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"Red rubbed his head on your leg, you were going to have a lot of cat hair."

I Chose The cute little hairless cat

Yes, sorry for the mishap with the coding. I actually noticed that right after I posted the demo. Don't worry, it will be fixed in the next update, along with all the other little mistakes. You will get to have your little wrinkly baby rub on your leg without the mention of fur. Lol. Every cat owners dream!

So I really like this so far but... I'm doing everything to be stoic and indifferent and i'm just not getting that vibe. MC described stoic as being distant (Yet doesn't act as someone who is distant without us having to choose it every time). We know that With stoicism people don't show much emotion or facial expressions, they basically keep both of those things in check and close to their chest at all times, regardless of how they feel on the inside; and on the rare occasion that they do show any, it's dry in nature. Leveled not really allowing a person to gauge the true Feeling behind the person's words, right? Basically detached.

Indifferent- We know of course, is not caring one way or the other . No emotions needed because you simply don't care enough to waste energy on the topic or situation...it's like Eh, whatever. This is Another form of being detached.

Basically MC seems to be a tad bit the opposite. Which isn't an issue per say but it def breaks immersion when you're going for a specific personality.

Like being outright comforting, caring etc. Those feelings could 100% be there when writing an MC who is stoic or indifferent but they'd do it in a more subdued way. More straight-faced or nonchalant. This is in reference to how MC seems to be okay with using comforting words and gestures(like touch) which is more the line of a friendly individual. Lol Not someone who was indifferent about their mothers death and didn't even want their own friend hugging them low-key.

Okay, sorry for that whole Novel. I hope it doesn't ruin your mood or anything. I definitely don't want that. I just thought maybe pointing it out now, you could add more stoic and indifferent behavior(for those with higher stats in that area), in the natural and linear interactions of the story in the future updates.

Either way I'm loving the story so far, I really like Tai but i'm purposely keeping my distance for now Lol.😅

Hi! Yes, I completely know what you mean, and this is something that my beta tester has also pointed out, and I completely understand where you are coming from. I do plan to make more stoic and indifferent choices in the writing if you were to choose stoic, where instead of voicing your concerns, you will be having more of a conversation in your own head. Where the MC will hide their emotions more.