Hope Uploading Works This Time - Tumblr Posts

Okay, so since I Iost my courage to upload this after it failed the first time, I finally recorded my song and am prepared to share it on tumblr.

This is the first song I’ve written (and it’s hella far from perfect) so I would really appreaciate your feedback on it? Improvements and constructive criticism is always welcome (it’s okay if you don’t like it, not everyone likes the same stuff, however, I’d really like to know why you think so :) ) Also I majorly screwed up the ending picking is so not my strength so sorry for that ^.^

PRETTY PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!

( @tinylilemrys ARE YOU PROUD OF MEEE? :D)