Drawings I Made.

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Spiderman and Daredevil on a roof.

Spider-Ham and DeerDevil.

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Great Power/Great Responsibility

This scene between Fury and Spider-Man is great. As much as joining a team/having oversight messes with Peter's lone wolf situation, Fury is totally right. I think it's really in character for Fury to offer his services to these heroes because it shows right out the gate that Fury has a heart and doesn't want these kids to die in the field. You also see how thorough he as a super spy seeing as he confronted Peter on Uncle Ben's birthday to better persuade him.

What I would change here is when Fury promises Peter results like Captain America and Iron Man, Peter should be like, "I don't wanna be like them. I wanna do my own thing. A friendly neighborhood Spider-Man type beat," to help to establish Peter's goal going in.

And this doesn't have to happen in this scene, it could be later in the two parter, or could even be a last conversation between Fury and Peter in the final episode. While they're talking about taking responsibility, Peter could say something about how he wants to take responsibility by himself and Fury would counter by asking Peter what would be responsible about SHIELD having all their assets, oversight, and abilities and watch as five teenagers try to figure out heroism alone.

USM!Doc Ock is my favorite variation of the character. Every other version of him I've seen looks really goofy and I think USM took advantage of how creepy he could be and I absolutely love how Otto is otherwise paralyzed if not for his appendages. It really adds to how he's a genius man who's trapped, not only by Norman, but his own body. Tom Kenny's performance as him is stellar. (Go check out the concept art for this dude, it's all so good.)

HARRY IS SO HOT I LOVE HIM ASDFDSJLKFFJELJF

Peter starting a food fight in the cafeteria did an excellent job of showing off his quick-thinking abilities. It held off the Frightful Four and bought him a distraction to change into his suit. Two birds, one stone.

JJJ being pissed at Spidey after the fight was good, but I think he should have pointed out that he didn't even try to lead the fight out of the school and away from the kids. Once Peter sees that JJJ has a legit critique, he'd begin to consider Fury's offer more.

The CAKE. The cake being the final straw was perfect. Peter literally saved the lives of his classmates, and had to check up on Harry in the hospital, but he still beats himself up over not having the bandwidth to pick up Ben's cake.

This is a little nit picky, but the sequence of Peter swinging in the rain to get to the Helicarrier needs to be void of his thoughts. Just watch this scene and hit mute when it cuts to him as Spidey. It has a more fitting tone.

HOW IS THE SPIDER CYCLE MORE EFFICIENT THAN WEBBING. THAT BITCH NEEDS GAS, IT ALSO USES WEBBING, AND IT TAKES THE SPIDER AESTHETIC OUT OF SPIDER-MAN GETTING FROM PLACE TO PLACE. NOT TO MENTION IT'S GOTTEN LOST/TOTALLED ON MULTIPLE OCCASIONS. BULLSHIT.

This moment...

is iconic; one of my favorite moments in the show.

Spider-Man claiming he can take on the Frightful Four by himself and only asking the rest of the team to clear civilians is super in-character. I just wish the rest of the scene showed how their help was desperately needed.

When Spider-Man is back on the Helicarrier, he sounded like he was joining the team because he thinks it'll be fun when he should be joining because he's finally tired of fighting alone.

Me a white girl: I think that Peter and Zendaya MJ are really cute but I just can't ship them when MJ x Shuri exists it's just so cute!!!! Can I just have them as the main couple of the Movie, I'm not a big fan of Parley?? (Harley Keener x Peter Parker whatever their ship name is), Spideytorch is ok I wouldn't hate it but also wouldn't be too into it, Spideypool is ok with more of a comics or older peter but never been much of a fan of spideypool. Spideydevil is cute with an comics or older peter parker but this peter's like 14-15 so NO!!! Maybe it could show a hint of skip westcott (google him if you don't know who he is he's a pedo tho) and make spidey an Ace Aro trans boy with ASD (Autism) . But I just want to see MJ X SHURI. just just look.

Also I also like spider Gwen and Zendaya MJ

I think it's less I want peter to date someone and more of I want MJ to have a badass girlfriend. And I just want to see MJ, Ned and Peter having a 3-way friendship without 2 of the people needing to be in a relationship.

Imagine all the white girls whose heads are exploding because there aren’t any white women Peter’s age in the main cast to ship him with. Imagine all the white girls who are gonna go out of their way to ship Peter with the 19th billed white dude just so they don’t have to ship Peter and Mary Jane now that she’s black 😂😂. I’m living today. I’m living forever. 

Perjury

Based very heavily on this prompt. https://sharcncarter.tumblr.com/post/119890806258/based-on-daredevil-v2-20-25

I have like 5 other draft that i need to figure out what in the world the plot was for them. I'm using the picture above as a prompt. I'm using Andrew Garfield as Spider-Man, you can use Toby's but tom's would be too young I think, he in college about 20-22 btw. Can be spideydevil (Spider-Man x Daredevil) if you want. Karen and foggy know their identities.

Peter POV:

It was a pretty Normal day, I got to my biology 101 on time and we got the just time, did well in my English test, and other college stuff. About 1:40 I got a text from Matt.

Magoo: Hey, can you come over to my place about 4pm? You don't need your suit.

Me: Ok. See you then.

Time skip to 3:57 pm

I knock on the door when the door opens foggy opens the door confused. "Hey peter? What's up?" He asks.

"I don't know Matt told me to meet him here at four. What's up guys?" I explain. While Karen and Matt say hello.

"So we have a case and I need you do do something." Matt explains sitting on the couch.

"So a guy is suing daredevil for property damage, and you took the case?" Peter says trying to wrap his head around what Matt is doing.

"I know that what we're trying to understand." Foggy says exasperated.

"That's right." Matt replies to peter.

"So you, as Matt Murdock are going to court against yourself, as daredevil?" Peter rephrases.

"Yep." Matt replies.

"We both still don't understand why he took that case." Karen tell him.

"You took the case defending castle." Matt tells Karen.

"Am I the only one who cares about what happens to the firm?" Foggy asks. "Because it seems like it."

"And because we're friends you're asking me, Peter Parker to dress up as daredevil." Peter saying sitting on the opposite side of the couch from Matt. "And sit in front of a judge and commit perjury by saying I am the real daredevil."

"Well, when you put it like that..." Matt says.

"Did you really think he would do that?" Karen asks Matt.

"He hasn't technically said no yet, there still hope." the blind avocado at law says.

"No. There really not." The seeing avocado says.

Time skip.

"Please state your name." Franklin Nelson says.

"When I'm in this consume its Daredevil, one word." Peter tells the court.

Matt gives him a small smile and a ok sign.

"I still can't believe he said yes." Karen whispers to Foggy.

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My Opinion on Chole redemption Arc / Half Redemption arc.

She's a 14 year old girl who's mom can't even remember that she exists and her dad is trying to make that up to her by spoiling her and not setting the strict boundaries that all kids need. She should have had a redemption arc. But Gabriel and Lila are completely terrible people who don't deserve to be redeemed.

I don’t quite understand how you can ship Peter with Wade which, yeah is cute when done correctly because some people really can’t write Wade properly, but you don’t ship Peter with Matt Murdock. Like cute blind lawyer and cute nerdy science geek? I love that shit. Plus I think they’d be more likely to meet being as they both live and work in New York where as Wade is busy being a mercenary and whatever. I dunno I just ship Peter and Matt more than I ship Wade and Peter.