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Disventure camp All-stars rewritten AU

This isn’t a Full rewrite just some stuff I would change/Improve on in All-stars.

1 - FIXING THE AIDEN/TOM AND JAKE SUBPLOT:

I would have Mariam lose earlier then James so the Subplot makes somewhat more sense. Otherwise I would have Jake mad at Tom because of Mariam’s Health issues and how it was mentioned in the beginning of All-stars. (Jake would want Tom to care about her more)

2 - MAKING EMILYS CHARACTER BEEF WITH KRYSTAL MAKE MORE SENSE!!!

If I rewrote All-stars I would have Emily have Beef with Krystal because of Riya being on All-stars and how in S2 she Nearly killed Aiden. (HAVING A KILLER ON A REALITY TV SHOW IS VERY BAD!!!) Emily’s plan would be to get Krystal kicked off the show as Host and not do anything Very bad or anything Illegal like in Canon.

Emily would also stay friends with Trever in my Rewrite cause I like their Dynamic early on.

Krystal and Derek’s Romance would be Leaked to the public by Emily in the rewrite which is one part of her plan to get revenge on Krystal.

3 - Ally’s character development.

I would have her try to focus on ignoring the public’s view on her and try to be her own person instead of being Riyas puppet for some reason?!

4 - Fiore Redemption!

I would want her to get some sort of redemption Arc in my rewrite as I like her character and it would be interesting to see her as a better person.

(Plus Alec and Fiore are best Duo!)

5 - The ending:

The ending can stay somewhat the same with Riya losing and her not having any connections like in Canon. (She doesn’t have to win though just saying.)

6 - THE VERY STUPID CONNER X RIYA CRAP!!!

Can we just Not have them be a couple? EVER?! (They won’t be a couple in my rewrite.)