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Im Going Insane Over The Bear Rn Because What Do You Mean Mikey And Richie Are Like 15 Years Older Than

I’m going insane over the bear rn because what do you mean Mikey and Richie are like 15 years older than Carmy. That’s insane. Like Richie probably knew this guy when he was a kid. Fucks up their interactions to me so bad because oh my god that wasn’t like some older younger sibling shit. That’s full on like 25 year old adult and like 10 year old kid. That’s not ‘hey slightly younger cousin’ that’s ‘hey baby cousin’. I’m not sane enough to write this out nice. I just need to catch up on the bear and see Richie and Carm breaking my heart being the family ever. More in the tags or something

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3 months ago

thinking about how carmy & richie fighting for all of season 3 is actually their best dynamic, to me.

everyone else was like “i hate to see my baby boys fight uwu” i don’t. i love it. listen to the absolute nonsense coming out of their mouths. i want them to physically wrestle each other like cats. richie should full-body tackle carmy while carmy bunny kicks richie in the stomach.

[vid source: chefkids]


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3 months ago

Does anyone wanna see an old pmv sort of thing I did over a year or so ago. It’s warrior cats and cringe /aff


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3 months ago

Smh every single soul on this app failed me /j

Does anyone wanna see an old pmv sort of thing I did over a year or so ago. It’s warrior cats and cringe /aff


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3 months ago

Clear Sky is a Monster.

Of all the characters in Warrior Cats, I think Clear Sky was the most heavily mishandled.

At every turn, the narrative begs you to sympathize with him, to "understand" the "misunderstood." To this end, his brother Gray Wing is used to "keep faith" in his inherent goodness, his abused son, Thunder, is forced to go back to him over and over, and his second dead wife is completely lobotomized in death to absolve him of all sin.

Because of this, of all this set-up for the "redemption" arc they're trying to tell in the last three books, DOTC is Clear Sky's story. Everything primarily exists to benefit and serve his arc. Thunder and Gray Wing might have POVs, but HE is the character who truly drives the plot. So in order to HAVE conflict for that back half, two evil foreign cats, Slash and One Eye, are summoned to act as contrast.

Their narrative purpose is to display "true evil" to make Clear Sky look less bad in comparison. Unfortunately, Clear Sky is the most malignant, deadly character who has ever blighted Warrior Cats.

The "pure evil" examples they summon aren't effective contrasts because they're flat. Clear Sky is what real abusers look like.

His rhetoric is what it sounds like when a cult leader is trying to keep control over a group. He lies when it benefits him, justifies his actions with his tragic backstory to assuage his guilt and manipulate others, and violently lashes out when his feelings are hurt before blaming his victim for making him angry.

He only made "some mistakes" in that SOME of his actions were accidents-- the vast majority of them were malicious, self-absorbed, intentional choices to punish, hurt, and kill others.

I've spoken about Bumble. I've tallied his body count next to Tigerstar. I've talked about how his infant son's death was his fault in sequel books, and called attention to the infected wound face shoving scene that no one talks about. I can't fit every detail into a single post-- because he's so rancid that I would practically be posting entire books.

So what I want to do here is tackle the heart of Clear Sky. Everything he does, everything he's motivated by, is absolute and utter control over other people. He leverages his "trauma" to evoke empathy from his targets to make them easier to manipulate. He's a dirty liar. He breaks down to physical violence when all other tactics stop working.

He's one of the most severe and realistic abusers I've ever read about outside of very adult literature-- and when I read the reasons why he's attracted to Star Flower, my stomach immediately lurched.

The Killing of Misty

Starvation Rhetoric and the Memory of Fluttering Bird

Aside; a question

Hunger as a punishment; he doesn't care about starvation

Exoneration arc

Predation: Star Flower is a replacement for his son.

I think that index is an evocative content warning. But to say it again; this post contains child and domestic abuse, physical assault, public humiliation, incestuous grooming implications, and a lot of murder.

I need to start with the death of Misty. I see a few people saying that Clear Sky killed her for "being on his land" or trespassing, but this is actually a misstatement that I feel is important to correct.

Misty and her children were on their own land. It was her house. Clear Sky killed her to take it.

This is one of the most important details to remember about Clear Sky, that this is the consistent end point of his obsessive need for power and control. By harassment, by violence, or by death, he will brutalize anyone who does not give him what he wants, or who makes him feel bad, and find some way to justify it.

Meanwhile Petal had managed to pin her opponent down. Misty writhed under her paws, her green
eyes glaring in rage. Both cats were bleeding from scratches along their sides, and blood was
trickling down Misty’s muzzle.
“This is our territory now,” Petal hissed. “Get out of here, and no cat will hurt you.”
“No chance, mange-pelt!” Misty snarled. Heaving herself up, she threw Petal off and jumped on
top of her. Her teeth snapped as they met in Petal’s ear. Petal let out a shriek, lashing out with her
hind paws, but she couldn’t make contact.
“Fox dung!” Clear Sky bounded forward and flung himself into the battle, thrusting Misty aside so
that she had to let go of Petal. Between them they pinned Misty down again, with Petal lying across
her hindquarters. Clear Sky kept one paw clamped on her shoulder while the other was raised to
strike at her throat.
“Give her a chance to leave!” Thunder gasped, before the killing blow could fall.
Clear Sky flicked him a glance. “She’s had a chance. Will you leave quietly?” he asked Misty.
“Never!” the gray-and-white she-cat replied.
She surged upward, her teeth bared and the claws of her one free paw aimed at Clear Sky’s face.
But Clear Sky was faster. His claws tore at her throat and sank deeply through her pelt. Blood gushed
out, bubbling as Misty tried to yowl a last few words. Then she fell back, limp, her blood spattering
over the grass and brambles.

This territory expansion was for no logical reason. There was plenty of food and plenty of land. Any aggression that's happening on this territory is in response to how he's been stealing land and mauling people.

When it's found out she was fighting to defend her children, Clear Sky's immediate response is to slaughter them too.

When he emerged into the open, Clear Sky had already
set the she-cat down and was gazing at her with a somber
expression. Thunder put the little ginger tom down beside
his littermate. The two kits huddled together on the grass,
letting out shrill, frightened mews.
“We can’t leave them here. They’ll die,” Thunder mewed,
positioning himself between the kits and Misty, so that they
wouldn’t see their mother’s body.
Before Clear Sky could reply, Petal came bounding up
from setting scent markers farther upstream. “What have
you got there?” she asked.
Clear Sky’s only reply was a wave of his tail.
“Misty had kits!” Petal’s voice was shocked. “So that’s
why she fought so hard,” she added more thoughtfully.
“She was brave . . .”
Thunder could see deep distress in Clear Sky’s blue eyes.
“They’ll die without their mother,” he mewed. “Perhaps we
should kill them quickly so that they don’t suffer.”
“No!” Thunder let out a yowl of protest.
“Then what do you suggest?” Clear Sky asked. “There’s
no she-cat with milk that I know of.”
Petal stepped forward, placing herself between the kits
and Clear Sky. “I will look after them,” she asserted.

Petal doesn't have milk either. It wasn't about the logistics. He wanted to kill the kids, because looking at them made him feel bad, and she just managed to stop him.

Starvation Rhetoric and the Image of Fluttering Bird

It is often said that Clear Sky is doing this because he's "traumatized" from how his little sister, Fluttering Bird, starved to death in the mountains. That the emotion came from wanting to feed people. That's incorrect. It wasn't about food. Fluttering Bird's death, and all the "starvation" he's faced, are used as manipulation tactics to guilt, influence, and control other characters, particularly when he might meet resistance or be held accountable for something.

It was always, ALWAYS, about control.

He does not care about actually helping people; "Starvation Rhetoric" through Fluttering Bird is an image he can invoke to justify the actions that are as bloody and cruel as the one this post starts off with. Either in his own mind, or in the minds of the cats he's manipulating.

He does this to Falling Feather, before slicing her face open in anger when she doesn't buy it. He does it to Rainswept Flower, before he strangles her to death. And he does it in the chapter just before Misty's murder, both to his Clan and then to Thunder,

Clear Sky waited until the murmuring voices had sunk into
silence. “Greetings, everyone,” he began. “I have called you
here tonight because I have decided it is time to adjust our
territory lines.”
Thunder heard a few cats gasp with surprise. His belly
stirred uneasily. What does he mean by that?
“The forest fire has made hunting harder than ever,” Clear
Sky continued. “It’s my duty as your leader to make sure
that no cat goes hungry.” A pained look crossed his face as
he added, “I would never forgive myself.”
Thunder heard one or two cats let out mews of sympathy.
Frost raised his head and called out, “You have nothing to
forgive yourself for, Clear Sky. Tell us what to do!”
Clear Sky dipped his head in acknowledgment. “Thank
you, Frost. Your loyalty means a great deal to me.”

Clear Sky climbed up in front of an entire crowd and gave a grand speech about hunger and "adjusting" the borders around territory he plans to conquer. When he gets to "forgiveness" he feigns pain to make his point because he is performing. If the sentiment is not a total lie, then at bare minimum, he is intentionally playing this up for the crowd.

He is rallying the Clan to support his violence against the cats whose land he wants to steal, and selling it with his life's hardships.

The audience is clearly well-trained, because several cats recognize the cue, particularly Frost who is praised for loudly comforting him. This signals "loyalty" because showing your sympathy towards his "suffering" is how this type of emotional manipulation works. It creates a persecuted, righteous in-group.

He's also apparently used this tactic before, since this entire crowd knows what "I Would Never Forgive Myself " means.

He's made sycophants out of his followers. Like a cult leader.

His abused son, however, hasn't been fully indoctrinated yet. Seeing Thunder uncomfortable with the idea of expanding the borders for no reason, Clear Sky calls him over for a personal propaganda session.

His father nodded. “I’m calling on you to do your duty.
It’s a great honor—are you up to it?”
Thunder felt as if he was being torn in two. He wasn’t
sure that it was right to expand the territory, and yet he
wanted desperately to prove himself to his father.
“I . . . I know the forest needs time to recover from the
fire,” he stammered. “But I haven’t seen any cats struggling
to find something to eat.”
Clear Sky turned his head away with that same look of
anguish. Thunder waited, realizing that he had said the
wrong thing, until his father returned his attention to him,
looking deep into his eyes. Thunder tried not to shrink
beneath that brilliant blue gaze.
“Of course, you can’t see the signs of starvation,” Clear
Sky explained patiently. “You’ve never had to struggle for
food. You can’t possibly recognize the slow, cruel progress
of hunger.”
“But—” Thunder tried to interrupt, knowing perfectly well
how easy it was to find prey, and how hunting patrols never
came back empty-pawed.
Clear Sky ignored his interruption. “I know it only too
well, from my time in the mountains,” he continued. “One
day a cat looks healthy, and then after a few sunrises you
can count their ribs. I’ve already seen some of the early
warning signs.” He dug his claws hard into the ground. “I
won’t let the mountain tragedies of hunger visit any of my
cats!”
Thunder saw how deeply moved his father was, and
regretted that he had ever questioned him. We’ve only been
together two moons, he thought. I have to learn to trust his
judgment.

Clear Sky begins the exchange by calling this a "duty" and a "great honor." Immediately framing what he plans to do as righteous.

He puts on the act when Thunder shows resistance, dramatically pausing to let the guilt trip sink in.

"Thunder waited, realizing that he said the wrong thing."

And then Clear Sky launches into infantilizing Thunder, talking down to him like a child who's too inexperienced to see the "signs of starvation," acting like he's being "patient" in "explaining" it.

And then we get it. "I know what starvation looks like (so stop trusting your own eyes) because I have been through more than you (so shut up and do what I tell you), and I'm being a HERO for what I'm about to do (so opposing me would make you a bad person)."

Thanks to these crocodile tears, looking "moved," the act works. The victim is immediately wracked by guilt because the abuser seems genuinely emotional.

He even lovebombs him over the corpse of Misty in the next chapter, making Thunder feel threatened.

But to his surprise Clear Sky’s eyes were shining as he
spoke. “Congratulations. You showed compassion when
Misty was defeated. That takes spirit—the spirit of a leader.”
He padded around Thunder, inspecting him closely,
making Thunder feel nervous rather than relieved that his
father wasn’t angry. “I see so much of me in you,” Clear Sky
mewed.
Thunder felt every hair on his pelt begin to rise with the
tension. Why does it feel like he’s threatening me?
“Gray Wing trained you well,” Clear Sky continued,
coming to stand in front of Thunder. “But I will make you a
leader. You’ve shown promise today. Now, let’s get on with
marking the new boundary. Petal,” he added, pointing with
his tail, “you can go that way.”

Thunder doesn't have the words to describe what is happening to him, but he knows that this sudden snap to praise isn't natural. That something is very wrong.

A Question.

Before I move on to show that this IS an act, and that he is lying about how important avoiding starvation is to him, I will ask a question. Please think about it, because I promise I mean it genuinely;

Why does it matter if Clear Sky actually believes this or not?

The victims are just as dead either way, yes? Thunder is just as abused and guilt tripped. The entire Clan has been driven towards violence while coddling and cooing at their Supreme Leader. Clear Sky is slowly annexing the entire forest. If you have ever accepted that he had "good intentions" as an excuse for the harm he did, or that abuse and murder was what he imagined was "the right thing," or that his trauma justifies the way he leverages his own pain to make cats do what he wants... why do you think that?

Why does that make it morally better, as the narrative concludes? Would you accept the same for every other WC villain or antagonist? Tigerstar? Slash? Tom the Wifebeater? Brokenstar? Rainflower?

How could you tell the difference, if you couldn't read their actual thoughts on the page? ...are there any other "good intentions" you've accepted, somewhere else?

Don't share that answer with me. It's a question for you. Sit with it.

Hunger as a punishment; he doesn't care about starvation.

...but, regardless, Clear Sky is not deluded about starvation. It's a justification for his obsessive need for control, and always has been. There was no shortage before stealing Misty's land and kits, he is fully aware that there's more prey than they can eat.

He punishes Falling Feather with hunger and harassment for thought crime, by briefly thinking of leaving. But first, he invokes Fluttering Bird at her like he did before, flying into a screeching fit of rage when she doesn't buy it,

“All you care about is boundaries,” Falling Feather
accused. “You stretch them farther every chance you get.
There’s more to life than territory!”
“Really?” Clear Sky spat. “Do you want to share our
prey with every passing stray?”
“There’s enough prey in the forest to share!”
“But now we have kits! Have you forgotten Birch and
Alder?” Clear Sky couldn’t believe how shortsighted she
was being. “There’ll be more kits one day, and more! Do you
want them to starve, like Fluttering Bird?” Grief echoed in
the back of his mind as he recalled his young sister who’d
died in the mountains. Guilt soured his memory. Would she
have lived if I’d hunted harder? “I never want to watch a kit
starve again.”
“Do you think I do?” Falling Feather hissed. “Stop
pretending you’re moving boundaries for our sake. You’re
just greedy!”
Rage roared in his ears. Fast as a snake, Clear Sky raked
her muzzle with his claws.
Falling Feather jerked away, her paws slithering on the
leaves, and stared as though she hardly recognized him.
He showed his teeth. “Everything I do, I do for all of
us,” he snarled.
Falling Feather backed away, blood welling on her nose.
“Okay,” she growled huskily.
“I’m sorry I hurt you,” said Clear Sky, “but..."

"I'm sorry I hurt you... BUT" is THE wifebeater phrase. THE stereotypical line of a domestic abuser. "I'm sorry I hit you... but it's your fault for making me so angry."

She went through the same exact starvation he did, calls out that he's just framing his greed as being for the collective benefit of his subjects, and is assaulted for that.

Clear Sky shifted his paws. Were they gossiping about
him? Was Falling Feather complaining about the scratch
he’d given her? He wondered whether to interrupt. He didn’t
want cats to talk about him behind his back. But, if he drew
attention to Falling Feather’s whining, he might make it
worse. His pelt pricked uneasily but he held his tongue.
His gaze flicked to Fircone and Nettle. The two young
toms had joined the forest cats only recently. Their loyalty
was still as brittle as dry leaves. They’d persuaded Thunder
to question Clear Sky’s decision to enlarge the forest
boundaries. A growl rattled in his throat. He was going to
have to strengthen their commitment. And teach them some
courage! Brave cats would have questioned him themselves.

When we're in his head, we see his REAL concerns are not about hunger. He invoked Fluttering Bird to try and make her shut up and bow down to him; what he's focused on is her "gossiping" and "whining" about the open wound he left on her face. He's still furious at Fircone and Nettle for how Thunder QUESTIONED him. So he will "strengthen their commitment."

When "starvation" DOES enter his thoughts, it is to assuage his own guilt and JUSTIFY what he already did. What he already WANTS to do. It's post-hoc.

Clear Sky hardly heard her. He was watching Birch and
Alder as they stared from the yew. They weren’t Petal’s kits.
She’d taken them in after their mother had died.
After I killed their mother.
The words rang unbidden in his head. Guilt moved like
worms beneath his pelt. A growl rumbled in his throat. No!
She attacked us! I was just defending my cats.
She was just defending her kits.
He ignored the reproach echoing in his ears and fought
to steady his paws. They were trembling. I must stay strong
if I’m to see my cats through the cold season.

He had to suppress his own guilt at how his greed and ambition made these children into orphans, completely unable to admit that he's ever been wrong or has a change to make, so he invokes the starvation rhetoric at himself to excuse it. So he feels less bad.

Everything, EVERYTHING, in this confrontation is about his pleasure at being able to torment his subordinates. To continue the abuse when the initial confrontation is over. If it isn't pride in his power and control over them, it's plain sadism.

“There’s no room in our forest for cats who aren’t
loyal.” He snapped his gaze toward Falling Feather.
She straightened. “I’m loya—”
He cut her off.
“Falling Feather thought about leaving with them.”
“Only for a moment!” Falling Feather protested.
He was pleased to see guilt flashing in her wide green
eyes. She looked anxiously around at the other cats. Clear
Sky hoped they all saw the same guilt in her gaze. Then,
they’d understand what he was about to do. “Even a single
moment is too long,” he growled. “If we are to make it
through the cold season we need to establish strong
boundaries and unwavering loyalty now.” He stalked to the
edge of the rock and glowered at Falling Feather. “When
times are hard, I need to be able to trust you.”

He invokes starvation in front of the crowd, again, after being pleasured at the guilt in her eyes, hoping that everyone sees her writhing with shame and embarrassment. Fear wasn't at the root of why he assaulted Falling Feather; rage was, and now he feels better that he got to humiliate the person who offended him.

Starvation Rhetoric is a manipulation tactic.

It goes RIGHT BACK to his twisted idea of "loyalty." Obedience.

“That is why she must be punished.”
Falling Feather’s snowy fur spiked along her spine.
“Punished?” Her mew was barely a breath.
Clear Sky looked around the other cats. “If she shows
any signs of disloyalty, it must be reported to me.
Immediately!” He waited until Petal nodded and Leaf blinked
in agreement.
Fircone and Nettle shifted their paws uneasily.
“Immediately!” Clear Sky showed his teeth.
They gave hasty nods.
“Quick Water?” Clear Sky glared at the gray-and-white
she-cat.
“I won’t need to report her.” She glared back. “Falling
Feather would never be disloyal.”
He narrowed his eyes. “Any cat may give Falling
Feather orders. Any cat may take her prey if they wish. She
is lower than a snake until she has earned our trust again.”
Falling Feather’s eyes sparked with hurt but she didn’t
argue. Quick Water moved closer to her friend.

A cat who's actually, primarily concerned about starvation wouldn't encourage other cats to steal her food if they feel like it. He wouldn't be using it as a weapon to retaliate against her because she hurt his feelings.

This is paired with the fact he restricts and monitors the diet of his cats. They eat when he allows it, and only what he gives them, in spite of there being piles of dead animals rotting, going to waste.

Jackdaw’s Cry’s gaze strayed toward the piles of prey. “A little too well fed,” he grunted.
Clear Sky’s tail twitched irritably. Okay, so there was more prey here than they could eat. It’d
start rotting soon and fill the camp with stench. But they weren’t dumb. They could bury carrion.
Jackdaw’s Cry was missing the point. “Isn’t it better to have too much prey than not enough?”
Jackdaw’s Cry didn’t answer.

We then find he personally doles out food from these piles, plucking carcasses off them and flinging them at his cats, one by one. Probably so he can watch how grateful they are to him and make sure they stay a little hungry-- and definitely because it means he can control WHO gets to eat at all.

If Clear Sky chucked a mouse at Falling Feather and someone took it? She would have gone hungry. For not groveling to him. Like when he decides to starve her brother; a hostage who he promised to feed and care for.

Clear Sky padded to the prey pile. “You must all be
hungry.” He plucked a thrush from the top and tossed it to
Thorn, then hurled a mouse to Petal. One by one, he threw
food to his cats and they took it. Nodding gratefully, they
settled down to eat.
“What about me?” Jackdaw’s Cry climbed from his
nest.
Clear Sky narrowed his eyes. “We hunted this prey, not
you.” Why should they share the forest’s riches with a moor
cat?
Falling Feather stepped forward. “You promised
Thunder you’d keep him safe and well fed.”
Clear Sky grunted. “I told Thunder what he wanted to
hear. It was up to him to believe me.”
Jackdaw’s Cry crossed the clearing and headed for the
bramble opening. “I’ll hunt my own food then,” he snarled.
“Not on my territory,” Clear Sky snapped.
Jackdaw’s Cry spun around. “Then I’ll hunt on the
moor!”
“You’ll stay here,” Clear Sky growled, narrowing his
eyes threateningly. “Or the meeting is off.”
Quick Water looked up from the shrew she’d been
given. “It’s two more days till the meeting! He’ll starve.”
“No cat ever starved in two days.” Clear Sky whipped
his tail behind him. Cats took moons to starve. He’d seen it
with his own eyes, back in the mountains.
Muttering angrily, Jackdaw’s Cry slunk back to his nest.
Dumb moor cats. Anger pulsed beneath Clear Sky’s
pelt. Always expecting more than they deserve.
He stalked from the camp, furious that Jackdaw’s Cry
had sullied the pleasure he’d felt from the training session

He's a dishonest snake. He lied about abandoning baby Thunder, calling it a "test of strength," he lied about Bumble's death, he lied about keeping Jackdaw's Cry fed.

And he lied about starvation to Thunder, because he was just making up an excuse to steal more land.

He wasn't "seeing the signs" of starvation when he moved to "adjust" his borders. Even FURTHER into this so-called "delusional slip" into tyranny, he's freely admitting that it takes months for a person to starve when it benefits his sadistic need to punish undeserving cats.

"Dumb moor cats, always expecting more than they DESERVE."

Not need. DESERVE. It's not a delusion about starvation and it never was. STARVATION is how he CONTROLS SkyClan, and once again he's angry that his pleasure has been sullied.

The massacre at Fourtrees was started over Jackdaw's Cry catching a bat after being starved, on land that Clear Sky has decided RIGHT NOW that he also owns, because it mades him think about being disobeyed.

“Whose fault is it I’m hungry?” Jackdaw’s Cry threw an
accusing glare at Clear Sky. “You haven’t let me eat since I
got to the forest.”
What? Outrage pulsed through Thunder. He pictured
the piles of prey in the forest camp, rotting because there
was too much to eat. Hadn’t they shared any with Jackdaw’s
Cry? “You starved him? But . . . you swore that you would
never again see another cat go hungry.”
Clear Sky turned on him. “Don’t you dare speak!
You’ve no right to be heard after everything you’ve done!”
Hurt blazed in his eyes. “You’re disloyal and ungrateful.
First, you left Gray Wing. And then you left me!”

The bat is forgotten as Clear Sky pivots into a tantrum, wanting to make his family HURT for being 'disloyal' and 'ungrateful.' For leaving him. He LIKES seeing people grovel, cower, and beg, getting PLEASURE from watching how he can hurt and command other cats, and if you don't give him what he wants he will kill you.

Which, make no mistake, is what the "First Battle" actually is. Clear Sky attempting to murder those who don't worship him or swear their undying fealty to him and his twisted dictatorship. Particularly his own son, the most prominent victim of his emotional abuse.

Sudden darkness shrouded the hollow. Thunder jerked
his gaze up. Past the towering oaks, he searched for the
moon, but clouds had swallowed it and hidden the stars.
Clear Sky’s mew dropped to a whisper. “You may as
well not exist.” His breath stirred Thunder’s ear fur.
Thunder gasped, shock pulsing through him as he saw
coldness harden his father’s gaze.
Clear Sky turned his head toward the cats below.
“Attack!” He reared and hooked his claws into Tall
Shadow’s pelt and hauled her over the edge of the rock.
Clear Sky pushed past him. “That’s right,” he hissed.
“Stay up here and watch your friends die.” He leaped down
from the rock.

It's not about the bat. It was never even about food or starvation. It's about retaliation for any perceived lack of control.

Once again he breaks out starvation rhetoric to try and manipulate someone, and when Rainswept Flower doesn't buy it just like Falling Feather didn't, he murders her in another fit of entitled rage.

Clear Sky flattened his ears menacingly. “Are you ready
to die just to stop me from making borders?”
Rainswept Flower curled her lip. “You’ll keep stealing
land as long as we let you.”
“Stealing land?” Clear Sky’s mew trembled with rage.
“I’m just making sure my cats never starve.”
Rainswept Flower’s gaze flitted around the lush slopes
of the hollow. “How could any cat starve here? There’s so
much. Wanting more is just greedy!”
“How dare you!” With a snarl, Clear Sky leaped for her,
grabbing her throat between his jaws. Her paws flailed
desperately, lashing out at thin air as he shook her like prey.
Then she hung still.
Clear Sky dropped her, gazing coldly at her lifeless
body. “You never understood. I’m not greedy. I’m just
strong.”

Exoneration arc.

At the end of this battle that was entirely his own fault, we're introduced to the hollowed-out ghost of Storm. She has been flushed of all personality, so that she can be the perfect narrative mouthpiece.

She accepts yet another Fluttering Bird Invocation in spite of how we saw it's not sincere. He was lying the entire time and using starvation rhetoric as a manipulation tactic to get control over his victims.

“You’ve been greedy, Clear Sky,” Storm murmured.
“You wanted power over every cat.”
“That’s not true!” Clear Sky protested. “I had to make
difficult decisions. That took courage.”
Storm said nothing. She just stared at him.
“You must understand,” Clear Sky wailed.
Slowly, Storm turned and gazed at Rainswept Flower’s
battered body. Blood pooled around her muzzle. “Was killing
her courageous?”
Clear Sky stared desperately at Thunder and Gray
Wing. They gazed back in silence, while Rainswept Flower’s
spirit watched him with accusing eyes. Would no cat defend
him? “I didn’t want to see any cat starve. I was scared my
heart would break if I ever had to see another cat die like
Fluttering Bird.”
“Fear is what drove you.” There was relief in Storm’s
mew. She turned back to him, her gaze softening suddenly

And that's it.

That's the consequence. Storm's a little mad at him until he says "Buttering Flird" and she swoons.

He doesn't have to be ""afraid"" anymore because the cats just invented an afterlife to believe in. He keeps all of his power and influence and gets off scot-free, because "guilt" (which we SAW him repressing anyway) is supposed to be the best consequence for murder, abuse, and tyranny.

The husk of Storm even materializes again at the end of book 5 to say it outright; he "never drove anyone away." Not even after Book 4 where it's also his fault One Eye took over his Clan for 5 minutes. It was just destiny.

Storm’s pelt glowed like the moon. “The others
understand you more than you think. You didn’t drive them
away—they had their own paths to follow, and they are right
to follow them. You will see this, in time.” She glanced up at
the stars. “We are all where we belong.”
“Don’t you all belong with me?”
Storm purred. “Oh, Clear Sky,” she murmured

His "redemption arc" is just an exoneration arc. The narrative doesn't think he really did anything wrong.

EVERYTHING about Clear Sky has ALWAYS been about making grabs at power, but since the narrative didn't see a problem with him extorting his personal tragedy and the death of a child, his own sister, he continues doing it. As if these behaviors are normal personality 'traits'.

Even when that sister COMES OUT OF HEAVEN TO YELL AT HIM DIRECTLY,

“but now we don’t even share prey.” Sadness tugged in his
belly.
“And who’s to blame for that?” Fluttering Bird growled.
“You turned against your own.”
“That’s not true!” he snapped back. “I’ve always done
what I thought was best! I tried to take care of my own.”
“Then why do you stand here alone?” Fluttering Bird
demanded. “Who do you have to care for you?”

He finds a way to COMPLETELY miss the point, so he can interpret her words in a bizarrely specific way that will conveniently end with him being the supreme dictator of the entire forest. Just like he ALWAYS does.

His hackles smoothed as calm enfolded him. I understand!
Fluttering Bird was trying to tell him how foolish he’d been
to split from the others and mark out his own territory.
Determination surged through him. Wide awake now, he
stood and crossed the clearing. He slipped past the
brambles that shielded the camp, then bounded out into the
forest. Starlight sparkled on his pelt as he glanced up at the
sky. I understand now, Fluttering Bird! I must draw the cats
close—together once more—so that we can grow strong
and spread like the Blazing Star.

It's the entire 5th book. Clear Sky trying to convince everyone, including himself, that it's Fluttering Bird who wants him to grab at power, NOT himself and his own ambition, that THIS time, he promises, for realsies, it's actually about keeping everyone safe.

But just like ALWAYS, because he does not change, when this tried and true tactic manages to work on Thunder, during ANOTHER exchange where he's dramatically pausing and using the cold shoulder to make his pitiable act land harder,

Clear Sky stopped. “What?” He glanced back warily.
Thunder scrambled to a halt, his lungs burning from the
cold. “I wanted to make sure you got home safely,” he
puffed.
“Is that all?” Clear Sky kept walking.
Thunder swallowed back guilt. “I know the moor better
than you,” he meowed firmly. “You could easily get lost in
this storm.”
Clear Sky flicked his tail.
Thunder followed. “I’m sorry about what I said.”
Clear Sky didn’t answer.
Thunder’s belly tightened. Why should I feel bad? He’s
the one who made the boundaries. Now he wants to abolish
them. He followed Clear Sky, flattening his ears.
The trail opened into a small clearing between the bushes,
and Clear Sky halted. The wind gusted above the heather.
Thunder’s pelt pricked as his father turned to face him.
“I don’t want more cats to boss around.” Clear Sky’s blue
eyes glittered with hurt.
Thunder glanced at the ground. “Well, there was a time
when you did,” he mumbled.
“Not anymore.” Clear Sky’s shoulders drooped. “I just
want us to be together, like we used to be. Fluttering Bird
wants it too.”
Thunder felt a surge of sympathy. Was his father still
grieving for the young sister he’d lost? “What if you’re
wrong?”
“I’m not.”

He lapses right back into bullying his child, creating situations where Thunder will have difficulty or be put in pain, so that he can have an excuse to mock and belittle him.

He was used to the wide smooth expanses of the moor.
Even the rabbit trails between the heather were well worn
and easy to navigate. The uneven path here unbalanced
him, and he found himself concentrating so hard on where to
put his paws that he didn’t see the bramble stem hanging
across the trail. It snagged his ear and he gasped with pain.
Clear Sky paused and turned his head. “Are you okay?”
“Just a bramble.” Thunder glanced at the land rising
beside them. The earth looked smoother up there. And there
were no brambles. Why did Clear Sky insist on picking his
way along this treacherous gully?
“Can’t you go any faster?” Clear Sky called.
“I’m doing my best!” Irritation flashed beneath his pelt.
He’s doing this on purpose. His father clearly wanted to
show how easily he moved through his terrain.
Clear Sky quickened his pace over the root-tangled trail.
I’m not playing your game. Thunder leaped up the steep
bank of the gully and climbed the smooth slope. Shadowing
Clear Sky’s route, he kept to higher ground. A swath of
bracken crossed his path and he pushed his way in,
relishing the tug of the scratchy stalks as they scraped his
pelt.
Clear Sky was waiting at the other side. “You’re supposed
to be following me.” He stood on the slope, his blue eyes
cold.
“I was, but I kept stubbing my paws.”
“You’ve clearly forgotten how to move through a forest.”
Thunder ignored his father’s condescending tone

And this all comes to a head when Clear Sky takes romantic interest in Star Flower, his abused son's previous romantic interest.

Predation: Star Flower is a replacement for his son.

Direct parallels are drawn between Thunder and Star Flower. Star Flower contrasts her loyalty to her father to Thunder's "disloyalty" to his own, in an appeal to Clear Sky.

“It’s hard for a loner,” she went on, her mew silky. “I know
you don’t trust me, but you should. I was loyal to my father
to the end.” Her gaze flicked briefly toward Thunder. “Isn’t
that true loyalty?”
Thunder swallowed back anger. Is she saying I’m disloyal
for leaving Clear Sky all those moons ago? He watched his
father nervously. Would Star Flower’s honeyed words work
on him? Relief washed his pelt as Clear Sky shook his head.

Clear Sky brushes it off for now, citing that he cannot accept her because of who her father was.

But then, Thunder makes the connection between himself and her, because he knows what it is like to be a victim of parental abuse and correctly clocks that they have this in common,

Thunder forced himself to look away, feeling Star Flower’s
desperate gaze burning through his pelt. Was he wrong to
punish her for her father’s sins? She was alone now.
Without One Eye to bully her, perhaps she could be trusted.
Perhaps she’d simply been one of his victims. Thunder felt
his heart twist. “Clear Sky!” He called to his father. “Maybe
we should give her a chance.”
Clear Sky glanced over his shoulder. “She’s One Eye’s
daughter!”
“That’s not her fault!” Thunder knew better than most
that a cat didn’t have to follow in their father’s paw steps.

On his vouch, Clear Sky accepts her into the group. She starts trying to offer himself to him; hunting twice as hard as the others, self-imposing harsh conditions like taking a wet sleeping spot. In their second interaction, Clear Sky begins to take interest in her.

Thunder himself points out that Star Flower is seeking an abusive tyrant to replace her own father, which reads like he's deflecting the stress of how his father is abusing him to deny a connection he already made. As if Thunder sees so much of himself in Star Flower that it makes him (rightly) feel sick that his father is romantically invested in her;

Thunder curled his lip. “You just like him because you
think he’s like your father,” he hissed. “Well, he’s not. He’s
far better than that fox-heart. You’re pathetic, always looking
for some cat to make you feel good about yourself. When
are you going to learn to stand on your own four paws?”

Thunder then goes on to follow his own advice and form his own Clan, because Clear Sky IS like One Eye... while Star Flower remains here. At Clear Sky's side. Because she feels like this is what she "deserves," that she "understands" him, truly believing that her crime (warning her father that Clear Sky brought an ambush in case he lost the 1 on 1 death match he requested, which he did) are on the same level as his abuse and murders.

Clear Sky is attracted to Star Flower because, in his own words;

Clear Sky snorted. Proud young cat!

She is young.

Clear Sky fought to drag his gaze away, but he was caught
in the green depths of her eyes. I will never betray you. As
her words echoed in his mind, his heart ached with hope.

She will not betray him.

Could it be true? Had he finally found a cat who had
complete faith in him? Who would follow him without
question through thick and thin?

She won't question him,

Would she obey him?
She dipped her head. “Okay.” Then she turned and
headed back through the trees. As she disappeared down
the slope, sunshine reached through the branches like claws
and raked her golden pelt.
Clear Sky stared after her, unable to move—he felt as
though his paws had grown roots. His tail twitched.

and she obeys him.

We've seen what "betrayal" is to Clear Sky-- not taking his excuses or his beatings. To "disobey" is betrayal. To "question" is disobedience.

These are ALL things he's tried to drill into Thunder. We saw him happily exploit their difference in age to tell him he can't have an opinion. He constructed humiliating games in retaliation for ever being questioned. He tried to murder Thunder and his friends for their "betrayal." Even now, being disobeyed causes explosive reactions.

He was previously grooming the things he now identifies as attractive in a young woman into his child.

If your body becomes too useless to serve him, like Frost and Jagged Peak, you're thrown out. If you don't unquestioningly follow his bloody commands, like Falling Feather or Thunder, you're subjected to abuse and public humiliation. If you're in his way, like Misty or Rainswept Flower were, you die.

If you meet all of his expectations...

At last, he had a mate worthy of him.

You will be in a horrific position where you will never have agency over your own life ever again. Every move, every word, will have to be carefully crafted so that he feels like you're "loyal" to him by the arbitrary standard he feels that day. Never step out of line, never doubt his decisions, never live for anyone except him and the children you will give him, not even for a moment, because then you will not be "worthy" of his grace.

Star Flower would be in serious danger if this series wasn't written by abuse apologists. They accidentally wrote a perfect reflection of how child abuse victims often find themselves in unsafe and toxic romantic relationships with large age gaps which mirror what they went through as kids; but this team doesn't clock it, playing this relationship as wholesome and genuine.

He finally has someone who ""understands"" him. Because they think the character they wrote is misunderstood.

but reality is plain to see.

Clear Sky is a monster. The most realistic monster in all of WC-- far, far closer to real life predators and domestic abusers than the "born evil" rogues like Slash and One Eye. The Erins seem to believe that what separates Clear Sky from One Eye is "fundamental" good and "fundamental" evil, when the truth is that they'd be separated by very, very little.

If they had realistic motivations, they would be exactly like the character their existence is meant to excuse.

Slash and One Eye HAD to be kept flat and one-dimensional. If the book was more earnest, the only difference between Clear Sky and One Eye would have been that One Eye is stronger. So strong that Clear Sky needed to manipulate the other groups into helping him.

While anyone can change, not everyone will, and Clear Sky has no reason to. He sees no consequences. He has everything he wants; power, a pretty and obedient young mate, and unchecked authority over a brainwashed forest cult. There is always a victim on a leash, a naive enabler, or a bunch of desperate and gullible marks somewhere in his proximity to bully into doing his dirtywork

Whether his "intentions" were sincere or not (evidence points towards not) at its root it was always about control. Power is something he perpetually keeps, and continues to violently use.


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3 months ago

IT IS A CRIME I DIDNT READ THIS SOONER OH MY GOD. it’s so so so good. Absolutely anyone who sees this NEEDS to stalk keebwee’s whumptober

I’m such a sucker for httyd

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WHUMPTOBER DAY 2!!!

Fandom: How to Train Your Dragon (Movies)

Relationships: Dagur the Deranged & Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III, Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III & Toothless, No Romantic Relationship(s)

Characters: Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III, Toothless (How to Train Your Dragon), Dagur the Deranged

Additional Tags: Head Injury, Strained Relationships, Trust Issues, Hurt Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III, Injury, Blood and Injury, Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III Whump, Whump, Whumptober, Whumptober 2024

Pistanthrophobia

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Summary:

Hiccup still doesn't quite trust Dagur, but the Berserker is determined to treat his wounds.

Pisanthrophobia: The Fear of Trusting Others

Whumptober 2024 No. 2: TRUST ISSUES | Alternate Prompt: Regret


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