The Bad Guys Rewrite

The Bad Guys Rewrite

I'm having trouble rewriting The Bad Guys, mainly just act 2 when the gang goes to be reformed at Marmalade's place. I was thinking of having The Bad Guys still do heists but on them we see each character get brief flashbacks to their past. I just don't know how to go about writing the scenes for it. I plan on the rewrite to still be close to the movie just with improvements since we don't get an explanation as to why these characters feel certain things and how they even got into crime or met each other.

I had to go to the wiki for the books to find out about Wolf's abusive father and Snake being beaten with a rake. These are traumatic but defining moments for the characters that should've been implemented or some kind of backstory to explain the gang's motivations. I just feel disconnected from the characters struggles since it's hardly explored. But what's your opinion and if you agree how would you fix it?

What fish 🐟 crimes did Vaporeon commit tho?? But this seems pretty accurate. But I think Flareon gives some hints of rabbits as well.

THE COUNCIL HAS MADE AN UPDATED DECISION

here, does this make you heathens happy? 😒

Vaporeon is not anything, fist fight me in a denny's parking lot istg (still love the eldritch beast)

If the diagram is too confusing, here ya go:

Eevee: unidentifiable amalgamation of cat/rabbit/dog/fox as arceus intended

Vaporeon: excluded from the diagram for fish crimes, closest to cat tho

Jolteon: dog/rabbit

Flareon: fox/dog

Umbreon: dog/fox/cat

Espeon: Pure Cat (the only pure in this entire evo fam)

Leafeon & Glaceon: foxes/cats

Sylveon: cat/rabbit

Adding on to my post to provide better evidence

Griffen Puatu (Sunday's VA) defends Chris Niosi as Honkai Star Rail fans demand his removal over sexual abuse allegations

Griffen Puatu (Sunday's VA) defends Chris Niosi as Honkai Star Rail fans demand his removal over sexual abuse allegations https://www.sportskeeda.com/esports/news-griffen-puatu-sunday-s-va-defends-chris-niosi-honkai-star-rail-fans-demand-removal-sexual-abuse-allegations?utm_source=www.sportskeeda.com&utm_medium=native&utm_campaign=ShareArticle

sportskeeda.com

Griffen Puatu (Sunday's VA) defends Chris Niosi as Honkai Star Rail fans demand his removal over sexual abuse allegations

Honkai Star Rail has been in a bit of hot water lately, with Chris Niosi's (Moze’s English VA) alleged sexual abuse history being brought in

Why is Hoyoverse just screwing up so much this week. Like first the colorism, then the Neuvillette nerf, now a known SA abuser they decided to hire (they need to do background checks) and Sunday's VA is defending him. This company is actually crazy stupid. I do feel bad for Chris's victims and the employees that are just doing their jobs.

A lovely Harpy Hare Lyre Harp Cover by Samantha on Mars

straight up not true i have spoken to many of the people that have sent me messages and this is a dangerous thing to spread. i won’t deny that there are probably bots but just use common sense. this same post says that the vetting process is just “trust me bro” and that also isn’t true. this post encourages donating to organizations that benefit palestinians instead, and that’s Fine, but to say every single message from an individual is a scam is frankly ridiculous. and harmful

fruity maze in a nutshell