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Back Again. Right Now Progress Is Slow, But Ive Been Looking Into Things And Am Planning To Do An Arg
Back again. Right now progress is slow, but I’ve been looking into things and am planning to do an arg within the story of course the arg isn’t gonna be an irl thing where it’s interactive with the readers but a fictional arg that the characters try to solve and gradually obsess over. Still figuring out the concept for it, but I have seen a few that people have done, most favorite being the editor Wilbur arg. It’s really interesting and has a suspenseful vibe to it,but it gets a little confusing. Anyways, I’m willing to take suggestions on a few concepts and eventually see how it plays out. I’ll leave this here,good whatever time your reading :]

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Quick Tips for Writing Interesting Villains
Give them relationships with other characters. Being a villain doesn’t mean they’re isolated
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1. Stasis
This is the status quo, what life is like for your character before the story really begins. This could last several chapters, or be implied rather than shown if your story begins in media res. Example: Harry Potter’s life with the Dursleys.
2. Trigger
Synonymous with the inciting incident, this is something that happens to the character that kick starts their journey. The trigger could be bad or good, which could affect the nature of the Quest. Example: Percy Jackson is attacked by a monster on a school field trip, and he finds out that he’s a demi-god.
3. Quest
The protagonist has a quest, and sets out on it. This takes up the middle portion of the story. I think the best example is any of the Percy Jackson books, in which Percy Jackson literally goes on a “Quest” starting about 25% into the book.
4. Surprise
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5. Critical Choice
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8. Resolution
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How to use the 8 Point Story Arc
This story structure has its pros and cons. One pro is that you have a lot of wiggle room with these story beats, and it is a time honoured story structure. The issue, on the other hand, is that they’re also quite vague, which you may not want. Everyone interprets these points differently.
In many ways this story structure works best for short stories, because short stories don’t have a long middle, and the two beats ‘Quest’ and ‘Surprise,’ may be all that you need. But in a novel, ‘Quest’ and ‘Surprise’ may seem rather insubstantial for the middle portion of the novel, which most people struggle the most with anyway.
You can also use this structure on multiple levels, using it to plan your entire book, but also using it to plan chapters and scenes within your book.
If you’d like to read more about the 8-Point Story Arc, read about it in Nigel Watts’ book, Writing a Novel and Getting Published.
Hellooo the writing frog has returned(no am not a furry or whatever is the equivalent to an amphibian humanoid>:[) and have some news. The writing process has been abit slow due to being busy and all, but I’ve managed to do a few summaries of the upcoming arcs. There’s still a lot I have to work on, but it’s ok. I also got some conceptual art from a few artists two of the characters being Shun and Atsuko. I’m excited for everything to come together and hopefully show more progress anyways I’ll leave this here good whatever time your reading this.



First two drawings: Shun Nakajima
Last drawing: Atsuko Fujimori
@tvpixel (unfortunately the other artist doesn’t have tumblr, but more art will be posted)
So didn’t expect for the night in the woods post to get as much notes lol, but anyways so far in the game I already made it through where Mae and Bea go to the graveyard which was fun. The thing I like about the game is how homey it feels with the fall vibe and the random dreams Mae has. It’s really interesting well anyways good whatever time your reading this.
