Hello Everyone, I Have Decided To Release The Demo Next Saturday, No Matter If Chapter Three Is Finished

Hello everyone, I have decided to release the demo next Saturday, no matter if chapter three is finished or not. I think I have made you guys wait long enough, and I just can't wait to have feedback! So please mark it on your calendars that Chapters 1-3, Part 1, is coming out this weekend! 

Ahhhh I an kicking my feet and giggling

Hi! Omg, your interactive fiction looks so good. I mean, the characters are so well rounded, and I honestly can't wait to meet each of the ROs? I just wanted to ask an angsty question: how would the ROs react to MC walking in on them kissing or being on top of someone else, like the RO fell or the other person kissed them? I just live for miscommunication, and the thought of the MC just standing there and running out before the RO could even explain sends shivers down my spine.

I'm happy you like it/characters so far. Below the cut ~

❤️ Cam - Has jumped up/pushed that person away. Unless MC tells Cam to stay put he will follow hot on their hills. Explaining what happened. It's not what it looked like, he's never seen that person before! Cam will not let you think what just happened meant something. He would mention if he had feelings for someone he would tell you before anyone else.

💙 G - They want to be able to give you time to mull over your thoughts before coming after you, but they can't. Crushing stage G will be conflicted on whether they should say anything. Ex G will think you won't care, why would you? That doesn't mean they want you to misread the situation. They will come to you calmly, explain the situation, and watch to see your reaction. Do you care that someone else kissed them? Does it bring back memories?

💚 Kara - She is a bit intrigued. Did you get jealous seeing someone else claiming her lips? Oh, is that your job only? She will reassure MC that it was simply an accidental kiss. Would it make you feel better if she kissed you instead? Maybe you should beg for just a taste of her lips, and she will give you what you want. A jealous MC would make Kara giddy, enough to kiss mc in front of the other person.

💛 M -They will be fuming mad. Suddenly they swear at the person, who will likely apologize and leave. M will turn to MC holding their lips, especially if the person kisses M before MC can. "Stolen...they...my first, who does that? What shithead does that?" MC will learn fast that M didn't want that, and will have to reassure them instead.

💜 Isaac - "Guess I'm just that damn irresistible, huh?" They will make a joke, not their best but they try. It's an awkward moment, especially one they didn't want. If crushing stage Isaac will be apologetic but also not know how to handle the situation. Do they tell you it meant nothing, tell you they would rather ki- No, maybe they shouldn't admit that. Maybe you don't mind at all. Once Isaac sees that Mc does in fact care, they get a feeling in their gut. Happiness, shit they need to ignore that.

🖤 Ardent - "Honestly, if you had the balls to kiss me at least make it worth my fucking time. I'd have rather kissed a fucking dead pigeon." Ardent doesn't bother to pretend it was good, not even a little bit. He will walk over before MC can leave, he would yank at Mc's shirt and wipe his lips off. Crushing stage, "Don't look so annoyed, I only got one jackass I want to kiss and it ain't that one." He would give Mc a wink and go about his day. Nothing to worry about here it seems.

Update: Mon, September 18

So I have been working on Chapter 3, and it is coming along nicely but slowly. There is so much stuff I want to add, but I know I have to tone it back so I can leave you guys on your toes. But do not worry, there will be enough content to go around. I just wanted to update you all. My mental health is good; I'm just a little stressed with college, but writing is helping, and I can't wait to post Chapter 3 and the release of the demo.

Please note that this is just my interpretation of Zinnia; her eye color and race will always be the same with your MC and please feel free to keep picturing these characters like you’ve always had, if you want to.

• Zinnia Oleander

• Triana Mendozo

• Matthew Anderson

• Murry Fawn

• Bess Fawn (née Müller)

This is so cute I want to cry 🥺🥺🥺

I am giggling so hard at E Junior getting all of Elwin/Elaine 's genes. Like my open and soft MC asking E Junior what's wrong and them being like:

It's [Crush's Name]. It's just like, I can't get them out of my head and every time I look at them." E Junior touches their chest. "I got these pains in my chest and I just KNOW it's THEIR fault."

E Junior frowns at their crush just picking flowers. "That Idiot!"

I NEED TO HEAR ELWIN/ELAINE'S TALK OR THOUGHTS THROUGH THEIR HEAD AS THEY SEE THEIR CHILD BEING JUST LIKE THEM.

“So, how do you feel about this?” you ask, turning to face E, a sly smirk taking over your features. After your little pumpkins rant, they ran back inside, gripping onto one of the poor white flowers they ruthlessly ripped out from the soil. Out of the corner of your eye you noticed that E had returned home. From the furrow of their brows you understood they heard everything.

They look at you with a revolted frown, the top of their lip quivering into a snarl. “Don’t ask me things you already know the answer to.”

You smirk grows into a grin, cheeks hurting from the straining. “But I don’t! I have no clue what you’re talking about!”

They walk closer to you, planting a small familiar peck on your right cheek. A ritual E had developed every time they returned home which translated to, sorry for being away for so long, I missed you. “Let’s get inside.”

“Oh no you don’t,” you say, stopping E by the wrist, pulling them closer to you, to which they don’t try and resist. “Don’t distract me with your little kisses.”

They let out a stifled groan, turning to you, the shine in their eyes begging you to stop, but you don’t. Titling your head, you wait for their reply. “What do you want me to say? That I get embarrassed every time they act like that because it reminds me of how I acted with you? No, I’m not saying that.”

You smile at their words. “I know you don’t like it, but I, love it,” you say, wrapping your arms around their waist and resting your head comfortably on their shoulder. Immediately, you feel the warmth of their palms on your lower back.

“Of course you do,” they say, their tone deadpan.

I can't wait for an update. The pictures of the characters look really good. Sorry if this is bugging you, but when is there an update, if you don't mind me asking? I saw that you said that you were writing chapter 3 (I think), so I was just wondering. Please ignore this if it is bugging you. And I had a question as well: What are the RO's star signs?

Thank you so much for the love. I should be posting to itch.io sometime in September (fingers crossed). However to answer your question, I made these characters when I was younger and am using the birthdays that I originally picked out. The younger and present me know nothing about star signs or astrology, but here are the birthdays.

💛 Marcel

June 21

🧡 Margaret

May 21

♥️ Owen

April 19

💙 Rosemary

July 23

🩵 Tai

September 22

💚 Zane

November 1