I Really Like This Show, But Its So Long And Takes Too Many Detours. I Am Thinking Of Using The Concept

I really like this show, but its so long and takes too many detours. I am thinking of using the concept and making a conclusion to this, only going off memory. I’m adding a twist to it with pokemon adventures. 

The series is about a fox spirit and a powerful priest (the correct term is taoist but I don’t know if I want to use that specific title here). The two form an eternal love contract and promise to be together in all their future lives. Since this is uncommon for fox spirits, she pays a big price of her powers and memories. They start the cycle of reincarnation together. 

In the modern day, the now younger fox spirit wants to be a matchmaker like everyone else in her species while the priest just wants to lazily go through school. They meet while she is trying to do a successful job and work together to complete the job. 

Her two sisters are furious though and just want her to meet her lover again. Once the two fully reconnect, they’re supposed to regain their memories and old powers. The fox spirit does not want this and the priest doesn’t either. The two try to resist their destiny but slowly start to like each other.

I want the fox spirit to be Whitley and the priest as Blake. It seems fitting and I think they didn’t get enough screen time in the manga. 

A very cute detail is that the main characters tend to wear what they had before. Whitley would wear two bells on her waist at first but then tie them to her hair once she slowly regains more of her memories. Blake would wear all black at first then once he regains his memories, he will start wearing more blue and a red hat.

Their past lives are White and Black. There is supposed to be a contrast between the two so I will try to make sure to make it distinct enough. White is an ambitious, fierce girl while Whitley is a shy, very conservative girl. It works out since she’s supposed to get push around by her sisters. Black is an easy going guy with a big heart while Blake is ruthless and a playboy. This will be harder to flesh out.

I will have to think of the story more and re-watch the important parts, but I do know that they have to regain all their memories at some point. They have to face their destiny head on and defeat the ongoing problem from their past lives. This includes an enemy, their family, and with each other.

There are always an idol group arc. Here is how I would write it in my universe. After a fierce competition arc, it is time for downtime and some cuteness. They have to participate in many events to cement that they are a group. 

A new feature going around is the Broomstick mode. It is taking the world by storm. It works with the new Vote style of concerts where after the audience is 100% hyped, idols can ride broomsticks in the stadium. It can work alongside the special victory dance too.

Another thing, I noticed they added pom poms and batons to help with teamwork. The group should do it too because it’s cute and will help with their hand eye coordination. 

New groups are popping up everywhere so new characters are going to get introduced. There is a legendary group they have to beat.

The group is having a hard time working together because the protagonist is not comfortable with a group and learning the new routines. 

The protagonist is considering quitting and her manager keeps her spirits up.

Since its still April and we dedicate this month to Danny Phantom, its time to write about the 150+ year sequel. I wanna try writing something a little weird, maybe a little dark. (im horrible at writing so here goes) It will be about Sammy and her little crush Edward 16. Something a bit reverse.

To recap, Sammy is a halfa still learning about the Human World. Edward 16 is the son of Johnny 13 and Kitty who likes to break any rule he can and vandalize the town with his best friend Shadow. 

To summarize, its Valentines Month in Amity Park and Edward has been feeling lonely. He looks at his parents and sees love (a very unhealthy version). He goes out and sees couples. He just cannot escape it. He holes himself up in the Ghost Zone for awhile, making his parents worry. In an attempt to make him happy, Kitty goes to her friend Ember and gets her to spell Sammy into loving Edward. She’s rotting in the Ghost Zone and Johnny thinks this might’ve been the wrong move.

Johnny knocks on the door to his son’s room, disregarding the obscene noises he hears behind it. Kitty is currently out for a girls night so this is his only shot of this. He hears the door creak and sees a sliver of his kid.

“Pops? You know I have someone over right now.”

“I know champ but we have to chat now.”

“Baby, I’ll be in the living room!” 

The door shuts, leaving him with his shirtless son. He cringes at the whining before taking his son downstairs.

“What is it pops? I’m really busy right now.”

“I know but hear me out. This isn’t right and I think you need to let her go home.”

“Home?! This is her home. This is our home!”

“Son, sit down. You know that girl is a halfa and you’re too busy sucking at her face to even feed her!”

“Then I’ll just give her something now-”

“No, stop it now. She’s not your pet. She needs to go back to the Human World and live her life with the other humans. You can’t keep her here.”

“You and Ma stay here! Why can’t I keep her here! I’ll feed her, give her water, and let her do what she wants!”

“Are you letting her do what she wants by keeping her stuck here?”

Edward quiets down. After a long pause of silence, he goes to the kitchen and sends Shadow to fetch his mom and Ember. 

Been watching Ranma 1/2 lately and I had the idea for the spinoff I made for it awhile back. I really want to talk about some episodes I really like and see how to add my own characters to it.

To recap, the protagonist is pretty neutral about their two sides. They prefer to be female and doesn’t really care when people call them. It only becomes an issue when they deliberately wanted to present themselves as female to their school and after they accidentally transform, everyone thinks they’re male.

They escape to the United States and live with their distant relatives under the disguise of a transfer student. They have a younger girl cousin and a male cousin who accidentally finds out they’re able to switch between male and female. He suggests she use her male form to go to school. She heavily refuses as she just wants to be an average girl.

On the first day of school, she only has her tribal clothes and just borrows her cousin’s clothes to blend in. The pants had to be hemmed up and the shirt is a bit too big where it had to be tucked in. 

Right before she could enter her class, a vase from the upper floor falls and she manages to only dodge the vase, not the water inside it. She changes into her male form and is introduced with a neutral nickname. 

Since she’s not fluent in English and pretty flustered from the transformation, she comes off as cool and mutely handsome. A lot of the guys don’t like her and the girls are too lovestruck. She manages to make friends with another cool and handsome guy, his sister, and a nerdy photographer who is apart of the newspaper club in extension. The photographer is trying to find the latest scoop and may have burned a few bridges for the hottest newspaper article.

On the same day, they’re challenged in PE by a jock. He’s a showoff and wants all the ladies. He’s not afraid to put down others and people he sees as weaklings like the protagonist. They go on separate tennis teams and the protagonist wipes the floor with them. They become lifelong rivals from there.

I just remembered I had a concept for Jewelpet (and took some ideas from Shugo Chara). 

I wanted the jewels and the jewelpets to either represent the person or the person’s dream self. It would be a bit of a magical girl series because when the jewelpet and the person are in sync, they get to transform to a more powerful version of themselves. 

I like when they get a boost of magic from their partners too. The jewel charms are obviously too heavy and large to be a hair accessory so I think when they glow on their pockets or shirts, the user is in sync with their partners and can do magic. They also will act differently too and whatever the jewel represents.

I really liked when they went to school so I will let them go to school with their jewelpets. They are the student council of the school and protect them from evil magic and getting their energy drained. 

The ice skating episode in Ranma 1/2 is one of the best. I shall talk about my spinoff’s take on it. 

While ice skating with his 3 friends, the protagonist is mocked by two pro figure skaters. The protagonist’s handsome crush and best friend stands up for him. The male pro skater recognizes him though. 

The protagonist’s friend used to be a famous hockey skater before quitting due to a concussion. The pro skaters mock them worse and even challenges the protagonist’s friend to a skating competition. With a hurt pride and wanting to stop the torment, the protagonist’s best friend agrees to it. He is now panicking because he doesn’t know another figure skater who can help him.

The protagonist feels sorry for him and agrees to help him look for someone. Again, the protagonist doesn’t know anymore else so she asks her cursed Swan friend to help out. The Swan agrees since the protagonist did help her out with the gymnastic club. It makes the protagonist jealous that she cannot help her friend in any other way.

The fight scenes and battle is a little blurry to me in this episode, but I will attempt to describe it all. The Swan and protagonist’s crush go against the two pro skaters. Without knowing it was a fighting match too, they are overwhelmed. The Swan has to do most of the leg work and fighting while the her skating partner adapts. It turns out he’s pretty flexible and agile on ice. 

In what’s supposed to be the finishing blow, the pro skaters slam the Swan into the wall and injures her whole back. Not wanting her friend dead, the protagonist switches with her in her female form. They work together to finish off the two. In the middle of the battle, the male pro skater kisses her and catches her off guard. They almost lose when the ice breaks and releases cold water. The protagonist changes into their male form and is thrown a more fitted outfit by their cousin. 

Their crush is surprised by their appearance, but brushes it off as he just needs any partner. Once they defeat the two, the female pro skater is so in love with the protagonist that she kisses them. Thrown so off guard, the protagonist tries to flee before getting interrupted by their snake rival.