What In Cherries Name Have I Made!!!

What in Cherries name have I made!!!

I dare someone to turn her into a d&d character with the race and class random.

Ok so what if in your campaign you make it a little easier for the characters to get hurt but give them a set amount of extra lifes, like 2 to 3 lives. I think this could work with some campaigns, like for example: the characters are certain gods chosen ones and because of that they get extra lifes.

So I am starting my own campain soon and i want everyones advice. It's inspired by the crimson egg/blood egg on the dream smp. Most things are diferent from the role play, but I am naming based on the names of people, places, items, and even pets.

The story is in basic form this: the players are at the starting town, because they are hired to guard some people or event that is moving to the next town. They don't know why they are hired. Later they find out that they npc's or event has to pass near a dungeon to get to the next town. They get attacked on the way to town and fond out the only way to safely deliver the npc's or event to the next town they have to take down the dungeon. They do this and get to the next town.

Once there they decide that they are staying a group. So the keep going on advetures to gether, and as they do they start to notice strange things. These strange things are being caused by the egg, as they find out soon after.

So they set out to destroy it, and battle the eggs generals, after fighting about 1/4th 9f the generals they find out they have to destroy something else before they can destroy the egg. After fighting 2/4th's of the generals they find out what they have to destroy looks like. After fighting 3/4th's of the generals they find out where it is. They then rush there and destroy it. Then they fight the final general who is guarding the egg. After defeating the general they destroy the egg. Everything after that is tying ip loose strings.

Please tell mean how well you would think it would work. I appreciate any non-toxic feed back.

@stylampa look at it now

Look what I made. I wonder what it would look like in d&d.