and Sora have been living peacefully in a village. Jayden is a vigilante and Kai has joined the army resisting the rule of some new gods called Kuzuhamon and Gaioumon.
After MDS2, the Digital World has unrest and been in disorder. With the destruction of the Olympus 12, there is no one to keep the chaos at bay. 2 digimon rose up and decided to takeover the world for themselves. They are sadistic and like seeing the world destroy itself.
Vallura and Kenny have to make a choice. They can join to defeat these rulers or go home. Kenny decides enough is enough and goes home, while Vallura stays to fight.
She finds out about the Olympus 12 and knows they are the only ones who can help. She sets out with Lunamon to find them and stop the destruction.
