MERRY CHRISTMAS To ME And The ENTIRE DOLLEX AND CASDENA FANCLUBS Only Because We Just Got

MERRY CHRISTMAS to ME and the ENTIRE DOLLEX AND CASDENA FANCLUBS only because we just got

OFFICIAL ABiBaZ LORE!!! IN TWETNTY-TWENTY-FOUR!!!

Unfortunately, no new lore for Scrina and Ms. Immortal, it’s really funny to me how Ms. Immortal’s wiki is just desolate and bare even in the remake. Bless her soul 🙏

Just to clarify and reminder: THIS LORE ONLY APPLIES TO THE REMASTER! I don’t know why, but it probably has to do with the fact even Alex’s college got a complete redesign and overhaul. So it only makes sense that the characters get the same treatment.

GIRL, we’re COOKED. Time to rewrite my ABiBaZ interpretations like it’s a national sport ←(#1 canon-compliance suck-up).

​My chronic rhinitis ass when the air changes chemical density:

just posted a draft id been holding in like a mean and nasty fart since the month of february

English translation

Also you can’t hide this attempted murder in the comments.

@roxyteal Personally, I’m fine with all the new lore. The only one I’m abit let down with is Asmodena.

Like you said, the reoccuring theme of demons was super cool. Actually, I think Asmodena being a demon apprentice to Alex is way more compelling than a curious alien living with him. It was super cathartic watching Asmodena — someone who grew up witnessing violence and all the perversions of intimacy as a demon from the Lust ring — go against her beliefs and decide to live as a human instead of a demon because she wants to do what is right.

I don’t know why MrDrNose changed it, maybe it was to lean into her “silliness” more and away from the “horny” since y’know Lust ring. But personally I believe that it’s POSSIBLE to write a succubus without needing to be horny all the time. Not to brag or be arrogant, but I’ve done it, I never published any work regarding it — but if anyone wants to see proof, I will.

For example, I actually think Asmodena being a succubus is really interesting since it COULD utilise her intersexuality in a really contemplative way. Not only is she not as brutal as her fellow demons, she can’t even perform the “tasks” required by a succubus.

So I imagine that her going under Alex’s apprenticeship/work is some last ditch effort to gain some respect. She is a daughter of ASMODEUS, so I imagine there’s some pressure to make things right. Also I think having multiple demons in the story makes it more coherent and diverse. Alex and Asmodena are VERY different in how they are treated by others and how they treat other people. The dichotomy makes some fun un-spoken storytelling.

Another character I want to commentate on is Candy/Candice since you brought her up. I’m honestly indifferent to her change, both versions are good and I’m not exactly sure which is “better.” I LIKED the idea of Candy/Candice having Disassociative Identity Disorder, but honestly it’s not necessary to ABiBaZ’s story. Not only that but it also falls into a classic bad faith stereotype of there being a “bad alter” and “good alter,” which leads to both alters antagonising eachother.

I KNOW IN MY HEART, there is a way to write such a story in a beautiful and subversive way — take for example “The Low Quality Onceler” by Elias, a story wherein rather than being about “the good alter defeating the bad alter” it’s about “learning to understand and accept your alters even if they seem scary at first, and who knows maybe YOU are the scary one to them.” But I know that’s not the story ABiBaZ wants to tell. So I understand why it’s been retconned.

What was it retconned for? What I can only imagine will eventually lead to a metaphor regarding substance abuse, lmao. The tropes are literally THERE: “Potion made from candy that gives the user power but decreases their rationality and search for more candy.” That in itself is an interesting story that I could definitely see MrDrNose have an easier time writing for. Also it gives way for Alex to show his evilness because he would totally take advantage of Candice’s irrational mental state.

He did it already in the original game where it’s implied that he intentionally triggers Candy Princess to front so that he can have her clean the building. And we already know Candice hates Candy fronting without permission — toxic dynamic, my beloved, ah… — so yeah, Alex ruined her life before he can certainely do it again.

As for the rest, they’re fine, lol. Olivia could be either interchangeably, I guess it depends on what vibe you want. Not trashing on your opinon btw!! Just expanding on the discussion since I also have strong feelings regarding the lore dump.

MERRY CHRISTMAS to ME and the ENTIRE DOLLEX AND CASDENA FANCLUBS only because we just got

OFFICIAL ABiBaZ LORE!!! IN TWETNTY-TWENTY-FOUR!!!

Unfortunately, no new lore for Scrina and Ms. Immortal, it’s really funny to me how Ms. Immortal’s wiki is just desolate and bare even in the remake. Bless her soul 🙏

Just to clarify and reminder: THIS LORE ONLY APPLIES TO THE REMASTER! I don’t know why, but it probably has to do with the fact even Alex’s college got a complete redesign and overhaul. So it only makes sense that the characters get the same treatment.

GIRL, we’re COOKED. Time to rewrite my ABiBaZ interpretations like it’s a national sport ←(#1 canon-compliance suck-up).

I see, I see. That is alright! I think your writing style is very legible anyway, and it makes it more distinguished from other popular BBAU fanfictioners — if I may reccomend: Please read CHEATING’s work it’s really good.

Apparently a lot of people get dialogue punctuation wrong despite having an otherwise solid grasp of grammar, possibly because they’re used to writing essays rather than prose. I don’t wanna be the asshole who complains about writing errors and then doesn’t offer to help, so here are the basics summarized as simply as I could manage on my phone (“dialogue tag” just refers to phrases like “he said,” “she whispered,” “they asked”):

“For most dialogue, use a comma after the sentence and don’t capitalize the next word after the quotation mark,” she said.

“But what if you’re using a question mark rather than a period?” they asked.

“When using a dialogue tag, you never capitalize the word after the quotation mark unless it’s a proper noun!” she snapped.

“When breaking up a single sentence with a dialogue tag,” she said, “use commas.”

“This is a single sentence,” she said. “Now, this is a second stand-alone sentence, so there’s no comma after ‘she said.’”

“There’s no dialogue tag after this sentence, so end it with a period rather than a comma.” She frowned, suddenly concerned that the entire post was as unasked for as it was sanctimonious.