Liara Be Like, "Yeah, That's Right; This Is Mah Man Right Here. I Snared This Perfection; Feast Your

Liara be like, "Yeah, that's right; this is mah man right here. I snared this perfection; feast your eyes and be amazed at his masculine perfection~"

I love this ship.

Smol chibi bebes.

OTP drawing challenge day 5-(in bed)

"Wishing you would call my name, ‘cause only you can light the flame…" (if you haven’t heard The Flame by Keiko Lee, then go listen to it cuz it’s prime sex music)

Hey you never said what they had to be doing in bed~ I thought I’d try my hand at some porn, though it’s pretty soft core. I can’t bring myself to draw anything more lewd than this (though I can certainly try to write it…). Is this NSFW? It doesn't feel that way to me, but lemme know if it is and I'll tag it.

They’re both covered in terrible scars. I wrote a one shot a million years ago to help me picture what The Road Not Trekked's tone would be about that, where Gunther always insisted they have sex with the lights off, but since Nerr has dragon vision and can see in the dark, she assumes it’s because he thinks she’s ugly and disfigured. Nope, he just doesn’t want to see himself because he thinks HE’S ugly and disfigured. It pretty much ended with them both being like, “wtf are you smoking; you’re perfect!”

Doing this, I can kinda understand why hentai and sexy things in general look as bad as they do. When you start drawing risqué poses, at first, it looks great. But then you start turning the picture, and notice all the gross anatomical inaccuracies, so you have to erase and elongate and erase and elongate until it's actually proportional. And that's really hard to do if you're drawing shit one handed. I guess what I'm saying is... if you wanna draw porn, don't draw porn of things you masturbate to.

“shitty memory” aesthetic

-giving ur friends the same information over and over because u forgot u ever gave it to them

-opening up a new text post only to forget what u were going 2 say

-never changing a wall calendar/needing to look up what day of the week something will be

-literally not being able to remember what happened yesterday/an hour ago/five minutes ago

-forgetting where ur going/what ur doing in the middle of doing it

-flipping through the beginning of a book because u forgot some characters and plot development

-making a typo, make a mental note to fix it, get up to do something, keep typing without fixing the typo

-”haha ur memory cant be THAT bad”

-it can be

-reminding urself 2 do something but u forget

-writing reminders, forgetting that u wrote a reminder/forgetting what was on the reminder/forgetting where u put the reminder

-”just put something in ur room out of place before u go 2 sleep” and ur room has so much shit on the floor u wouldnt even be able 2 tell whats out of place

-alternately: doing the above and then forgetting what it was supposed to remind u of

-did that happen or was i dreaming

-i was gonna put something here but i FORGOT it and i HATE it

Yes. You have no idea how much every single comment means to a writer. I cannot tell you how disheartening it is to see a fanfic with dozens, if not hundreds of comments, and then look at my paltry reviews. The only fics I've even gotten reviews on are my 32 chapter, 44k+ word epic (and almost half of them were complaints), and my sexy yandere oneshot. When I realized the only thing people deem worth their time to comment on are hastily written smut fics, it makes me want to just throw my hands in the air and quit. Guess what- if I didn't want feedback, I wouldn't post this stuff online.

The only real feedback I ever got was people complaining, and I even appreciated that (not when it was annoymous, tho, because that made it hard to respond) because it let me gauge what the readers thought. When no one says anything (or gives a one sentence review like "this is good"), I have no fucking clue what to think. Do they like it? Hate it? Was there some characterization that wasn't clear? Is anyone even READING this, or did they just stop in, read one paragraph, then say fuck this shit? Another thing is, lots of readers of fanfiction tend to gravitate towards the stories with the most reviews, because if so many people are leaving comments, it MUST be good. If you like something someone writes, leave some reviews so other people can notice it to.

I started posting fanfiction dreaming I could be like my favorite authors, with people leaving insightful, uplifting reviews every chapter and dying to know what happens next. Now, posting chapters is just another tedious chore for me, like waking up. I have so little drive and motivation now that if I didn't have a backlog of completed chapters, I'd just stop posting all together. And on ao3, kudos are okay, but comments mean much, MUCH more. If you could take the time to read something from begining to end, surely you could take a few more seconds to tell the author if you enjoyed it or not.

Why Commenting On FanFiction Is Important

Alright kids, Boo here with a hopefully non-arrogant PSA.

I’m a writer of FanFiction because I like it and it’s my preferred genre (also a great way to receive feedback on writing that I can use on originals, bref). But like with most artistic work posted online, I have very little feedback.

When I was in a slightly writing rut, I cranked one shots left and right, nothing out of the ordinary. But instead of people commenting with their thoughts and good feedback, they just gave me requests.

I don’t think I could ever put into words what that felt like, but I’ll try (the irony of being a writer). It suddenly felt tiring, being a writer, and very quickly I stopped writing altogether. I only ever showed my friend what I wrote and left it at that. I haven’t published anything for a while after. It felt like people were treating me like a mule wanting me to do work for them, and I just wasn’t up for that. I lost my will to write, and then I began to think, “If I post something else other than what was requested, will people even read it?”

Then you get the infamous comments, “You haven’t forgotten about my request right??? Here’s another.”

That just adds anxiety and guilt. I’m purposely ignoring the comments to save my own uncreative ass, at least that’s what it feels like.

After weeks of convincing myself that my stories are worth sharing no matter how many people read them, I started writing and publishing again while working on some longer pieces. Slowly it got better.

Now this week, I remembered I joined another fanfiction platform, and realized I had never published anything on it. I had an idea, and so I started writing. It didn’t come out as I imagined it would, but I was so proud? Like, I started feeling happy about what I created again. Like genuine happiness that I haven’t felt in months since my last published work.

A few hours later, I get this comment:

I cranked out three 3k stories after reading this.

In four days.

It never happened before, and I don’t know how many times it will happen again. It was one comment, but it gave me so much fighting spirit that I think I’m on my way to regaining my initial writer mindset.

Fanfiction writers depend on feedback as a validation that their stories matter to people. If you’re wondering why your favourite author hasn’t updated/posted in a while, ask yourself, “Did I do everything that would convince them to continue writing this?”

Hey, all you Shura fangirls and fanbois (I know y'all are out there), since you love ya boi so much, maybe you’d like to read another fan’s take on his tragic tale? Granted, I probably haven’t put as much thought into him as all of you, but I still think I did Fates’ best pirate (ninja/theif/trickshot enthusiast) justice.

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