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“Wait, shouldn’t you be reassuring me or something??” Great.. maybe he really was going to die.

“Man, I didn’t even sign up for this. I think we’re gonna die, yo.”

@quirkdriven

My muse has been having the same nightmare for weeks now and it’s taking it’s toll. Send me “You look exhausted.” for my muse’s response.

a hug for good luck (Mashirao to Todoroki)

* hug prompts

the hug takes shoto off guard, and he tenses in his classmates arms before forcing himself to relax. it’s just ojiro, who is honestly one of his classmates that he gets along with best, and he’s wanted to get better at this anyway, allowing touch from those he trusts. but the hug is already over moments after he relaxes, barely giving him time to return the hug, so shoto just tries to give a reassuring smile as the blonde pulls back, wishing him good luck. 

“ thank you, ojiro, i’ll be fine. we’ll meet back here as soon as we’re done. ”  they’ve been through plenty of fights such as this before, much more frequently than they should be exposed to at this point in their hero training, but it was nothing unexpected by now.  “ be careful. “  it’s said as more of an afterthought, but only because he’s not that used to having teammates or friends to wish luck or care to. 

hozier // angel of small death and the codeine scene

☹ ⇋ - lol get fcked Kiri and Denki

Send “ ☹ ⇋ ”, and it’s your character living the pain. 26. dislocated hip

knowing where to be in a battle was something that was likely to only come with experience, but it was something that eijiro wished he had down already. maybe if he had chosen to stay closer to the others rather than attempting to bulldoze his way to the villain, he’d have been in a better position to try to help them as the villain’s quirk suddenly exploded around them sending them flying. having been the closes to the source of the explosion, eijiro was sent flying back into the building well behind them. he was fine of course, pulling himself out of dents in buildings made by his own body was beginning to become commonplace. 

still, he hurries to his feet with more urgency than usual, the knowledge that his friends had been caught in the explosion too making him rush to check on them. bakugou was already on his way back to the villain, but then he sees denki a couple yards away, still on the ground. with a frown, he hurries forward, and as he gets closer he can see the blonde writhing in pain and holding his hip. dropping quickly to his knees, eijiro glances around quickly to make sure that they are more or less safe for the moment before leaning over his friend. 

“ denki, are you okay? what’s wrong? “  with the cover of his pants, he can’t really see anything wrong, but the lack of blood seeping through has to be a good sign at least. still, denki is clearly injured and eijiro needs to get him out of there before he can properly help him. the decision to lift him without knowing what the injury is exactly is a risky one, but he moves around so he can keep the hip that denki seems to be attempting to curl in around from touching him and tries to keep his legs from jostling too much as well. denki still cries out in pain however, which has eijiro wincing sympathetically as he works to get them out of the line of fire. 

“ i’m sorry, i’m getting you to help, okay.. you’ll be fine.. “ what if something was broken? why hadn’t he stayed closer?