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Omg! Auntie and Camila's mom (forget her name..sorry) is so cute! Please tell me we can get them together ❤️!!!

Yes! You can, and your MC can even have a journey about how to let your aunt Zinnia go if MC has some unhealthy emotional attachment to your aunt, or you can play hardcore matchmaker! The choice is yours!

Hello I just wanted to ask a question if it is bothering you do not worry about it.

Is Camila an RO?

Hi! No, sorry. I have gotten a lot of messages about their love for Camila, and it makes me so happy. However, I am sorry to say that Camila will only see you as a friend. However, I am thinking of writing about the first crush moment when MC and Camila were little kids in a flashback. I think it would be cute. I am planning to have Camila romance someone else (maybe with the help of the MC??????).

Signs?

I am guessing you mean Star Signs, which I have really no information on; however, here is a link to the ROs birthday ask that I have gotten before.

ASK

Barbenheimer season: would the ROs watch Barbie, Oppenheimer, both or neither?

💛Marcel: Barbie all the way!

🧡Margaret: Would want to see both because she loves TV and everything new about the modern world, but she would probably cry during Oppenheimer and love Barbie.

❤️Owen: Would go to Oppnheimer, and then after, would go to Barbie.

💙Rosemary: Barbie. Oppenheimer brings up alot of bad memories.

🩵Tai: Oppenhemier. 100% would enjoy the history. But if you wanted to see Barbie, he would go with you.

💚Zane: Both. Would loudly talk during both movies and would get you both kicked out, then you would make out in the janitor's closet.

Happy Thanksgiving if you are American! I saw this ask on another blog and I thought it was cute; What would the ROs bring to a Thanks/Friendsgiving dinner and what would Aunt Zinnia cook?

Happy Thanksgiving to you as well. As for your ask.....

Zinnia: Zinnia would definitely be the one hosting Thanksgiving and would bake all kinds of sweets, from her famous lemon bars to apple pie; however, she is horrible at cooking, like very bad, so you would have to order in or get it precooked. I have imagined you, the MC, just being surrounded by sweets and like one thing of Chinese takeout on Thanksgiving.

💛 Marcel: Marcel would bring Concia di zucchine, his favorite dish when he was younger, which would bring back so many complicated memories, and he would have to leave the room for a little bit but would come back a little happier.

🧡 Margaret: a burned pie. Only charcoal remains.

❤️ Owen: Nothing? I really can't see him bringing anything, but if he had to, he would bring just some unsalted green beans. No effort. 

💙 Rosemary: Wine

🩵 Tai: The most beautiful and well-cooked turkey you have ever seen

💚 Zane: The blood of his enemies. Mac and cheese.

Incorrect Quotes

Tai: "Why does Rosemary seem more irritated than usual?"

MC: *Looks towards Tai* "Oh, she took one of those "Which character are you?" quizzes."

Tai: "And?"

Owen: *walks in, eating a bag of chips* "She got you

Some facts about Marcel........please 🥺

Of course!

Marcel is a vegetarian (his favorite dish was Concia Di Zucchine when he was younger).

He was married before his death.

had a half brother

grew up without a last name; it was actually Tai who gave him the last name, De Rosa, and it stuck.

calls Owen, Tai, Margaret, and Rosemary his family and sees them all as siblings.

He views family as one of the most important things in his life

Amazing with kids.

He had a record. (What kind? That is for you to find out ԅ(≖⌣≖ԅ)) 

Which ROs are slowburn to full whirlwind romance?

You can start a sexual relationship with Rosemary early on; however, I am going to treat this in a romantic sense. 

Slowburn to Wirlwind

Rosemary-Zane-Tai-Margaret-Owen-Marcel

Hi! Thank you for the ask! To answer your question, Sheldon doesn't actually have a Canon look. Sheldon is a character that you have total control over of how he looks like via the opposite of the MC. The only thing canon is that he does not look anything like your MC. Sheldon will come up more in the next update and in the future via flashbacks.

Thank you so much for the ask! To answer your question. Yes, Camila and Luis are siblings and both have the same parents; however, Luis really got his father's looks, and his hair is actually brown like his sister's and mother's, but he dyed it black, which is why his hair is not brown in the portrait of him. To answer your other question, their mother, Triana , is Puerto Rican, while their father, who will come up in the next update, is from Portugal.

💛 Marcel: Mischievous as hell. He was known to help other kids if they needed something like food or some type of medicine, and a lot of the little kids were drawn to him and tried to follow some of his stunts, like stealing and pranking around the village, which left many of the adults to name him as a troublemaker. As he grew, he kind of grew out of the mischievousness; however, he still used his skills if it was necessary, but he was known to have a golden heart who helped everyone. 

🧡 Margaret: Proper, but bashful. She would mimic her sister, who was considered the ideal child by many. Her father stifled her early curiosity, which led her to follow in her sister's footsteps when she was younger and much more inquisitive about the world. She attended all of her lessons, ate her veggies, curtsied to everybody (even to people who were considered less than), and had manners. 

♥️ Owen: Wild. He didn't have the best childhood, but he always got into fights or found some sort of trouble. He was very bold and stood up to bullies when he saw them, which honestly just got him bullied more, which left a lot of the other kids wanting nothing to do with him. He didn't mind; he had his imagination, which never let him down. 

💙 Rosemary: She was a total rebel and very strong-willed. She had older brothers and a strict father; she was known to do the opposite of whatever her father said if she thought that it was holding her back. Loud even when she was called "unlady" and persuaded some of her brothers to cover for her if she snuck out or skipped out on work. 

🩵 Tai: He was a very bubbly child when he was very young; however, as he got older, he became more stoic due to events in his life. He was very observant of the people he would spend a lot of time with, but no one really knew anything about him. He was a mystery, even to the people who considered him a friend. As he grew, he dived into work that was in front of him, even though he hated it to the point that it was unhealthy. However, he was seen as a star worker to his superiors.

💚 Zane: Sad and angry, not much has changed. He was alone most of the time; his caretaker was not the most welcoming, so he was very much left alone with himself. He would do puzzles against a mirror and pretend that someone was there till he finally realized that he would rather die than be let down again, so he very much grew closer to [redacted] with the help of his caretaker, which let some sort of twisted bond grow between them.

💛 Marcel: Marcel loves the winter season now, but back in his other life, the winter solstice was much more of a chore and really for the rich, as it was a time to feast, which Marcel really couldn't afford, and to worship the gods, with whom he had a very strained relationship.

🧡 Margaret: Margaret has always loved the winter season, especially Christmas, which her family celebrated. Margaret and her older sister would put on a play every year on Christmas Eve, and on New Year's Eve, her father would always have a ball at their manor.

♥️ Owen: Honestly, he does not care one way or the other. His family didn't celebrate Christmas or really any holiday during the winter. Back when he was alive, the winter solstice was a time of dread and famine; however, now he only sees the winter season of today as more of a hassle that people put themselves through. Although he can appreciate it, there really isn't as much of a dire need to survive the winter anymore unless you count holiday shopping.

💙 Rosemary: Rosemary also adores Christmas, just as her mother did; however, don't expect her to just sit there and enjoy the pretty lights. Oh no, no, no. She is going all out; she wants to decorate, bake cookies, and go Christmas caroling. All through the season, she is going to be enjoying whatever the winter has in store for her, and she will drag you along for the ride

🩵 Tai: Tai was actually raised Buddhist and celebrated holidays such as Chinese New Year and other family traditions brought from China; however, as he got older and was surrounded by more American traditions, especially more Christian ( Methodists), he adopted those as well, and while he celebrates both Christian and Buddhist holidays, he really doesn't go way out, but if you really wanted him to go all the nine yards, he guesses he can make that sacrifice.

💚 Zane: Bitter. Growing up, he would see all the other children having fun while he would have to train, which left him a big old grinch during this holly jolly holiday. However, he does enjoy the cold. Growing up, he would make snow angels or, honestly, just lay in the snow until his lips turned blue. I do think if he has the option to grow close to you, he would enjoy the holidays and would like to do all the cheesy holiday stuff with you, but you better believe he wants to be paid back in full. Maybe with some red and green lingerie? Lol. 

You glanced at the mistletoe hanging above the doorway and let out a small smirk as you called them over. Their eyes twinkled when they met you under the doorway, not seeming to notice your little trick, but after a few seconds, they glanced up, noticing that you were under the mistletoe.

💛 Marcel:

Marcel looked back at you and studied you for only a second before he gently took your cheek, giving you time to pull away before his lips touched yours in a sweet, lingering kiss, the taste of Aunt Zinnia's chrismas cookies and hot coco mixing together in perfect bliss.

The curly-haired man pulled back, his thumb gently rubbing against your lower lip before giving you two even more distance.

"We...we should get back to the party." However, he didn't let go of your hand.

She disappeared in the crowd of people, leaving you standing there.

🧡 Margaret:

Margaret looked back at you, a small pout coating her lips. "Why is there a Viscum album hanging from your doorway?"

You gave her a soft smile and explained the tradition, and she immediately popped up with excitement and a bright red blush.

"So, it is tradition, right?"

You gave a small smile and nodded.

She gave you a small peck on the lips, and before you know it, she is running away with you, her face even more red than before.

"Thank you! It was nice!"

"Tradition is tradition." He said it in a surprising, soft voice before going back to the party.

♥️ Owen:

Owen let out a bark of laughter and looked around the room. "Who is trying to get pregnant?"

You frowned in confusion for only Owen to explain. "That is a mistletoe; legend says that if a woman were to kiss under it, she would come with a child."

You laughed a little and explained the newer tradition, which Owen even laughed harder at.

"Ye'r kidding? So, it is an excuse for people to make out with their love at a bloody party? That feels even more ridiculous than the fertility thing."

You tried not to let your disappointment show, but you felt a small peck on your cheek. It was so quick that you thought you imagined it, and when you looked at the redhead, he didn't make eye contact with you.

She walked away with a little sway in her hips, and you are left standing at what just happened. 

💙 Rosemary:

Rosemary gave you a raised eyebrow and knew instantly about your little trick; however, she just pulled out a ruby-red lip stick and a pocket mirror while you watched in confusion. 

"What are you-" 

Rosemary shushed you with a look, and with a new coat of red lips stuck on her lips, she leaned forward and gave you a passionate kiss, leaving your legs weak as you leaned back against the door frame. When you both caught your breath, you noticed that her new coat was all but gone and a little smudge, then it clicked that the red was all over your own lips, probably smudged beyond compare to Rosemary's. 

Rosemary grinned. "You love quite... blissful Angelface/Handsome/Dollface...now go show off your pretty pink lips." 

Tai nodded as you handed him a drink, sipping from your own red Solo cup in a casual manner and making some small talk. However, you felt Tai's eyes linger on your lips with a regretful look.

🩵 Tai:

Tai's eyes snapped back towards you, and he stepped back in what looked like fear and something else as you saw him swallow, letting out an uncharacteristic meek. 

 "No."He pressed his lips together, a faint blush painting his cheeks.

You put your hands up in surrender. "I'm not going to force anything on you, Tai. "

You felt a shiver run down your spine.

💚 Zane:

Zane gave you a dangerous look before grabbing you by the chin and pulling you in for a rough kiss, teeth clashing together, and when you come up for air, Zane bites your lip.

"I am guessing you're my present this year." Zane squeezed your ass before leading you upstairs.

"Where are we going?" You said it in a dazed voice, following Zane before you could rationalize anything.

Zane chuckled from low inside his gut. "Oh little lion, I don't share what's mine. I don't need anybody looking at you while I make you scream."

Does the game lack a save function or is it locked behind a certain amount of progress?

Hi! Sorry, but the save system will not be in the interactive fiction until the next update. I already have one made for the next update, including the rest of Chapter 3.

Release Date for Chapter Three

It is finally here: the release date for Part 2 of Chapter 3. I am sorry that it took so long, but I am happy to announce that My Inner Sins will be updated on 2/18/2024. There were a lot of changes made that I think everyone will appreciate, including an actual save system and an updated stats profile for your character.

DEMO

Thank you to everyone who sent me words of encouragement via asks. I would like to have a very sincere thank you to @albywritesfiction who has helped me with coding.

Notes:

There are now saved slots, so you are able to save your progress, and I have changed that you will now not have a set personality, but now you are going to be building your personality, which will affect certain situations. Please, if you find any mistakes in coding or grammar, please message me via Tumblr to fix the problem. I want to make this the best possible interactive fiction and story that I can, so I will be very grateful for your help. I also have changed some names around so if you see a few things different then do not fret to much or just feel free to ask about it.

Word Count:

Chapter 3: roughly 108579 words

Total: roughly 133111 words

CHAPTER 3:

get to meet the rest of the ROs

maybe learn about some family secrets

have the option to make things right with Jezebel

Learn more about the Cam's family

Grow you connection with the ROs

Woah I am like so happy for you getting this update out!

I lovvvvvvvvvved it! I literally saved a save for each RO because I wanted to read all the interactions. And you let me make Tai blush omg I love Tai's Tsundere butt so much.

And Margaret × shy MC is beyond adorable!!!!

I was not expecting Marcel to be so smooth lol

You just fueled my love for this again. Tho I still have the same problem. Every RO is so appealing (to my detriment that includes Zane who i still love above the rest)

and I have loads of questions but I won't spam you with them in one ask

(but expect asks lol sorry )

God's you even made the side characters lives intriguing. It's so good 😭💜

Thank you so much for reading! I did not expect anyone to read My Inner Sins, but I appreciate it so much that you love it! Feel free to ask as many questions as you like! I don't mind! 🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷

I cannot wait for the update. It's in my calendar 👀😅

How are you doing? I hope you are well.

I was wondering how the ROs would react to MC giving them flowers on valentine's day during the crushing stage.

I know I'm a bit late with the valentine's day ask 🙈

Thank you so much! I am doing well! I do hope you enjoy it. I do hope that chapter three isn't too short; it is longer than any other chapter in My Inner Sins, but either way, I hope you and everyone else enjoy the story. 

As for the ask.....

💛 Marcel

Marcel looked at the beautiful bouquet of daffodils that you handed him. 

The man in front of you smiled, and for only a second, you thought you saw his eyes tear up, which made you panic until he glanced back at you with a bright smile.

"They are beautiful....." Marcel grabbed one of the flowers and placed it behind your ear. "Thank you, $Name; I will make sure to repay you for this gift." 

He held out his hand, which you took, making your skin warm all over as he led you down the street towards the boutique. 

No matter what you said or did, you came back with a handful of flowers, chocolates, and an ecstatic Marcel, who made sure you didn't stay out too late and walked you home.

🧡 Margaret

Margaret was a buddle of nerves as she took the bouquet of bright marigolds. "I-thank you so much, $Name." Margaret said softly as she looked at you with shiny eyes, When your eyes met, her blush became more radiant.

You noticed her tapping foot as she started spitting out facts about flowers. As she hid herself behind the flowers, she made a sound like a squeak when her words started to jumble together.

"M-M-Marigold flowers are edible. Whether u-used fresh, dried, or infused into v—various beverages, m-marigolds have a-a-a multitude of uses in the kitchen."

You let her ramble on as you both walked down the street; eventually, she took your hand and gave you a nervous smile when you squeezed it back in reassurance.

♥️ Owen

"What the bloody hell are these?" Owen wrinkled his nose at the roses that you presented him with.

"Uh…flowers.."

Owen rolled his eyes. "Well, no shit lass/duck/lad, I am more confused. Why the hell are ye giving them to me."

You started to explain what Valentine's Day was and noticed how his face changed from surprised to uncomfortable. "Listen luv as much as I appreciate the gift; this holiday sounds stupid as hell."

You tried not to let your disappointment show; however, you knew that Owen caught the look as he groaned, seeming to fight with himself. "Food."

"What?" You were surprised as Owen put his arm around you, leading you down the street. "Lets go get dinner."

It would turn out that the red roses were forgotten on the table at the restaurant, but you both were caught up in the night of good food and drinks that Owen paid for. On more than one occasion, you saw Owen's eyes on you with a look that made your heart race.

💙 Rosemary

Rosemary smirked at you as she took the orchids. "Oh, dollface/handsome/angelface, aren't you just the berries?"

You rubbed the back of your neck. "Well....yeah, I thought you deserved something on this special day." 

"I always deserve something special, hun, and don't you forget it." She winked, her shoulders a little tense as she walked towards you, seductively. "I suppose you also deserve a little token of my affection." She purred, and while her tone was light and flirty, it made you frown, and the easiness didn't quite reach her eyes. 

You took a step back. "You don't have to give me....uh..any token. These were a gift." 

Rosemary looked at the flowers and back at you with a raised eyebrow. "Really? No strings attached?" 

"Of course, Rosemary, I want you to feel comfortable." Rosemary must have seen something in your eyes because her own immediately widened in surprise as she really took the flowers in, her gaze softening. 

"Thank you, $Name." 

🩵 Tai

Tai stared at the blue lilies, his face a bright red against his pale cheeks as he stuttered. "I-you-what-"

You gave the man in front of you a small smile. "It's to show that I care about you."

Tai didn't give you any more emotion as he turned around and shut the door to his office in a hurry, leaving you swallowing disappointment and cursing at the flowers in your hand. You started to turn around to leave the clinic, but Tai came out of his office, holding a brown paper bag and some water.

"Here." Tai said in a tone you didn't recognize as he took the flowers from your hands and sat them carefully on the desk before practically throwing you the weighted brown paper bag and water, not even wincing as you almost dropped it.

"What the hell, Tai?"

Tai just rolled his eyes at your tone. "It's sweet and sour pork with two spring rolls. It was my lunch for today, but since you got me these-" Tai looked at the flowers, his eyes softening a little, but his tone was curt as always. "gift. You can have my lunch; I hadn't prepared anything, and I am not one to participate in this commercial holiday, but you still deserv- expect something in return, yes?"

You looked down at the paper bag, and there were indeed containers of food inside. "I can't just steal your lunch, Tai; these flowers are a present."

The young doctor just pushed you out of his office. "Oh, please, you need it anyway, Oleander, with how much junk food you probably consume."

You started to argue, but like always, Tai just toned you out until you left. You actually did end up eating the food, which was delicious. Your mouth was still watering even as you dropped off the tupperware the next day, and you smiled when you saw the blue lilies presented on his desk in a crystal vase.

💚 Zane

Zane hissed. "Why are you giving me these?" He looked down at the tulips, like they were poison. 

"They are to show that I care about you." 

Zane's eyes narrowed, and for a second, you swore you saw something other than distrust in his eyes. "I don't need your flowers, Little Lion, but since you went out of your way to give me a sacrifice-" 

"A gift." You corrected, but Zane droned on. "I shall grant you the tolerance of accepting them." 

More than once the next week, you caught Zane staring at the flowers intensely with curiosity and confusion. 

Yes, it will be brought up, and they will act differently towards you (some more than others) if you romance the other; however, you can still flirt with both, just be warned that they might not take that kindly.

Spoilers! 🤐😬 But your MC can choose to be afflicted not just by her mother's parenting but also at Aunt Zinnia's.