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Alcina Dimitrescu, my beloved.

VILLAGE CAST resident evil village, 2021

She will always be wife 🧎‍♀️

I mainly write fanfics/ x you/reader stories but I can't help but feel like I use the word "you" SO often. When I read over my works I feel like I use the word "you" multiple times in every other sentence but I have absolutely no idea how to get around it and I'm worried it gets too repetitive. Any advice on how to get around that??

Fan-Fiction: Too Much "You" in X You Story

If I'm understanding "X-You" fan-fiction correctly, it's written in second-person, meaning the narrator says things like, "You walk up the stairs and turn down the hall. A long, dark corridor stretches out before you, sending chills down your spine."

If you feel like you're overusing "you," it may be because you're doing a "laundry list" of actions rather than telling a story:

You walk up the stairs. You turn down the hall. You see a long, dark corridor stretching out before you. You feel chills skittering down your spine. You swallow past the knot in your throat and start walking. The floor creaks under your foot and you jump at the sound. You take a deep breath and keep moving forward.

See how that's just a list of actions? You did this, you did that, you did some other thing. Try rewording:

A central stairway leads to a long, dark corridor stretching in both directions. With a gulp, you turn left and start walking as chills skitter down your spine. The floor creaks and you jump at the sound. Swallowing past the knot in your throat, you keep moving forward.

From eight yous to three just by rewording. Part of that is relying more on showing rather than telling. "You walk up the stairs" is telling, but "a central stairway leads to a long, dark corridor" is showing. The character could only know there is a corridor at the top of the stairs if they walk up it, and the reader is smart enough to assume that they did.

I hope that helps!

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RL Height Chart

I did my best. I just wanted to see how everybody looked standing next to each other. MC being eye line to Bela's boobs is my basis and used @resident-lover's official answer for the women's confirmed heights.

If you’re on mobile and can’t read, it’s just their height in feet. And Alcina’s hat make her seem taller than Bela and Daniela.

MA’AM

was tthinking about this one gif for days now and it screamed lady d so i had to do smth about it..

beware of women kissing (almost 😝‼️

characters from @resident-lover ‼️

RESIDENT LOVER - Headmistress Miranda

reblog if it's okay for your mutuals to message you and create an actual friendship, not just interactions

"My love, if you do not obey, I will get a leash and train you."

So anyway I took that line personally and made some fanart for @resident-lover.

Wish I was as good as finch but I tried my best :)

women's thighs. you agree. reblog.

✅ dead

✅gay

✅traumatized

✅mass murderer

Yes yes yes yes yes! I love this!!!

The girls found some very interesting stories…🤭

reblog if you got curly hair

kinky, tight, loose, short, long, nappy, you name it

Woman’s got a chokehold on me—

Thank you @marilynthornhilllover! I loved doing this!

NPT: @milfsloverblog @alexusonfire @lodgeofeilhart and anyone else who wants to join! ❤️‍🔥🫰🏽✨

Ok, here's a fantasy game because I want to feel nostalgy (there was a period of time, when my dream №1 was becoming an elf)

So, here we go

1) take this quiz

2) make your own character, based on the result, using this piccrew (the character can look whatever you want)

3) repost with your quiz result and your character. Don't forget to tag somebody

Feel free to take part even if you weren't tagged :3

I'll go first

I'll tag: @sparrows-my-abhorred

First off, I would like to say that everyone who has a problem should read this to clear the air about the whole situation and FUCKING reflection on their comments and thoughts made.

Anyway, @yourlocaldisneyvillain I just wanted to say, you made people aware ahead of time warning everyone that it may be slightly twisted. When you finally posted it I read the first chapter without assumptions being made because I know for a fact you wouldn’t write something sexually involving a minor and an adult. I am truly sorry that you have been getting snuffed out and hated on for trying something new pertaining to darker themes, as well as, for having to explain yourself. Just know that you have people there to support you and understand your intentions! If anything, if people were so offended, then why read the work? They simply are trying to find something to do.

You have my full support @yourlocaldisneyvillain ! I will be reading the next chapter! I’m also looking forward to the mystery/thriller story! Let me know how it goes! I would also love to be tagged whenever you post it!

Willow

i would like to be in and foster an online environment in which discussions abt controversial topics can be handled civilly without ppl ganging up and sending an influx of anon hate. i think internet in general is a space where ppl love to be outraged and i want to challenge that. that's partially why i wrote this fic. i am tired of purity culture and of fandom/online hivemind. in a fandom where a lot of ppl clearly enjoy age gap ships, i say, what makes one better and more "morally correct" than another? what makes a sugar mommy au better than a college student x teacher fic? so many fics featuring dark themes are popular in this fandom (don't wanna name any names bc i don't wanna get anyone involved), but THIS is the one ppl are upset about?

i wanna ask a question -- is it possible to write a fic where ppl are NOT morally pure but still somehow manage to live and find happiness? why is it forbidden to explore those themes in fiction? when you look at ppl in real life and how weirdly their lives shape up, and how ppl are flawed and make mistakes and live unconventionally or sometimes immorally or unhealthily, doesn't that interest you? in a sense that you would like to read about it? explore what goes on in the minds of these ppl/characters?

ppl forget exploring a theme in fiction doesn't equate to condoning it in real life. each individual has to use their own best judgement when consuming a piece of fiction. i assume everyone reading my fic is an adult (as i write fics intended for adult audiences) and can form their own opinion.

i would like it if people could use their reading comprehension and critical thinking skills when reading my fiction, without me having to put up exact and specific 1826372929392 word disclaimers, so ppl's fragile feelings wouldn't get hurt. would it really be okay if i wrote in all caps before the story WEDNESDAY IS 22? you could have read the first paragraph and figured that out. i tagged it as teacher-student bc it's playing with the concept, even if they are not a student/teacher in the timeline of the story. i use implied underage sex as a tag bc in the 2nd chapter, and repeatedly throughout the story i reference larissa and morticia's relationship, that has occurred when they were underage. i mention that they engaged in sex. it is only mentioned, and not explicitly described. do you need me to write all of that out under the title in order not to send anon hate and clutch your pearls in disgust? or can you just read the story and decide if it's for you or not?

i implore you to read all of my works as a story, without attaching a moral judgement to characters' actions. if and when you do attach a moral judgement and form an opinion, pls remember those are fictional characters, and i am an author exploring certain themes bc i can and it interests me to do so. i want to write unconventional stories, controversial stories, romantic stories, funny stories, horror stories, i want to explore everything. everybody who reads is invited to look at them as a piece of fiction they can enjoy or not enjoy, and nothing more. i hope to take you on a journey that leaves you with something to remember, good or bad, but impactful.

from now on, i will probably write longer works and venture into darker themes (next thing i'm planning is murder mystery/thriller). there will still be fluffy pieces, but i just want to push myself out of my comfort zone. i would like to associate with fandom ppl who are open-minded and can read a piece of fiction without going ballistic. if you look at things black and white, you likely won't like my fiction -- and that's okay.

however, if for any reason you want to send me hate, you will absolutely be blocked. i am a person, and i do not deserve insults and rudeness in my inbox. it's easy to feel empowered and feel like you're fighting for A Cause (TM) and attach the Bad Guy etiquette to a single person. that can feel like you're solving something. esp when ppl accuse me of promoting actual p3dophilia -- that's a cause everyone can get behind. banish the evil p3do apologist!

i am a victim of child sexual abuse, that went on all throughout my formative years, and into my adult age, simply because i thought that's how it must be. that experience has scarred me beyond belief. i don't want to share the details. it's not smth i'm sharing for pity points, nor do i need anyone's sympathy. however, it is an experience that has shaped who i am, and perhaps for that reason, combined with other things, is why i'm drawn to certain themes in fiction. i don't owe anybody an explanation as to why i choose certain topics, but since there have been idiots in my inbox who have accused me of harming victims of minor sexual abuse, i feel compelled to say something. fuck you for using a group of suffering ppl to support your own flimsy arguments born out of puritanism and inability to cope with heavy themes in fiction.

you are absolutely welcome to CIVILLY discuss your opinions about the fic with me -- off anon, exclusively. but i know nobody will, bc this isn't about the actual contents of my fic, this is about the delicious morally righteous thrill of a witch hunt.

enjoy the fic. i will post next wednesday.

reblog this if you like coffee or want to be dominated by women

When they are heads of schools...

I feel very attacked in my sensitive spots...

I didn’t even notice this before 😭😭😭😭 My heart 💘❤️‍🔥✨

I always assumed lady Dimitrescu sat at the head of the table because. But look at this she’s sitting right across from her daughters like this is so much closer and she wants to look at all three of them and give them her undivided attention.

I’m sorry but this is the sort of mom who’d sit at the dinner table and have her kids talk none stop about their day with her nodding and giving appropriate remarks of praise and approval like no wonder those girls adore their mother like this she truly loves them and it shows

Larissa ft. suppressed rage

ˏˋ°•*⁀➷ fight and flight dialogue prompts

@celestialwrites for more!

FIGHT

✩ “you know what? screw you!”

✩ “i can’t deal with you.”

✩ “we’re nothing! i’m sorry you never saw that earlier.”

✩ “what’s wrong with you!” “what’s wrong with me? what’s wrong with you!”

✩ “stop just stop! this is the last time you put me in this situation.”

✩ “how hard is it for you to realize that you hurt me? how hard is it?”

✩ “i cried when you left, i cried when you came back and then you have the audacity to fight me over this?”

✩ “you’re doing nothing but breaking my heart all over again.”

FLIGHT

✩ “alright go ahead! leave again!”

✩ “come back, we’re not done with this!”

✩ “i can’t deal with this, good bye.”

✩ “last time we talked like this, you left and I didn’t see you for two years!”

✩ “stop this! you are getting on that plane and you are getting on it without me.”

✩ “just leave and it might be best if you don’t come back.”

✩ “i’m scared of losing you, but i can’t help wanting to run away.”

<3

Different Ways to Describe Eye Colors

↳ a masterpost for writing prompts that describe eye colors

Brown Eyes

Blue Eyes

Green Eyes

Hazel Eyes

Unusual Eyes

Gray Eyes

Heterochromia Eyes

Black Eyes

White Eyes

Hazel Green Eyes

Gold/Yellow Eyes

Reddish-Brown Eyes

Yes.

The symbolism of flowers

Flowers have a long history of symbolism that you can incorporate into your writing to give subtext.

Symbolism varies between cultures and customs, and these particular examples come from Victorian Era Britain. You'll find examples of this symbolism in many well-known novels of the era!

Amaryllis: Pride

Black-eyed Susan: Justice

Bluebell: Humility

Calla Lily: Beauty

Pink Camellia: Longing

Carnations: Female love

Yellow Carnation: Rejection

Clematis: Mental beauty

Columbine: Foolishness

Cyclamen: Resignation

Daffodil: Unrivalled love

Daisy: Innocence, loyalty

Forget-me-not: True love

Gardenia: Secret love

Geranium: Folly, stupidity

Gladiolus: Integrity, strength

Hibiscus: Delicate beauty

Honeysuckle: Bonds of love

Blue Hyacinth: Constancy

Hydrangea: Frigid, heartless

Iris: Faith, trust, wisdom

White Jasmine: Amiability

Lavender: Distrust

Lilac: Joy of youth

White Lily: Purity

Orange Lily: Hatred

Tiger Lily: Wealth, pride

Lily-of-the-valley: Sweetness, humility

Lotus: Enlightenment, rebirth

Magnolia: Nobility

Marigold: Grief, jealousy

Morning Glory: Affection

Nasturtium: Patriotism, conquest

Pansy: Thoughtfulness

Peony: Bashfulness, shame

Poppy: Consolation

Red Rose: Love

Yellow Rose: Jealously, infidelity

Snapdragon: Deception, grace

Sunflower: Adoration

Sweet Willian: Gallantry

Red Tulip: Passion

Violet: Watchfulness, modesty

Yarrow: Everlasting love

Zinnia: Absent, affection