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Silver Shadow returns Chapter 1
I'm gonna try and fill out this part even if nothing really important happens. And this one is a little bit longer than my other chapters.
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 2
Birthday Chapter Babyyyy!!!
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 4
Last chapter before school starts again.
Silver Shadow Ch 5
I don't know how to spell Menagerie
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 6
Heads up it gets a little gory for a hot second
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 7
Am I bad at romance ?
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 8
Yang falls first, Silver falls harder
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 9
Ngl kinda got writer's block in the middle of this one
Silver Shadow R:Ch 10
Holy moly can't believe I forgot the past three chapters
Silver Shadow Ch: 11
Part two of I can't believe I forgot to post three chapters in a row.
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 12
Final part of I can't believe I forgot three chapters in a row.
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 13
Kinda wish I got this done by last Friday
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 14
This'll have payoff
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 15
Silver's dark secret finally revealed
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 16
Did I do it good
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 17
Literally the most filler chapter of the book TBH
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 18
This took a lot longer than I wanted it to
Silver Shadow Returns Ch 22
Happy new year
Hot take
people are gonna hate me but adam taurus and lotor deserved better character development
Hell they deserved to be better villons or antagonistis.
Same with felix.
I mean. Look at zuko.
Great antagonistis and best redemption ark ever.
Is is to high a standerd to want great written villain and antagonistis ?
So. It has come to my attention that i did not vocalise my point.
Adam fucken tauros was a character from the start that was introduced with blake. He was meant to be written as a possible foil for her. He was the beast since she was beauty. Even if shes is beast with yang with the lines black the beast descends from shadows
He could have been a cautionary tail for her. A what if .
How she could turn out.
He could have been the cool older figure who was her caption and held the belief in what they were working for. Could have been the " big brother " figure who thought blake everything she knows. Could have been the one she told her fears to. He fought for the faunus originally untill that was retcon.
They could have had a aniken and ashoka like relationship and we could watch through blakes perspective as the man she respective changed with hate and anger to a monster.
Could watch adam become just as cruel as the humans. Could watch as he lets his anger control him. Watch as he slowly stop believing in pease with the humans as more faunus get hurt and discrimination gets worse. Watch as he starts being colder .
And when blake leaves he lets her go but keeps a eye on her because he cares about the girl he helped . the girl he sees as a sister.
If you really want him to hurt yang he could be disgusted with the idea of his little sister falls for a human. Could pull the scary older brother with the new girlfriend trope with more angst with lines like-
" you'd fall for a human ? When they hurt us ? When they hate us ?"
And then they defeat him together. Both human and faunus defeating a greater evil. And to top it off ?
" hey.... Kitten...your right...-cough-...be better then me. "
Adam rasped out as he struggled to breath. The blade in his chest probably ruptured something. A wet sounding cough left his lips as he chuckled. Yeah he definitely ruptured something. His one good eye was unfocused and spots overtook his vision but he needed to let his sister know he was prowed of her. Prowed that she stuck to her belief unlike him.
"...huh...i really did become a beast...sorry kitten i left so much work for you. " the last thing he heard was the sobbing of the little girl he thought how to fight. He hopes he was wrong about humans...for her sake. He really hopes she picked a good one.
Look a antagonistis is someone who is supposed to challenge your character. Supposed to make them hold on to thier belief.
All they did to adam was make him a plot device to help make bumble bee cannon.
Witch could have been done a whole lot fucken better.
I like bumblby but i hate waisted story's okay.
Hot take
people are gonna hate me but adam taurus and lotor deserved better character development
Hell they deserved to be better villons or antagonistis.
Same with felix.
I mean. Look at zuko.
Great antagonistis and best redemption ark ever.
Is is to high a standerd to want great written villain and antagonistis ?