Rewriting stuff maybe talking about ocs ?!
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I didn't even watch a full episode and WTF ?!? ELOISE ?!? YOUR NEW BFF IS TELLING YOU THAT SHE'S GOING TO GET ENGAGED TO A GRANDPA ?!? Why aren't you doing anything ?!?
Like that is character assassination
Man I cannot wait to be done with exams because I have t h o u g h t s to share about Bridgerton.
Starting with talking about wtf I have seen and saw spoiler of with Benedict (I have already rewrote the scene with the Mondrich). Following by Eloise because what the fuckkkk did they do with her ?!? And then Polin (didn't like them in the book, don't like them in the show) and obviously Michaela.
I haven't got to watch part 2 of Bridgerton but oh boy what I'm seeing.
Please free my girl Eloise from the Bridgerton writer RIGHT NOW.
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Well this aged WELL
I've heard rumours, and sobs, about a potential Michael genderbent
Soooo here's a thought
-Fem Michael and Francesca walking arms in arms in the street-
-Creloise doing the same-
-They just walk into eachother and Eloise and Francesca slightly nods-
-They know it-
Them>>>>
more creloise doodles before S3 part 2 implodes them forever.
A rewriting of the scene between the Mondrich and Benedict (and the introduction of someone 👀)
-as Benedict stop talking someone scoff-
Mystery guy
Oh please what nonsense.
-Benedict turns around, surprised-
Mystery guy
-as he walk to join the conversation-
Please Lord Bridgerton do tell me. Do tell me do you see Lord and Landy Afwrich?
Mystery guy
Benedict looks perplexed
Mystery guy
If my memory is good it has been two years they haven't been seen. They were incredibly impolite always with eachother, really never talked with anyone... Now I wonder, pray tell me mister Bridgerton you know the Chatilley right ?
Benedict
I'm not sure I can place them ?
-smiles as he knows he's winning-
- Benedict seems to come to a realisation. The mystery guy smiles emphatically to M and Ms Mondrich-
I think the last time they've shown themselves you were just starting Eton mister.
(to the Mondrich)
But you should ask lady Cowper miss and mister Mondrich, she knows a great deal about them and their red nose. But oh well you won't see them.
Mystery guy
M and Ms Mondrich I think you know better than everyone how... fragile the great experiment is. How old people kinda stay... attached to their values.
-the Mondrich looks at eachother then at the mystery guy-
- Benedict looks highly offended-
I can imagine that people were hard with you and they will continue to be harder and harder.I beg of you to think about your children, especially Lord Kent... Do not listen to a man with such a name that his family get the privilege to erase every scandal that seems to happens every week in their household.
Benedict
Now excuse me bu-
- he gets cut off as a Lady arrives-
The mysterious Lady
-ensues everyone bowing to each other and the Lady being named Lady Roseton-
Ah M Beauchateau!
Beauchateau
- between his teeth-
Talking about family name that can avoid scandal...
The mysterious Lady
There you are I've been looking for you everywhere.
Lady Roseton
M and Ms Mondrich I've been looking for you two everywhere ! I heard you do not have a french tutor for your children ? I highly recommend this young gentleman.
Benedict (still offended)
And he's accompanying you to a ball ?
-The Mondrich looks at him as he looks and sounds quite mad, he smiles-
And what a suspicious french name for someone with such a good English accent.
Lady Roseton
Oh I feel so alone with my husband and all my children dead or away... And I know, It's probably a secret identity but he's a good french teacher so who cares.
-She chuckles and And M Beauchateau chuckles too-
M Beauchateau
C'mon Madame we must make hast it's getting late for you.
-They both leaves with Lady Roseton's hand on his arm, he looks back at Benedict and smirks-
And there it is!!! What did y'all think of it ?
Happy Pride Month
No pride while there are genocides !!!
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More on Eloise writing gossip
Y'all ate this post
So more thought on that :D and why I think it'll work like a charm.
In the book (yes I read those that's why I'm allowed to shit on it) Pen slow down herself the gossip during her book.
Thing is
She defenitly ain't slowing down in the second part of the season. (But if anything I do hope she stop doing it and use her talent for something else than destroying reputation.) Wich could mean she abruptly stop and that would defenitly ruin the tempo of the season.
Here enters Eloise. As Cressida married Lord Debbling, and is learning to tend to the estate, she cannot come to the season. Eloise would then start sending her the gossip so Cressida knows what's happening (actually it's because she misses her and do not know how to communicate it). THING IS Eloise is terrible with gossip, she's not excactly good at reading people is she ?
Wich leaves us with an unreliable narrator (gaps dramaticly) as we slowly start to notice leaving us with a lot of frustration and tension. Excactly how Cressida feels about Eloise ! In the end of the first a,d the start second part of the series she makes it clear to Eloise who slowly slow downs the gossip, talking more about herself, so we see less and less of the narrator. Thus leaving us with a natural transition of the Bridgertons without Lady Whistledown
Hear me out
The younger Bridgerton could be neurodivergent. Eloise ? Impulsivity can be an hyperactive trait plus the fact that she has hard time focusing on thing she doesn't like ? It could be her personality or adhd. Francesca ? I don't think I need to say more.
Hyacinth and Gregory ?
They are really giving me the vibe. Well way more Hyacinth than Gregory honestly but still.
I've heard rumours, and sobs, about a potential Michael genderbent
Soooo here's a thought
-Fem Michael and Francesca walking arms in arms in the street-
-Creloise doing the same-
-They just walk into eachother and Eloise and Francesca slightly nods-
-They know it-
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If sex is what you use as the only proof of compatibility between a pairing that you are trying to push at your audience maybe this pairing isn't worth being an endgame.
I feel like not enough people dislike Bridgerton's love interest because they're sex offenders. Like there's no essays to do about whether you like the ship or not, or even if the ship had a great chemistry. The characters are sexes offenders, or think like one, and most barely feels bad about it.
Season five after the reveal so we get Eloise writing the gossip to Cressida Debbling instead of LW
Dear Cressida,
you will NOT guess what is happening in the ton.
Dear Cressida,
I know that my talents at founding gossip do not exceeds yours but I think you'll love what I heard at the Featherington bal.
Deat Cressida,
if you had a brother what would you do if you thought he was falling for a maid ? No I am not talking about-
And you slowly see the tension builds as Cressida doesn't care about the gossip she wants to hear about ELOISE thus making a slow transition were in the end we haven't goy any gossip anymore.
Bridgerton rewrite:
Here will be the link to every canon stuff of my rewritr au :
The Ton
Benedict
X
^How I am currently, waiting for the right moment to drop my new post and brigerton rewrite
Rewritting of Bridgertons
First of I want to say that it is in no way me bashing Julia Quinn. She has wrote a popular book series that she managed to put on the screen and for that she deserves alot of respect.
BUT
The books are a hot messes for many, many, many reasons, the three last one are ok but still quite questionable.
(I am obviously in no way claiming to be a better writter or that what I'll do will be good but I decided to rewrite and change what I didn't like and what I think could do better. )
Important information about this rewrite :
As I had hard time with honestly any of the love interest, ESPECIALLY, the boys one (with the exception of my boy Gregory, you were boring but cute) and that I felt like the women character had honestly a waste of potential I will change all of them a LOT. I will also rant about why I didn't like them in the first place.
As the books are so messy I also consider the series as canon and I have a lot of confusion about the way the society and great experiments was done ?! Like honestly WASTED potential.
This will NOT be historically accurate my dear friends purely fictional as I'll state multiple time.
The Ton in the Bridgertons
We do not see much politics in the Bridgertons but as sexism exist you cannot brush over or make racism disapear in what 40 years ? I try to be sensible about but as I am a white individual I might make mistake and apologise if so and will correct it.
At first we would still keep the same hierarchy of power than the one in real life and, I assume, in the show.
Secondly let's talk about THE thing that changes everything in the Bridgertons : the Great experiment.
The Great experiment appeared for the same reason than show in Queen Charlotte but it's a bit more subtle. It was introduced mostly so Charlotte could marry the king George but never did the royal councils intended to actually give more power to the "other side" of the society. Even if people could now get invited and participate in activity didn't mean they'd be invited or treated well.
Queen Charlotte is actually the one who shacked things up, after mostly focusing on her marriage at first she slowly woke up and saw that despise what was said her own were still being rejected and treaded unfairly. By attending Lady Danbury ball, she shoke things up. When some titles were left without any heir she would think first of giving it to the "other side" (that's how Simon's dad became Duke) etc.
Even thought the Queen Charlotte promoted tolerance things didn't completely work out that way. The "original" Ton felt jealous and left alone and while they couldn't reject the other side at the more little scandal possible they would directly reject a familly. And while young did marry racized Lord it was almost UNFATHOMABLE that an eligible white Lord would marry a girl of colour. It got a little better but there is still a lot of pression on racized people. A few Lord did actually mary girls from the "other side" the most known one being St-Clair, Abernathy and the Sterlings leaving a lot of preassure on their children because they represent this new kind of union and must be perfect. So it is a big deal that so many of the Bridgertons will have union with people of the other side as they are one of the most old and respected familly.
The real stars
nobody better be posting about the met gala without mentioning the giant pro-palestine demonstration going on outside
My friend's thought on Pollin
Mines are more... complicated than that
Can't still wrapp my head around how people can be so twisted.
This is the important part
We're going to see A LOT of pro Israel propaganda in the media in late June. More than usual I mean.
We need to be prepared to combat it all especially with the current invasion of Rafah killing and displacing thousands
Introduction of the blog
Hello pleasure to meet you all !
My name is, honnestly, whatever nickname you cancome off with this blog and my pronouns are they/them :)
This blog isn't a place where I intend to be the most active (barely understand tumblr lol) but where I'll talk about my writing and rewritting stuff !
I also already want to apologize for like all the grammatical fault I'll do, English isn't my first language.
My first rewriting project will concern the Bridgertons, more on that here :
X and here X