I THINK ABOUT THIS LINE IN SNOWGRAVE. I THINK KRIS IS TRYING TO GIVE NOELLE A SAD APOLOGETIC LOOK. TRYING

I THINK ABOUT THIS LINE IN SNOWGRAVE. I THINK KRIS IS TRYING TO GIVE NOELLE A SAD APOLOGETIC LOOK. TRYING TO IN SOME WAY LET HER KNOW THEY DONT WANT THIS TO BE HAPPENING. BUT BC OF THEYRE CREEPY AUTISM AND HOW WEIRD THEYVE BEEN ACTING. NOELLE IS JUST OFFPUT.

i wrote some responses to items berdly would have in the party + some of the responses the other party members would have to the items you get with him

so i made some edits of the comments i found funny + other party member responses

i feel the need to mention in my original draft he would have little responses , with this being because most were “too long winded and annoying for you to listen to” and i just think thats funny condensed a bit better

heavily heavily inspired by the magnitomb au i just basically made my own with the same “berdly joins the party and commits snowgrave” premise

Instead of *another* Superman series can I have a series about these little weirdos?

I'm happy to accept "in addition to" instead.

device theory part 3 good

So random so niche but one thing that always irks me about sxf is the way that no one took in Yor and Yuri after their parents died. I’m nitpicking but really it’s such an insane detail to me because it logically doesn’t make any send and I don’t know if it’s a cultural thing but I just cannot mentally imagine two children being left alone after their parents died. That don’t sit right with my West Indian soul like nah.

I get Twilight’s situation, both of parents died in a bombing that destroyed the entire city obviously there was a lot of chaos so it’s understandable that he got lost in the midst of it. Granted I still am baffled by the idea that no one saw this 6 year old child and said hm maybe I should look after him but whatever fine. Sure times of collective distress increases the sense of community in people but fine take win but Yor???

It’s never fully confirmed how their parents died (at least not to my memory) but we do know they weren’t homeless and that Yor knew people she could ask for advice and stuff and so my question why did no one help her? They lived in the forest sure but there were other people around they should have had some neighbors even with a good amount of distance! Why would they all watch this 12/13 year old girl with her 5/6 year old brother and just say best of luck to yah. Like no wonder she got groomed into a murderer where was the community? You couldn’t even bring them breakfast and lunch? No soup kitchen? What happened to Red Cross? Salvation Army? They had a house, they went to school, they did shopping, Yor fought bears, they were active participants in the society so why were they alone in a post war society?

What happened to aunts and uncles and grandparents and great aunts and great uncles and cousins and in-laws and godparents and neighbors and social workers and i dunno the police man like how did this happen?