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Pardon my language but —

People really be dumb as fuck.

The things I WOULD DO -

The wild, unspeakable, unimaginable, unfathomable, inconceivable, dirty, illegal things -

For a carmyxsydxluca love triangle 🫣🫢

Whoop, there I said it, no take backs.

Like bruh

As much as I am rooting for SydxCarmy endgame -

I AM HERE FOR THIS

#suca??? #Luney?? They look SO FINE together hahahahah

No thoughts, just Luca looking at Sydney

The second gif, Jesus. The way he touches his mouth…

Like, girl…

Now, is always the best time to start.

I am a bit off my rocker 80% of the time, but -

I will be strong and confident. I have no choice 😀

I am 2 years into my dream career as a professional athlete, and quite frankly, I am surprised I have made it this far.

Not because I have achieved anything great, no. But more so I feel like I’ve been living on the precipice of insanity and depression (legit) everyday since I’ve arrived here.

I came from a very elite level in my sport in my home country, and was suppose to be a “big fish in a little pond” when I entered into the current league I am playing in. But I feel as though I am the worst athlete I’ve ever been here, and that I am sliding down this slippery slope to only getting worse.

My teammates don’t really like/respect me as an athlete, and are not supportive.

My confidence has been at an all-time low in my career for the past year and a half.

I do not feel as though I am improving

I feel ashamed that I am not better at my job when people had such high expectations of me coming in

I feel like I’ve wasted a lot of opportunities

I don’t want to be a cloud of sadness, and I try so hard not to fixate on the negativity of my situations but it’s all-consuming.

I genuinely desire to enjoy and grow my career while I still can, but I feel as though I am at the end of my rope mentally.

So I reach out to you oh, great tumblr community — who has been my safe haven since middle school (over a decade ago) — what advice/words of empowerment can you give this lowly athelte?

I feel as though I have read every mental psyche book, listen to every psychologist’s podcast; did every meditation and yoga seminar available to bring me to my “center”/inner peace; I have spoken to my coaches, friends, family etc. I have been searching everywhere for an answer but am still coming up on empty about what’s truly wrong with me.

I love my job so so much, and I am so grateful for the opportunity to play the sport that I have loved since I was a child; having the chance to live out you lifelong dream/goal is a luxury that I know many don’t get to have. So that’s why I just need a bit of help.

I hope this reaches the right people because I truly want to move onwards and upwards.

Please send good vibes, or ominous positivity if you have any.

Thank you❤️

I can’t be the only who watched How To Train Your Dragon -

saw Toothless —

— And was immediately reminded of this man!??

I hope peaceful days like this will last forever.

“Now tell me how did all my dreams turn to nightmares;

How did I lose it when I was right there?”

Can someone give me advice please? What to do if your dreams are slipping out of your fingers right before your own eyes, and it’s your own fault?

Colson Baker (aka Machine Gun Kelly) | December 2021

That moment when the unrelated scenes you've been writing for two weeks both somehow connect (i have no idea how this happened)

Am I getting old, or have raisins always tasted like white chocolate?

“how did you get into writing” girl nobody gets into writing. writing shows up one day at your door and gets into you

my one grammatical pet peeve (i have many, this is just The One) that will unfairly push me from reading something is improperly punctuated dialogue…and it’s SO fixable and will clean up so much writing so quickly. like. okay. writing advice, and it’s the main pillar that, when i see violated, has me like walter white screaming in the car.jpeg

“This is a sentence.” ✅ (perfect, no notes.)

“This is a sentence,” ❌ (commas are never a final punctuation mark if there’s no following dialogue tag.) (dialogue tag = he said, she said, you said, i said.)

“This is a sentence,” he said. ✅ (comma after the quote/between the dialogue tag, non-capitalized dialogue tag.)

“This is a sentence,” He said. ❌ (no capitals! he said is not a new sentence, but rather apart of the quote.)

“This is a sentence.” He said. ❌ (most common. wrong. it’s one sentence 😔, there’s a comma to separate the tag, and the tag should not be capitalized for reasons: see above.)

“This is a sentence.” He laughed. ✅ (he laughed is not a dialogue tag, it’s an action, therefore a new sentence & capitalized. This is sometimes debated, so if it’s easier to conceptualize using another verb, do so.)

“This is a sentence,” he said. “When starting another one or interrupting it with a dialogue tag, it’s best to capitalize the start of this new sentence. However, you can also interrupt dialogue with action,”—like this, where you insert your action, motion, or thought of choice—“using em dashes. When you resume the sentence, it won’t be capitalized, unless it’s a proper noun, until you start a new sentence because it still apart of the old one. Make sure to use a period at the end of the sentence when it’s all over.”

“This is a sentence,”—he laughed, slapping his knee—“and this is an example of how you can interrupt a line of dialogue using an action. Notice the pronoun isn’t capitalized? Nor the resuming dialogue?”

Related, but different: “This is a sentence.” He laughed, slapping his knee. “And this is an example of how you can break up a line of dialogue using action, while not necessarily interrupting it. They’re two distinct sentences and often depend on how the author intends for the reader to read/hear the line—quickly, in one breath, or paused, properly spaced.”

me writing the worst paragraph of my life knowing that a sexier, more hydrated version of me will fix it later

Want simple tips to heavily improve your skills with character voice??

(📝Note: character voice is the way you convey your character's personality though their pov or dialogue when you write. No two characters speak the same📝)

I speak from experience when I say character voice is hard to get right. Characters, like people, have lots of layers that affect the way they see the world around them and how they interact with other characters. That's why character voice is so important in stories, and why if you write it in a compelling and effective way it will hook people into your story. I hope you learn something new in this post!!

When writing character voice, there's a list of things that you should take into account:

Where are they from? Their past and what they've lived plays a huge part in character voice. Maybe your character grew by the ocean, and so they compare things from the present to the beach, the rocks or the sea itself. You will rarely read about a sailor that is an expert in pants and compares scents to flowers. They might, instead, talk about how a house smells like the wet wood of a ship.

Think about how their personality shapes their language. If they are insecure, they might end most of their sentences with "isn't it?" or "right?" and ask a lot of questions, whereas if you have a confident character, you might find them saying things like "we should do this" or "that will be fun" instead.

What their "lense" is. This is more of an ethic aspect of the character. What have they learn it's okay, and what do they find uncomfortable? Would they find it gross if their friend left laundry on the floor?

Give them special traits (both for dialogue and narration). Maybe character A quotes a lot when they narrate and uses long paragraphs, or maybe B speaks about their past a lot and uses popular sayings. Personally, one character of mine has the tendency to repeat himself when he speaks, as in "yeah, yeah, I'll do it" or "no, no, no. Never" because he is really enthusiastic, and it fits really well with his character.

Pay attention to how they would talk about themselves. Maybe your character doesn't like people to know they're sad because it makes them feel vulnerable, so they will just say they feel annoyed or don't want to talk in that moment. This also means that they will not tell the reader something they are not comfortable saying in the first place.

How is their education? Education is also very important in this context. Did they went to university and have a rich vocabulary and structured sentences, or where they rised in a little farm far from town? You can also play with both a bit: maybe your character did go to university, but maybe they also came from a low income family, and characteristic of both things merge when they talk. Example: long, structured, sentences but a simple and sight forward vocabulary.

That's all for now and happy writing!!

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Cozy

"you better not be jumping to conclusions"

me:

I’m guessing the job was pretty rough for her. And yet, she did her best to go along with Anya’s requests. You did a great job.