Not A Shadow Of Doubt

not a shadow of doubt

If your plot feels flat, STUDY it! Your story might be lacking...

Stakes - What would happen if the protagonist failed? Would it really be such a bad thing if it happened?

Thematic relevance - Do the events of the story speak to a greater emotional or moral message? Is the conflict resolved in a way that befits the theme?

Urgency - How much time does the protagonist have to complete their goal? Are there multiple factors complicating the situation?

Drive - What motivates the protagonist? Are they an active player in the story, or are they repeatedly getting pushed around by external forces? Could you swap them out for a different character with no impact on the plot? On the flip side, do the other characters have sensible motivations of their own?

Yield - Is there foreshadowing? Do the protagonist's choices have unforeseen consequences down the road? Do they use knowledge or clues from the beginning, to help them in the end? Do they learn things about the other characters that weren't immediately obvious?

so if you are asleep and defenseless, i guess you can be about 300% sure that a prospit kid will jump in front of you and heroically save your life

(thanks to the tags on this post by lightrises !)

GO KIDS!

로고는 구글에서 구한걸 사용했다 :D

Endgame(?)

Wanted to draw what we know so far about each of the characters roles in this battle. :) My hand hurts ahaha.