Fan Rewrite - Tumblr Posts
So for some reason I decided to try and make a rwby rewrite. I am very sorry if this is ass because I can not write women.
We see the moon in the sky. It's forever crescent form casted light upon a hill as a single grave was there. Soon we hear footsteps as we see figure in a white cloak walk to the grave as they held a bouquet of red and white carnations as the figure sat by the grave and placed the bouquet.
The figure grabbed the hood of the Cloak and pulled it down revealing the face of a young girl who appeared to be around 15. Her hair was dyed red as it hung in bangs. Her eyes were violet as they were focused on the headstone.
Summer rose xiao-long. Born in 1940 A.G., died in 1980 A.G. gone but not forgotten. The girl took a deep breath before clearing her throat. "Hey momma. Dads doing well. I know your probably worrying about him. But he's doing good. Yangs now 16 so she'll be going for beacon. Wish I could go with her but hey.. rules are rules." The girl spoke as she smiled. The air was almost bitter sweet. The girl stood up and put the hood over her head. She stared at the grave stone before she turned and began walking. "Happy mother's day momma... Happy mother's day." The girl spoke as soon she arrived at a small lodge as the light a lantern illuminated the surrounding.
The chirping of birds, leaves being brushed against the soft window, and the laughing coming from the lodge. The girl walked to the door and opened it as she saw a older girl harfing down stack after stack of waffles. There was a man sitting there watching as he sighed. "Yang your gonna choke on your waffles. Eat slow and chew. Or do you need to move to eating with a shovel?" The man questioned as he chuckled. The girl named yang had her blonde hair free as a scrunchie laid on the table as a few strands of old almost invisible blonde hairs were stuck on it. Yangs eyes were violet as well as hunger was ablaze in her eyes. She kept harfing before stopping and swallowing. A few seconds go by before we hear a loud BELCH emerge from yang before she started laughing as the man groaned. "I swear you act more like me than your mother. " The man said as he robbed the bridge of his nose.
"Ha.. sorry pops.. trainings just been getting me hungry. Now next plate please " yang said as she pointed to the two empty plate. Her father sighed before the red haired girl clears her throat. Yang and her father look at the girl. "Oh heya rubes didn't see ya there" yang spoke as she smiled at the girl. "What you need Ruby?" Her father asked as Ruby sighed softly. "Um well I was wondering if I could head out to shop for Abit. The stores aren't packed usually. So um.. can I go dad?" Ruby ask her father as he thought about it. He stroked his chin before looking at Ruby and nodding.
"There's 200 liyen. In my wallet. Grab it and have a little fun dear" their father spoke as he smiled at Ruby. Ruby's face lit up as she shot at her dad and hugged him "thank you dad! Your the best!" Ruby said as her father hugged back before ruby bolted to her father's bedroom and grabbed 200 liyen from it before heading back out leaving her father and sister sitting at the table.
"So... Hows the whole negotiation going pops?" Yang asked as she looked at her father intently. He groaned as he rested his head on his hand. "Oz still saying no.. sorry yang." The man spoke as yang chuckled before shrugging. "Eh it's fine. Not like it's anything huge." Yang spoke.
We cut to ruby running across the side walk as she bumped into people and quickly apologizing. Eventually ruby stopped her running as she started at a small green building as she stared through the window and saw lots of shiny, pointy, deadly WEAPONS. Ruby ran in as she looked around. "So many cool weapons!" She said as she kept looking around until she saw it. A ornate scythe. It had a moon pattern all across the handle.
As Ruby was taking In the magnificence of the scythe we hear the bell on the door ring as a man with orange hair wearing a white vest with black dress pants entered. He held onto a cane. He had a fedora in his hand as he place it on his chest. "I'm going to be polite about this. This is a robbery. I want all the dust crystals you have. Now." The strange man said calmly as the cashier seem to not take him seriously. The cashier stuck out his hand.
"You want the dust. Hand over the liyen." The cashier said bluntly. The man glared at the cashier before sighing he grabbed his can and unsheathed a hidden blade and pointed it at the cashier.
"I will not ask again. Give me dust crystals." The man spoke in Low tone as the cashier raised his hands as his eyes were wide. "W-woah man. C-calm down. Don't pull out a sword. Ill give you your dust crystals. J-just please put down the sword." The cashier quivered as the smell of piss immediately filled the store as the cashier had soiled himself. "Ok that's disgusting. Just grab all the dust crystals and bring them out. Otherwise there's gonna be more liquids than piss." The man spoke as we go back to ruby still looking at the scythe before the stench entered her nostrils as she gagged and turned to see the man pointing his sword at the cashier as he was bringing out dust crystals.
Ruby looked at the scythe as a grin appeared on her face. She grabbed the scythe as she cleared her throat as the man groaned and looked at Ruby still pointing his sword at the cashier. "What do you want twerp? Aren't you supposed to be sucking your thumb or something?" The man dismissed her and turns back to the cashier as he placed 7 dust crystals. "Is that all?" He asked as the cashier nodded. The man smiled as he lowered his sword and sheathed it and grabbed the crystal before the blade of the scythe was right infront of his throat. "Ah ah. One wrong move and you get made.... Shit uh what's a good quip for this?" Ruby asked herself as the Man glared at her. "You think because you have a scythe I'll quiver in fear? Youngling you are FAR mistaken." The man said as he turned and kick the scythe out of ruby's hand before running out with the crystals. Ruby groaned in pain as she got up and grabbed the scythe. "Really sorry, I'll pay later but I gotta use this. Thanks bye!" Ruby ran out and saw the man getting In a van as it's engine roared to life as it zoomed off. "Shit! Can't let them get away" ruby said to herself as she began chasing after them but they were already getting ahead as we see the man sitting in the van as he pulled out one the crystals. "Enhancement acquired. You happy?" The man asked as we see the silhouette of the driver was that of a woman as a smile appeared on her face. "Good boy torchwick. Your pay will be soon-" the driver said as suddenly she swerve to a stop as the man shook his head to see who it was. We then see a woman who appeared to be in her 40's reading a book as she had an outstretched hand. She wore white sweater and black sweats. She had a pair of glasses as she adjusted them. Her hair was a faded blonde. "You caught me while I was in my pajamas... How disappointing" the woman spoke. The man went wide eyed. "A huntress?! Who the fuck sends a huntress to vale?!" The man shouted as he kicked open the door and ran away before he faced a familiar scythe as Ruby pointed it at him as she panted. "I... Ran.... Half a mile... Carrying this scythe.... Your in for a world of hurt." Ruby said as the man gulped nervously.
We cut to the man tied up as the huntress was reading a file. "Roman torchwick. Your from Mistral. Strange. What's a petty crook doing stealing dust." The huntress spoke as the man named Roman grumbled lowly. The huntress closed the file and sighed before turning to ruby who had a huge smile as her eyes sparkled. "Your Glynda! Glynda goodwitch! You killed tons of Grimm! Specifically 1,009-" ruby spoke before Glynda slapped ruby across the face. Glynda groaned "what on remnant were you doing?! A civilian like you shouldn't be in possession of weapons. Much less try and fight criminals! Your gonna be paying a mighty penalty!" Glynda scolded ruby as she looked down holding her cheek.
"I wanted to help" ruby said as Glynda face palmed as she grabbed ruby by the ear and began dragging her to the authorities. But then there was a tapping as Glynda turned and saw a man leaning on a wall looking at her. His eyes half Open as he had a cane also supporting him. His hair was grey yet he seemed young. Most likely 20. He wore a dark green suit as he proceeded to stand straight.
"Glynda. Care to have a word. And bring the subject of the topic" he said calmly as he pointed at Ruby as Glynda stared at the man before groaning and dragging her to him. As Ruby proceeded to say "ow" the longer Glynda tugged at Ruby's ear
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FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUCK! That took a while! I'm so glad I managed to get this done.
To all the newbies. I'm glitch. I'm a fledgling writer obviously. And for some reason I decided to write this. And I'll be honest. I pray this won't be a fucking bitch to do.
I hope you all enjoy this. And very sorry this is so brief.
Yeah I'm still doing this rewrite. Still horrible at writing women but eh. Hope y'all enjoy
Ruby found herself sitting at a table in a dark room as the gray haired man sat in front of her wit Glynda standing in the corner as she read through a book. Even though magazine on top of it could be seen. Ruby gulped nervously as the man infront of her sighed.
"So... Your tai-yang's daughter. Ruby correct?" The man asked as he stared at her focusing all the attention to the girl before him. Ruby nodded as the man sighed and closed his eyes as he rubbed his nose. "Ofcourse... So care to explain why you want to go to beacon and why you show decency with a scythe?" The man asked as his brow furrowed. His glare focused upon ruby. The girl took a deep breath as she held it for a few seconds before exhaling
"Well my dad's a huntsmen, my uncle qrow is a huntsmen, my mom was a huntress and my big sister is gonna be a huntress might aswell follow in the foot steps" ruby said as she smiled before sniffing the air. "Are there cookies here?" She asked. The man nodded and snapped his finger as out of nowhere a jar appeared in front of ruby as her eyes sparkled and immediately opened the jar not paying attention to the fact the jar just... Appeared.
She started to stuff her face as the man cleared her throat. "So as for your desire to go to beacon academy early... I have already discussed it with your father." The man. Spoke as Ruby stopped harfing down cookies as she looked at him with her mouth full of cookies before chewing and then swallowing. Almost in a cartoon fashion. Ruby sighed and pushed the cookie jar back- nope, nope ok she's not. she's gonna keep em there.
"Did my dad ask you to not let me go?" She asked as she frowned Abit. The man shook his head as he out stretched his hand as a cup of tea appeared. Ruby once again not questioning.
The man took a sip before setting it down. "Despite your father's behavior normally. It appears he's lightened up.... Maybe... Actually no." The man said as he took another sip before placing the cup down as it vanished.
"Regardless the point is clear your father wants you in beacon and you want to be there as well.. as the headmaster-" "wait your headmaster ozpin?!" Ruby interrupted the man as he groaned.
The man knows as ozpin face palmed as Ruby then meekly apologizes for interrupting him. "As the headmaster it is my job to personally greet and welcome new students. So since your father has wanted you to go your sister most likely would love to have you there as well, and you yourself want to go to fulfill some vague family business I would like to welcome you to beacon academy. The transport will arrive at the docks next week I suggest you pack your things and pick whatever weapon you want to have." Ozpin spoke bluntly... He seemed bored. Sure he was being polite but he seem tired.
Ruby shook away the thought as she nodded vigorously as she thanked ozpin continuously before Glynda dragged her out of the room and sent her away. She then turned to ozpin as he inhaled his shoulders rising before falling as he exhaled. He leaned back in his chair. "Glynda... Please tell me I'm not an idiot for letting a child go to my academy." Ozpin spoke in a more relaxed manor as Glynda looked at him softly. "Your an idiot oz. But your decisions are yours." Glynda spoke as ozpin closed his eyes as he remembered a woman. Wearing a black gown with white hair, her skin pale with cracks running along her body.
Back with Ruby she was walking home as she rubbed her ear as it ached. She grumbled as stopped walking and took a deep breath. Before exhaling and screaming at the top of her lungs "IM GOING TO BEACON!".
The next few days were a flash as Ruby was gathering parts of fire arms and machinery aswell as buying the scythe that she returned. Eventually the day came as Ruby was carrying a red and black box on her back as she and yang were heading to the docks. "So how you feeling rubes? You excited?" Yang teased as she looked at her sister who had a big dopey grin as she nodded vigorously.
Yang chuckled before ruffling ruby's hair as Ruby tried to pry herself free. "No fair you mess up my hair yet you won't let me mess with yours" ruby whined as her sister let her go as yang chuckled before patting her sister on the back.
"That's because your hair isnt shaped to look perfect." Yang spoke as the two arrived At the docks as a large air ship sat it's doors closed as a ton of people huddled around. "Well this is it. There's Still turning back. Rubes. You ready for huntress training" yang asked as her sister nodded before the doors open and a man wearing a pilots out stepped out. "Greetings all students. I am your pilot. I will be escorting you to beacon academy. Now please enter single file." The pilot spoke as he then entered the air ship as people entered and found their seats.
Ruby entered and found herself sitting between her sister and two other people. The first was a young black hair man his face slim and angular as he wore a green tailcoat that had a flower petal pattern across the sleeves as he wore simply white sweat pants. The man was scrolling through his scroll as the person next to him was red head girl whos face was much more rounded much like ruby's. She wore a black t-shirt with the words "BONK!" Written across it. She wore a pink over shirt that and wore black shorts. She was going on about something revolving around lightning... Hammer and pancakes? Ruby couldn't quite understand due to how fast the girl was speaking.
"Um hi" ruby said sheepishly as the red head looked at her as she smiled. "Hitherenicetomeetyaimnorathismopeisrenwhatsyournameyourfavoritecolor-" the girl spoke so fast The boy placed a hand on her mouth as he looked at her. "Nora. Your speed talking again. Take a breath and speak slow." He said calmly as the girl nodded as the boy smiled softly and removed his head. The girl took a deep breath and exhaled. "Hi there. I'm Nora Valkyrie. This mope here is lie ren." Nora spoke at a normal pace allowing ruby to think of an answer. "I'm ruby rose. This is my big sister yang." Ruby smiled softly as she pointed to her sister who waved at them.
As the four talked we see a blonde sitting in his chair as he face was GREEN as he rocked back and waiting for the ship to arrive at beacon. Eventually it did as everyone got off with Ruby waving goodbye to Nora and ren "Bye bye! Hopefully we get to hang out! Bye!" Ruby shouted as the two walked away. Until someone ran past her and ran to the nearest trash can as he bent down and started vomiting with yang coming off the ship as she looked at the boy. "Let's hope not to get teamed with vomit boy over there. Anyway see ya around. You go make friends." Yang said as she pat her sisters back as Ruby looked at her confused "friends. I don't need to make friends I already got you!" Ruby said as yang sighed before seeing a group of people. "Well my friends are over there so cya later rubes!" She ruffles ruby's hair before running off. Ruby reached out her hand for her sister before sighing. Great. This was gonna be middle school all over again.
Ruby begin walking around looking at all the sites before hearing something fall before she kicked something as shattered glass could be heard as Ruby looked to see a dust canister broken at the dust grains glowed as there was a BOOM as the grains of dust exploded causing ruby to find herself in a crater. She covered her ears as they were ringing as she shut her eyes to focus before something blocked the sunlight. Ruby opened her eyes and saw young woman with white hair stare down at her, her face contorted into a scowl. Ruby knew she was about to get yelled at so she curled up into a ball as the girl looked at her. "Hey. Hey. Hey crater face are you alright?" The girl asked as she crossed her arms. Ruby was not hearing any of it as the girl groaned before grabbing ruby the shoulders and lift her up.
"Are you alright? You took the brunt of a explosion." The girl asked as Ruby shrinked back before realizing that she wasn't being yelled at. "Um yeah I'm ok." Ruby said as she wiped off the gunk left by the explosion. "That's good to hear. Now then." The girl proceed to slap ruby. Ruby held her cheek as the girl began scolding her. "Do you have any idea how careless that was, just walking into a dust canister! You could have died. Or lose a limb!" The girl shouted as Ruby looked down ashamed.
"I'm sorry." Ruby whimpered as the girl sighed before rubbing the bridge of her nose. "Look just be careful next time you dunce. Now then may I ask your name?" The girl asked as Ruby looked at her and nodded smiling. "I'm ruby. Nice to meet you." Ruby beamed as she out stretched her hand. The girl grabbed her hand and shook it but when they were about to speak another voice interrupted.
"Weiss schnee. Second heir to the great and mighty schnee dust manufacturing" a black haired girl spoke as their yellow eyes stared at the two and ruby could feel the eyes piercing gaze. Weiss turned to the girl and shared her piercing gaze with her own. "It appears someone study's a lot. How'd you tell." Weiss asked curious as the black haired girl closed the book she was reading but not before placing in a bookmark.
"White hair. Natural white hair isn't found anywhere else. Except for the schnee's.now my only question is why are you here. Come to get more fanus to serve you perhaps?" The girl said coldly as Weiss grumbled as she crossed her arms. "It appears you have me mixed up with my father. I don't do that." Weiss retorted as the black haired girl shook her head as she began walking away.
"Schnees are all the same. Once a enslaver always a enslaver." She shouted behind her as Weiss clenched her fist and grit before taking a deep breath and exhaling as she seemed to calm down.
"Um well it's nice to meet you Weiss" ruby spoke as Weiss just sighed and began walking away as Ruby was now left in a crater. She groaned and sat down. "Great. Just great." Ruby spoke as a shadow casted over her. "What do you want now lad- oh" ruby spoke as she looked up and saw a familiar blonde male as he wore a hoodie and blue jeans as he had plate armor covering his chest, shoulders, stomach, and knees. "Um hi I'm jaune d'arc." Jaune spoke as he waved at her. Ruby shot up and pointed at him "vomit boy! I knew you looked familiar!" Ruby proclaimed as jaune sighed. "ofcourse I'm already getting nicknames well Atleast I ain't named crater face" jaune retorted as he crossed his arms as Ruby frowned "didn't have to go there... Well it's nice to meet you jaune I'm ruby." Ruby spoke as her and jaune shook hands as they hear a ringing as the large school gates opened for them as everyone immediately ran in to the school.
Rwby: fate
(yes I'm giving this bloody rewrite a name finally.)
The students had all piled in as they stood in front of a stage. Jaune and ruby were looking around trying to find a place before ruby noticed a hand waving at her to come over. Ruby smiled widely before grabbing jaune by the arm and bolting towards The waving hand as it was yang waving her over.
"Yang!" Ruby squealed as she let go of a dazed jaune and leaped at her sister before hugging as yang laughed Abit as she hugged ruby back. "Nice to know you didn't get run over by the stampede. And oh what's this?" Yang put ruby down as turned her gaze to jaune as he looked at her slightly nervous.
"It seems my baby sister found herself a new friend~ nice to meet ya" yang spoke as she outstretched her hand as jaune looked at it hesitantly. He's seen a few too many movies to know that an older sister probably means death or severe trouble. Jaune then inhaled before grabbing Yangs hand and shaking it as he exhaled.
Jaune then felt a stinging pain as yang tightened her grip around his hand as yang tugged him towards her as she grabbed him by the collar of his jacket.
"So. You plan on being good to my sister. Right?" Yang had a murderous glare as jaune gulped nervously as Ruby just looked at her sister annoyed.
"Yang I know your just being my older sister but I just met the guy. It's nothing ridiculous like in those romcom's" ruby spoke as yang looked at her before sighing as she let go of the rather meek knight.
"Atleast it's nice to see you remembered to be realistic." Yang spoke before ruby noticed that jaune was gawking at someone. "Uh jaune What are you staring at?" Ruby questioned as jaune just kept gawk until she noticed a very familiar white haired woman. Ruby looked back at jaune as she sighed.
"Shes an angel" jaune uttered with large blush on his face as Ruby groaned before she grabbed jaune by the collar of his hoodie and dragged him to the two.
Yang watched as Ruby walked towards a white haired girl with her new friend. Yang smiled as she felt some relief in her heart. "Well. Now that rubes is off time to find potential teammates" yang spoke as she saw a girl standing by herself as she read a book. Yang grinned before sneaking up on her as she got a better look at.
The girls hair was jet black as she wore a bow of the color on her head. She wore a white t-shirt with a black corset over it aswell as wearing a black jacket with the sleeves rolled up. Yang proceeded to lean over her and looked at the book the girl was reading.
"Yo. What ya reading?" Yang asked as the girl immediately jumped back punching yang in the face out of reflex. "S-sorry.. reflexes. Now what do you want?" The girl asked a tid bit annoyed at the sudden interruption.
Yang chuckled as she rubbed her jaw as it ached Abit. "Nice shot hot stuff. I just wanted to introduce myself to a possible teammate." Yang spoke as she stuck out her hand. "Yang Xiao longs my name. Pleasure to meet you." Yang spoke as the girl looked at her hand before slowly nodding. "Blake. Just call me me Blake" the girl named Blake spoke as she pushed away Yangs hand as she stared at the blonde.
"Nice to meet you Blake. I hope to team up with you when I get the chance" yang said as she had a huge grin on her face. Blake just rolled her eyes as she just went back to reading.
Back with Ruby and jaune ruby had dragged jaune to speak with Weiss. "Hey again Weiss!" Ruby shouted as she waved at the schnee heiress. Weiss turned to see the girl she met at the front walking to her while dragging some scraggly looking blonde. Weiss scowled abit as Ruby finally arrived. "Hello again.. ruby was it?" Weiss asked as Ruby nodded vigorously as she had a huge grin on her face.
"Well it's nice to see you again. But what's up with tall, blonde, and scraggly?" Weiss asked as jaune looked away embarrassed as Ruby had him by the collar of his Jacket.
Eventually after a bit footsteps could be heard as everyone went quiet. A large burley man stepped in wearing a large emerald green overcoat with a black shirt and camo pants along with black combat boots. The man was adjusting his coat as a podium with a microphone rose from a hidden compartment in the floor. The man walk to the podium after finally adjusting his coat he placed his large hands on the podium as he spoke in a calm deep voice.
"Hello students. I am professor hazel. For the next 4 years I will be your hand to hand combat teacher. Of course there is a caveat. I will be your hand to hand combat teacher for 4 years if you pass the entrance hunt exam." The man named hazel spoke as the crowd had a mix of shocked faces. Terrified faces or determined ones. Ruby being one of the determined ones.
"Now I know all of you know what I mean by that. So Ill just say this. Before the exam begins you will all have a 20 minute grace period. So you can gather your weapons, your gear, and prepare any rations you have. So now that I finish this speech the grace period begins now I hope you all are ready by the end of the grace period." Hazel finished as he began walking away
Ruby noded to herself as she noticed jaune looking at the man as eyes wide in amazement. Watching as the man strided away. "If I could be that.... I could finally live up" jaune whispered to himself as Ruby saw a glow of vigor now shining in jaunes azure eyes. Ruby then noticed yang walking up to the three waving as she was dragging behind her... Oh no... Oh no... Ruby's eyes widen as she saw a familiar girl with black wearing a similar colored bow. Weiss noticed the familiar girl aswell as she scowled as the memory of what was said between the heiress and the girl rang through her mind. "Schnees are all the same. Once a enslaver always a enslaver." It stung hearing the words echo in her mind.
"Hey ruby I got myself a new teammate already!" Yang said with a large dopey grin on her face. "I told you that's not how teammates work." The girl spoke Sharply as she glared at yang who faked a gasp "Blake! You wound me!" Yang spoke dramatically as she placed her on her chest as if she was stabbed there. Blake just groaned before she pulled out her book and started reading.
Yang noticed and chuckled Abit. "Atleast your nice." Yang spoke as Ruby turned her attention to jaune who just stood staring into space. "Jaune?" Ruby spoke as jaune snapped out and looked at Ruby. "o-oh sorry rubes. I got lost in thought. A-anyway I gotta go. Need to get ready" jaune spoke as he started to run towards somewhere. Ruby frowned Abit before feeling yang placed a hand on her shoulder. "Don't be so glum rubes. You'll probably meet him during the exam." Yang mentioned as Ruby sighed softly and turned to her sister as she nodded. "Now how about we introduce our friends to each other. This is Blake belladonna. I met her after you and jaune left to go meet with ice queen over here" yang joked as she placed a hand on Blakes shoulder.
Ruby looked at Blake for a bit notice a little twitch in the ribbon she was wearing. Ruby just disregard it as probably just the wind. "Yeah I kinda met her before. Um nice to meet you. I'm ruby rose" ruby said as she hesitantly stuck out her. Blake looked up from her book and just nodded. Ruby sighed to herself. Great... This was going to be one long grace period. And then the exam. Oh boy the exam.
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I am very angry at the fact that I'm having to make this a two-parter because one I just don't have enough time to release it.
Two. If I don't release it then I'm just going to feel bad because that means I'm not going to be kinda consistent.
Anyway sorry everyone.
Rock on till ya drop tata motherfuckers 🤟
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RWBY: Fate
(I tried, I swear I did it's just so damn annoying!
I didn't feel like having you guys wait another fucking year just for me to drop a page.
I am so sorry everyone I have failed this time.)
Our focus changes to jaune who is in some kind of locker room as he managed to find a locker as he put some stuff in specifically a box of pumpkin Pete cereal.
He sighed after getting all of the unnecessarys in the locker. He closed it as he began to hear people entering the locker room.
"Thank the brothers I got here early." He spoke softly as he then noticed the locker next to him opened as he peeked around and saw a familiar woman with bright vermilion hair strung up in a pony tail. She wore a golden armored corset aswell as a black body suit underneath with a gold plate armor chest piece covering her upper body. Along with that she wore golden kneepads and shin guards. She also wore long black gloves over her hands with the symbol of a maple leaf on the back hand of both gloves. She also had a golden arm guard on her right arm. The most defining addition to her outfit was red sash the hanged out from the side of her body suit.
Jaunes eyes stared at the marvel of a woman infront of him before he muttered a simple "hello". The woman immediately turned on her heel to face him.
"Oh hi there! Who might you be?" The woman said as jaune shook his head before speaking his. "Jaune d'arc. Nice to meet you." Jaune spoke as he waved at her.
The woman seemed to detense as she stuck out her hand. "Pyrrha Nikos. It's a pleasure." Pyrrha spoke as jaune looked at her hand before shaking it. As jaune looked at her he felt a memory pop into his head. "Hey um. Weird question but you wouldn't happen to have been on a box of pumpkin Pete cereal have you" jaune asked as pyrrha looked at him Abit surprised.
"Yes actually. Though it was only for a month. The companies support is one of the reasons I'm here. Who knew sponsorships could get you into a huntsmen academy." Pyrrha answered as she pulled away from the handshake as she rubbed the back of her neck. Jaune had a shimmer in his eyes as he began to babble on about cereal trivia as pyrrha just listened oddly amazed by all the pieces of trivia of cereal history.
Suddenly a small chuckle was heard as the two looked to see Weiss walking in. "I'll be honest madam pyrrha I never took you for a cereal enthusiast." She said smiling Abit as jaune had small blush on his face as pyrrha just rolled her eyes at the mention of "madam pyrrha".
"Weiss schnee. What a surprise. Aren't you supposed to be counting your mountains of lien." Pyrrha spoke coldly as she crossed her arms. Weiss seemed a bit taken aback but kept walking until she was right infront of the vermilion gladiator. Weiss stuck out her hand as she smiled a bit. "I would love to be friends with you." Weiss spoke with confidence as pyrrha just stared at her observing her bodies disposition. "U-um Id like to be friends-" jaune spoke up which caught Pyrrha off guard. She had forgotten he was behind her listening to everything. She turned back to Weiss who was no longer staring at pyrrha instead just glaring at the blonde knight. Jaune just piped down as he opened his locker and made it look like he was looking for something.
Weiss turned her attention back to pyrrha as she Changed to a friendly disposition. "So about my request-"
"No." Pyrrha interrupted the schnee heiress as she had a aura of dangerous intent. "O-oh. Ok then. I apologize for bothering you madam pyrrha" Weiss spoke as she spoke as she curtsied before heading back to locker.
"Did I ruin the chance?" jaune asked as pyrrha looked at him her posture softening as she shook her head. "No. I just don't like making friends who give off... How do I put it?" Pyrrha spoke as she tapped her chin. "Off energy?" Jaune said as pyrrha snapped her fingers. "Yeah that! Now then how about we head to the exam course" Pyrrha spoke as she grabbed jaune by his hoodie as she walked off with the blonde knight as we see a defeated Weiss rummaging through her locker before feeling a pat on her back as yang stood by her. "You'll get on her good side soon ice queen." Yang had a large stupid smirk as she talked which Weiss just grumbled at. Stupid blondes.
With Ruby she was wandering through the Locker room in awe of it sheer size. before seeing two familiar figures. "REN! NORA!" Ruby shouted with glee as she ran towards the two as Nora turned and grinned before running right towards ruby as both had their arms spread ready to bear hug each other.
The two collided as they hugged each squealing in joy as ren just watched unamused as eventually we see everyone enter the locker room and prepare before finally hearing bell signaling the end of the grace period. Eventually everyone found themselves on a cliff as there were launch platforms as we see Ruby and jaune standing next to each other as jaune was shivering in his armor meanwhile ruby was inspecting the red case that she was carrying.
"S-so... You scared r-ruby?" Jaune ask as he looked at the rose reaper. Ruby looked at him a bit confused. "Nope. Are you?" Ruby answered with her own question. Jaune vigorously shook his head as Ruby noded.
"Attention future huntsmen." Ozpins Voice rang out as everyone turn to see him standing to the side as he held a microphone. "You will be given a flare gun with two types of ammunition. One with red and one with green, the green flare signals that you give up. Red means you have completed your objective and are returning here. You will be given these to ensure that there are no casualties when we can't observe you. Any questions?" Ozpin asked as jaune raised his hand.
"Um What is our objective?" Jaune asked nervously as ozpin stared at him, his eyes narrowed as he saw a symbol of the crescent moon on the boys shield.
"You're an arc correct. Your families full of legends you should know this. Now tell me how is crocea mors doing." Ozpin asked as jaune was about to say something before ozpin pressed a button as jaune was sent flying from his launch platform.
"Oops. Begin. And make sure you use your semblances." ozpin spoke as everyone rocketed off as Glynda and hazel stood behind ozpin. "Ozpin that was oddly cruel" hazel spoke calmly as the megaphone in ozpins hand disintegrated. "Apologies. Just a bridge that I didn't burn." Ozpin answered as he walked of before stopping.
"Glynda be a dear and keep tabs on the students. Hazel get the rescue unit ready if we get any green flares." Ozpin added as he walked away before vanishing into thin air.
Our focus changes to ren as he pulled out two Chinese dow only transformed into it looked like pistols with the blade turned into a bayonet before it fired off the bayonets leaving a trail of string attaching to both blades as they hit a tree as ren swung himself across the tree as he landed on a large tree branch as he hear screams of what sounded like a helpless girl. He looked up and so Jaune heading towards the ground as ren sigh as the bayonets returned. He aimed his pistol at jaune before firing a bayonet as it pierced through Jaunes hood as it nailed him to the tree.
"Well hello" Ren spoke calmly as he sat down as jaune looked at him with a nervous expression on his face. "Um hi. I'm jaune d'arc. Nice to meet you um... Wait what's your name?" Jaune asked as ren just sighed as he cleared his throat. "Lie ren. My friend Nora calls me Ren though." Ren answered as he looked to the sky as we see a pink lightning bolt shoot by the two before crashing into the ground as we see the one and only Nora Valkyrie Face planted into the dirt as a crater surrounded her before she shot up as she had a huge grin as she turned to Ren. "Nailed it!" She spoke as if she was a toddler who got a toy she wanted.
"Wow. Your five minutes early. I figured you show up here as soon as me and jaune here were on the ground." Ren jested. Well jaune assumed he did. His monotone voice didn't really help discern whether he was joking or being actually serious.
Nora raised a eyebrow as she looked at the blonde knight before she narrowed her eyes. "Cereal man." She spoke plainly as she suddenly grinned as jaune gulped nervously.
Our focus finally changed to ruby soaring through the air as she had a calm disposition as she grabbed the red box and removed it from her belt as we the emblem of a flaming rose. Suddenly the box transformed into a giant scythe that had the end of a sniper rifle barrel. Suddenly she fired a blast of wind from the barrel as she suddenly gained momentum as we see petals envelope her before a cascade of rose petals was in her place as it flew right towards an area full of strange werewolf creature, the main body had black fur as bones covered each of them. Suddenly we see Ruby emerged from the rose petals as she reared the scythe as we see black lightning envelope the blade as she brought it down piercing into the earth sending a shockwave as the creatures disintegrated.
In the aftermath we see Ruby leaning on her scythe which had the name "crescent rose" engraved on it. Ruby removed the scythe as it transformed into its red box again as she attached it to metal emblem on her belt.
"Now. To find the objective. And hopefully Ren and Nora." Ruby spoke happily as she began walking through the dense forest.
Our perspective changes once more as we see yang wearing a pair of sun glasses as she soared through the air as she... Wait was she NAPPING?! Yang soon yawned as she looked to see a tree in her way as she just smirked she tapped her bracelets as they transformed into two gauntlets that a bullet strap wrapped around as they had shotgun rounds. She brought her first back before getting close to the tree as she SLUGGED IT breaking the tree in half as we hear the sound of a shot gun FIRING. The top half of the giant tree was sent flying as yang fired a blast from her other gauntlet sending her soaring through the sky as flames enveloped her. Eventually we see her land on the ground as we hear a BOOM. As everything around got scorched. She stood up and dusted herself off.
"Now to get to work." Yang spoke as began running through the forest.
Next we see Weiss soar through the air as she prepared a repair a with a revolver chamber in the guard as she spun it before stopping on the cyan chamber as Weiss eyes glowed as we see circles with a giant snow flakes in the center appear before turning into ice as a icy slide form as Weiss landed and began ice skating on the slide as we see the same glyphs under her feet. As she skated across the icy slide she saw the same black werewolves ruby encountered as she readied her rapier and spun the revolver until it landed on the red chamber. "Myrtenaster, flare form." Weiss spoke calmly as she leaped into the air spinning upside down as she sliced through the air sending a blast of flames towards the monsters scorching them as she landed graceful. "That's 10 beowolves added to my Talley. Let's see if I can beat winters count." Weiss spoke to herself as Blake watched from the shadows as she rolled her eyes as she began walking towards Weiss.
"Rivalry between schnee's? Interesting" Blake humored to herself as she suddenly found the blade of weisses sword myrtenaster pointed towards her. "You have alot of gaul to act all chummy with me after insulting me." Weiss spoke coldly as Blake rolled her eyes as she moved myrtenaster to the side. "Look schnee. I'll be honest I don't care for you or your family. But if you want to finish your objective you'll need teammates." Blake said bluntly as Weiss just looked at her before sighing as she sheathed myrtenaster and out stretched her hand. "A truce. Being antagonistic to another isn't going to get either of us anywhere." Weiss spoke as Blake just smirked as she grabbed weisses hand and shook it.
Lastly we see Pyrrha already on the ground as she walked through the forest as she had her spear and shield on her back. Before hearing a hiss as two massive snakes covered in bones surrounded her one was black, one was white. Pyrrha out stretched her unarmored arm as her shield snapped onto it as her spear went into the hand of her other arm. She stood ready to fight. Her shield infront of her as her spear was at the ready.
The white serpent darted towards her as she bashed it away with her shield as the black serpent fired a blast of venom towards her as she dodged it before chucking her spear through creatures mouth and piercing it brain as it fell dead as pyrrha's free hand glowed black as her spear returned to her as she stood infront of the white serpent as circled around her. Pyrrha placed her shield on her back as her spear transformed into a rifle as the snake went straight towards her as we hear the sound of a gun firing as we see both serpents dead at the vermilion gladiators feet.
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WHY?!
WHHAHAHAHY??!
I JUST SAID I WOULDN'T DO THIS!
FUCK!
I am so fucking sorry everyone.
Like me when I play hollow Knight steal soul I die will trying to attempt the feat of writing more than or equal to 3,000 words.
I swear I'm gonna make this right. I swear to you all! Or else my account is fuk-ma-az!
FUCK
But before I go I need to let you all know that I'm going to be taking a break. I think I'm finally experiencing burnout. Or something similar.
I'm going to be back y'all can count your lucky stars on it. But I'm tired.
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So this isnt significant at all but I just felt like showing the cover of my fan rewrite of rwby. Aka
Rwby: FATE
Not significant really, i just wanted to make it look like i have an ego
Also.
"MY EYES!"
RWBY: FATE.
Link to hub for the rest of the pages. Here.
Ruby found herself wandering for a bit as she felt something lurking around her as she was taking a close view of everything. Suddenly a claw swiped at her as ruby leaped back and landed readying crescent rose as it transformed into something that looked like a sniper rifle as a large massive black wolf with a ribcage coming out of its back as it's mask was burning red.
Ruby stared the creature down and aimed crescent rose towards the beast as she pulled the trigger as a loud BANG was heard before ruby turned into a cascade of rose petals as the beast was shot in its mask as a explosion went off infront of the beasts face with the cascade running up its leg as the beast slashed at its own leg as it sent the cascade as ruby emerged from it as she aim crescent rose towards the ground before firing as a blast of flames fired from the barrel as Ruby was sent high into the air as crescent rose transformed into its scythe forn as raised it above her head as a another blast of fire was sent from the barrel as Ruby rocketed towards the wolf as it swung towards her with its claws.
All we see is red as Ruby brought crescent rose edge down as it cleaved through the beasts neck. We then see ruby land on the gras the beasts body fell to the ground as it dissolved into a black goo.
"That was a nice warm up. Thanks again for the training uncle Q." Ruby spoke as she chuckled softly before we fade to Pyrrha walking through the forest as she soon heard foot steps as she turned to see jaune ruin right towards hervas she readied her spear and shield as a pack of beowolves came right for them. Pyrrha's eyes went wide as jaune grabbed as the two began running away from the flood of monsters.
"Shitshitshitshitshitshitshitshitshitshitshitshit-" jaune muttered under his breath before a boom was heard as one Nora Valkyrie rocketed through the horde while on a grenade launcher as Ren ran atop the horde with each step cracking the masks of the ones he ran upon. Eventually Nora skidded across the ground as she turned around as the grenade launcher turned into a large hammer as she reared back. Meanwhile Ren leaped towards her as he landed on the head of the hammer. Nora waited for the horde to get closer before swinging her hammer as Ren leaped of it as he took his two dao as they transformed into their pistol form as he fired off rounds into the beasts as their corpses are still hurtling towards Nora before she swings her hammer again sending the corpses away as she kept swinging sending the beast corpses soaring until none were left.
Nora planted her hammer on the ground as she panted softly as Ren walked up to her and pat her on the back. "You did good Nora. Want me to carry you?" Ren asked as Nora immediately hopped onto his back as Nora planted her head on his. Ren sighed smiling as jaune looked at them with Pyrrha walking up to them.
"Hello there. Thank you for the assistance" pyrrha spoke as she stuck out her hand as Ren nodded before shaking it as a loud snoring is heard as everyone looked to see a sleeping Nora with Ren sighing as he frowned.
"Well now that we are all safe and sound, I guess we should introduce each other.. properly." Jaune spoke as he slowly walked up to them with Ren nodding. "I'm lie Ren, and the sleeping gremlin is Nora Valkyrie. Pleasure to meet you miss..." Ren spoke as he looked her up and down as Pyrrha raised an eyebrow. "Do you not know who I am?" Pyrrha asked curiously. "I'm afraid yes. I'm sorry if I should but me and Nora aren't able to learn about the world around us due to.. circumstances" Ren answered as he looked down to ground as his face got dark.
"W-well it's fine if you don't know my name, Im pyrrha nikos. And I think its nice to meet you and Nora" Pyrrha spoke as Ren looked back up as he smiled softly.
"And you all know who I am.. obviously" jaune added as he rubbed the back of his neck his face tinged red from embarrassment. Ren and pyrrha looked at him and nodded. Then a loud caw is heard as they look to see a giant black bird with a bone mask as jaune focused in on it as he saw a familiar... Red... Reaper.
"Oh shit! THAT NEVERMORES GOT RUBY!" Jaune shouted as he began running in the beasts direction as our focus changes to yang still walking through the forest humming to herself before feeling something run into her as her and whoever hit her hit the ground with a THUD as yang groaned and looked to see a panicked jaune as he got up. "really sorry Ruby's sister, I gotta help ruby!" Jaune spoke as he bolted off towards the direction he was going as yang looked at his direction before the entirety of what he said hit her as she looked to see a nevermore with a unconscious ruby in its claws. Yangs eyes turn read as she got up and leaped up before rocketing towards jaune and grabbing him as both he and yang soared towards the nevermore with jaune screaming confused as his face went pale.
"Hold tight vomit boy! Let's go save my sister!" Yang spoke as jaune looked at her with a mixture of terror and confusion. "W-wait why are you bringing me?!" Jaune questioned as yang looked at him.
"You wanted to save my sister right. Then your coming along too!" Yang answer as jaunes face returned to normal as he nodded profusely as we see ren carrying a sleeping as he leaped from the branches of the trees as pyrrha follows after. With said nevermore it kept flying to what all looks like a nest as Ruby groaned as she came to and was really confused why she was flying before looking up.
"SHOOT!" ruby shouted as she tried to get out, struggling as she did so. Thats before a gun shot was heard as a "manly" shout was heard as Ruby saw a red eyed, flaming haired, yang with jaune in her arm as they were hurtling towards the nevermore as yang lifted jaune up before chucking him towards the nevermore as the boy took out a sword with its sheath turning into a shield as what looked like a crescent moon was emblazoned onto it.
"Let my friend go you stupid bird!" Jaune shouted as he reared back his sword before bringing it down into the nevermore only for the blade to get stuck in the beasts neck as it screeched in anger as jaune immediately went pale and looked to see ruby staring at him as he chuckled nervously as he waved at her.
That when yang was seen up in the air as she raised her right arm as we see it shift as a small barrel came out of the other end before a BANG was heard as the barreled fired sending yang rocketing towards the creature as she punched the pummel of jaunes sword deeper into the beasts neck as its screeching halted as its eyes glazed over with yang grabbing ruby and YANKING her free as she rocketed off as jaune was left as he blinked twice as the corpse of the bird finally started to fall as jaune screamed out as he was plummetting at a rapid pace.
Jaune closed his eyes as he took a deep breath. This was it, he made it to beacon, he made a friend, he helped kill a Grimm and now, he was plummetting to his death because the sister of the person probably just forgot.. yeah.
"If I die, than I died hopefully making you proud dad! IM DYING A HERO!" Jaune shouted to the top of his lungs before noticing he was still falling. Normally Grimm this big fall faster but now it was like only he was falling only to feel the sensation of the wind ripping through him stop. He opened his eyes to see his armor and sword glowing black as he looked around and saw pyrrha's hands glowing black as she brought him towards her as Ren was crouching down as Nora was now awake and preparing her grenade launcher. Soon jaune felt his feet kiss the ground as we then cut to Blake and Weiss walking around as Weiss was getting more irritated as nothing was said between the heiress and the strange as Blake was reading her book.
"So..are we going to say anything or are we gonna ignore each other" Weiss spoke calmly trying to hide her irritation.
"What's there to talk about? All we need to do is complete our objective and we're done" Blake replied as she kept reading her book. Weiss just sighed as she stopped walking with Blake stopping shortly after.
"I was hoping I could get to talk to you, maybe understand why you came off as cold as you did." Weiss explained as Blake raised an eyebrow. "I simply just don't like schnee's. Your family is the face of slavery at this point. So why should I be nice to the daughter of Jacques schnee. Your exactly like him." Blake said coldly as Weiss looked at her, her face contorted to a scowl.
"So your going off of bias" Weiss responded as she folded her arms as blake closed her book and the two stared at each other.
That's before a hissing was heard as both readied their weapons as Blake wielded a short sword that had the body of pistol for a hilt and guard. They looked around only to see nothing. That's when there was a CRASH as a large crater appeared next to them as they looked in to see yang clutching ruby tightly before they got up as only one thing was said by Weiss.
"HOW THE FUCK?!".
Our vision changes to ozpin sitting in a lawn chair as he sipped his tea. With a frustrated glynda walking up to him.
"OZPIN! We have a problem!" Glynda spoke as ozpin looked at her with hazel following close behind her as he took out his scroll as it showed a picture of jaune.
"This students transcripts were faked sir. He must of hacked into the system-" "I know. I let him in" ozpin interrupted hazel as glynda stopped walking as her head was steaming.
"YOU WHAT?!" Glynda roared out in fury as ozpin just had a smug grin. "I let him get in this school glynda, and so far he's surviving the exam he hasn't even pulled out his flare gun.
"He doesn't have a flare gun. None of the new students do. You sent them all without having me hand them sir." Hazel spoke as ozpin's face went pale.
"Shit! Glynda we need to get port, oobleck, and the other teachers ready we got to save our students." Ozpin spoke as he got up and walked towards the building as glynda and hazel followed with hazel grumbling something.
We then see Jaune, Nora, Pyrrha, and Ren roaming the forest as we see Ruby, Weiss, Blake, and Yang unknowingly right beside them until they both entered a clearing as jaune and ruby were the first to see each other as ruby immediately tackled him and bear hugged him.
"Vomit boy! Your ok!" Ruby spoke as jaune gasped for air as ruby was squeezing the air out of him. "C-crater face! Can't breathe!" Jaune spoke in a breathy voice as Ruby immediately let go as she rubbed the back of her neck.
"S-sorry about that" ruby spoke as her face was red. Weiss just rolled her eyes as she then noticed Pyrrha as she waved at her which pyrrha simply ignoring her as Weiss was met with the cold shoulder of rejection, once more. Yang just looked at Weiss and snorted at her face as Weiss looked like she got her world shattered.
That's when Nora cleared her throat as Ruby saw her and Ren as she ran towards them as she and Nora hugged.
"YOUR HERE TOO?! OOOH THIS IS AWESOME!" Ruby squealed as Nora and ruby spun around as Ren sighed before smiling. "O-oh well it seems like I won't be doing a lot of introducing. That's good to know" jaune spoke as everything seemed peaceful.. too peaceful. That's when Blakes ribbon twitched as she saw something large emerging as a massive black dragon struck slamming its claws into the ground sending the group back as they all looked at it.
"Grimm! Get ready everyone!" Ruby and jaune spoke in unison as everyone prepared their weapons as Ruby shot towards the dragon in a cascade of rose petals as yang followed right behind her with weiss bolt off as glyphs appeared under her feet as she began skating around the beast as she spun the chamber of myrtenaster untill it hit the cyan chamber as she scraped the point of myrtenaster against the ground as it left a trail of ice. Meanwhile jaune grabbed onto pieces of bone sticking out of the dragon as he began scaling only to feel himself be lifted as he saw pyrrha climbing with him as her hand glowed black as jaune floated up with Pyrrha. Blake just watched as she then heard a BOOM as she saw Nora and Ren riding on her grenade launcher as Blake sighed as she took out a long ribbon and attached it to her sword as she proceeded to throw it like grappling hook before leaping up as the blade stabbed Into the dragon before she tugged at the ribbon as she was sent towards the beast before landing on it as she saw yang in the air as she slammed her fist into the beast as a gunshot is heard. Meanwhile ruby was running up its neck as she loaded up a black gem into crescent rose as she leaped up before aiming the barrel of crescent rose as she fired as the dragon head slammed into the ground by an unseen force. That's when we see Weiss stop as a large ring of ice was made on the before it SHOT UP as icy spikes trapping the beasts as it opened its mouth as it suddenly fired a BLAST of flames that thankfully missed every. That's when we see everyone ready their weapons before striking the Grimm in the back, wings, claws, and head as it screeched in pain before the lights in its eyes went out. Everyone panted heavily except for Weiss.
That's when ruby noticed. The fireball that the dragon shot burned away some of the brush as it reveals... A temple.
"The end... We made it to the end of the course!" Ruby shouted in joy as everyone looked and everyone soon got off the corpse of the dragon and began making it to the temple and were met with over 14 different bronze chess pieces. With ruby grabbing the queen, Weiss grabbing grabbing the rook, Blake grabbed the knight, and yang grabbing the bishop. Meanwhile jaune grabbed the king, Nora grabbed the rook, Pyrrha grabbed the knight, and Ren grabbing the bishop.
That's when the whirring of wheels were heard as large bus stopped as the door opened revealing... OZPIN?!
"Get in the bus we're postponing the te- oh... You already have completed your objective... But still come on well get you all sorted when we're back." Ozpin spoke as everyone looked at each other before nodding as they all got aboard.
Thus the test-
PASSED!
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I kept my word I finally got to keep my word. I am sorry I took so damn long everyone. But writing a rewrite is hard!
Now I'm back. And I'm ready to kick ass. But first. I need a nap.
Rock on till you drop tata mothafuckers.
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RWBY: FATE
(VOLUME 1 IS DONE MOTHAFUCKERS! HIP HIP HOORAY I FINALLY GOT SOMETHING DONE! enjoy everyone)
(Hub to the rest of the pages.)
Ruby could barely stand still as she leaped up and down with joy as her, Weiss, Blake, Yang, Jaune, Nora, pyrrha, and Ren were lined up next to each aswell as everyone else that had seemingly passed the test. Ozpin walked infront of them before stopping with hazel right behind him as everyone stood on a stage with the crowd of hundreds of others standing beneath them.
"Greetings students, due to my lack of foresight I had sent you all out without you receiving a flare gun so this test will be redone tomorrow. That is for those who have not passed. As for the ones who did I'm going to announce them." Ozpin spoke plainly into the mic infront of him, as hazel just grumbled something.
"To begin I'd like to announce the first team that had completed the test, the new team CRDL. Lead by Cardin Winchester. If the team may step up and say a few words. Please." Ozpin continued as a group of men walked up as one brunette wearing chainmail and metal-plate armor lead the group as what looked like the insignia of a cardinal flapping its wings was plastered on his chest plate. The group stopped in front of the mic as Ozpin stepped aside for them. The one in the armor grabbed the mic and began speaking.
"Howdy folks, pleasure to meet y'all. I'm cardin obviously, and Just know that me and my team are going to do our best so.. don't fall behind us." Cardin spoke as he and his team left with jaune raising an eyebrow as the message seemed too friendly for some reason.
Ozpin walked back to his mic. As he began listing off the different teams, team RZER, team BRKR, team BRZE untill he said something that caught Ruby's attention.
"Team RWBY, lead by ruby rose." Ozpin spoke as Ruby, Weiss, blake, and yang all felt their scrolls vibrate as they pulled them out and saw the word "RWBY" was typed in as Ruby's eyes sparkled as Ruby shot towards the mic before yelling to the top of her lungs with joy. "HELLO EVERYONE!", to which everyone including her teammates covered their ears as Weiss grumbled, so THIS was her leader. Well Atleast she wasn't annoying and so far seemed... Nice.
And so the rest of the teams were announced as turns out jaune was also a leader and he leads team JNPR consisting of him, Nora, Pyrrha- to weiss' annoyance- and Ren.
We see Ruby marching along with Weiss, Blake, and yang following behind her as ruby had a huge dopey grin on her face. "Ooh this is SOOO great! I get to lead my own team!" Ruby spoke with glee as yang chuckled softly as she pat her sister on the back. "Don't get over your head rubes, being the leader of your team is probably gonna be a tough job." Yang added before hugging ruby as Ruby hugged back as Blake narrowed her eyes. This was going to be a LOOONG year.
Soon they arrived at their door and opened it as Ruby and yangs face immediately contorted to disgust as Weiss and Blake looked inside and saw four neatly cleaned beds set up in a horizontal line. Weiss raised an eyebrow "I don't see the problem here" Weiss spoke as she looked at yang and ruby.
"The beds... T-their... Their not-" "BUNK BEDS!" Yang interrupted her sister as they immediately shot forward as Blake and Weiss were left confused.
"Why is the fact that their not bunk beds such a big deal?" Blake questioned as yang and ruby looked at them as their faces were covered in Shadows. and to make things quick their made their beds into bunk beds... somehow.
Then our vision changes to Roman sitting in his cell as he sees a female guard walking by before stopping right in front of his cell.
"... Well what is it? Am I needed for something?" There was only silence before something dawned on Roman as he grinned. "That's my girl, you got the key?" Roman asked as the guard nodded before she took out a key before putting it in the lock as we hear a click as we fade to black.
"Thanks neo, I can always rely on ya"
[End of volume 1 "the race"]
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Annnd DONE WITH V1! whoo I'm glad I'm done for now. So what do y'all think of rwby fate so far? Any criticisms, any part you feel I should have done? Let me know by commenting.
Regardless enjoy everyone because WHO-BOY I'm out of gas.
Rock on till ya drop tata mothafuckers 🤘.
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RWBY: fate will be continued in Volume 2. (Also in some rwby: minis)
Guys finished my interpretation of Lyra's death
Only a couple more stuff to go and i'll have finish product
Family descriptions below
Tobias:
Overall appearance: Alot more pale and scrawny compaired to others, Brown hair. Brown eyes with bags underneath, Short ruffy hair with slight stubnble
Facial wise; alot of his dad's features. Slightly narrow head structure with narrow and slightly thick nose with point tip
Clothing: whatever his mom gives him that fits, Which are usually old turtleneck sweaters that she gives him and a set of dark pale blue jeans
[Drawing by peachy-clouds, Although this is him during his proxy arc he has same structure to this]
[[imagine this but without the scars]]
Connie:
Overall:Standard looking mom; Has short brown hair which is straight but curly at the end. Freckles, Green eyes and bags underneath her eyes.
Facial wise: Slim nose and round head structure
Clothing: typically old sweaters, Alot of causal wear too
[no drawing]
Lyra:
Overall: 2000 Emo vibe, Alot of pink too. Long hair similar to her mom [were it's straight except towards the end.] Green eyes, freckles and blonde hair
Facial structure: rounder structures similar to her mom, However her head shape is alot more oval like. Has slim nose with round tip
Clothing: alot of colorfuk grundge clothing
Frank:
Overall: Alot more stocky but an inch shorter then toby, ruffy blonde hair, thick stubble. Brown eyes
Facial: Narrow headshape with thick narrow nose
Clothing: whatever is clean, But usually wears white t-shirt and dark jeans work trousers