Rewriting A Couple Chapters For Exactly This Reason Lol

Rewriting a couple chapters for exactly this reason lol

when u come up with a tiny change for your story that not only makes the writing flow better but also hammers in the character motivations and story theme

One to five tag ✨️

Tagged by @the-golden-comet and their GIANT 1-5 post

Using my work 🌐7 Circles🌐 for this!

One word to describe your work

"Tension" 🫦

Two Favorite Lines

1. "Perhaps I'll tell the truth- that a conniving fae whore tricked me into siring you, and if I had not been magically bound to that hellish deal I would have slain you rather than sheltered you,"

2. His signature is practically an autograph, with unashamed spacing and fine loops that accentuate the true spelling of his name; Kazimier

Three Songs from Your WIP Playlist

Child of The Stars, by Fish In a Birdcage The Calling, by The Amazing Devil No Matter What, from The Steven Universe Movie

Four Feelings From Your Characters

Shame, Hope, Fear, Love

Five Tropes Featured

Hidden Heart of Gold

The Seven Sins

Found Family

Belligerent Sexual Tension

Forbidden Love

Tagging: @katenewmanwrites @smellyrottentrees @wyked-ao3 @lychhiker-writes @fortunatetragedy @cowboybrunch @zackprincebooks @urbiggestfan-01 (Can't remember who's done it, so no pressure!) Hmu to be +/- to tag games! Open tag!

Hopping on after @the-golden-comet

🌐7 Circles🌐 in a sentence:

Humanoid monsters fight capitalism using the power of personal growth and queer sex.

+Open tag!

Hey writeblr! Here's a challenge: can you summarize what you're writing in one sentence?

Character Voice Tag! ✨️

I love these!! This one from @rotting-moon-writes, Thanks for the tag @lychhiker-writes!

My line: "You should go to sleep." Your line: -Has realized as they're purchasing something.. that they forgot their wallet-

Valian🐁:

"Get some shut-eye, Star eyes.

Seeker🌠:

"It's been a rather long day, hasn't it? You've done all you can, little one. I'll take care of things while you get some much deserved rest."

Klaus🌻:

"You need your rest. Close your eyes now.."

Kazimier💋:

"If you pass out while standin' there.. I'm lettin' ya hit the floor."

@katenewmanwrites @smellyrottentrees @wyked-ao3 @the-golden-comet @cowboybrunch @fortunatetragedy @zackprincebooks @officialauthorofanotherworld please show me what your beans say when caught in that embarrassing situation if you're so inclined (it's like, my worst nightmare). +Open tag!

Find The Word Tag✨️

Thanks for the tags @the-golden-comet @fortunatetragedy and @lychhiker-writes, I'm gonna pick and choose since there are so many words lol But I got some 🌶️spicy🌶️ lines with the ones I picked.

My Words: Ate, friendly, jest, ardent, conscious, building, hook, excuse, drown, fidget, gape, choice Your Words: Snarl, Hope, Tension, Sink

Color-coded for what character the clip is talking about: Kazimier💋, Klaus🌻, Seeker🌠, Valian🐁 from 🌐7 Circles🌐 ------------------

Ate: They ask over their shoulder, not sure what ifrits ate- or even what a third of the food stocked was precisely."I'll eat anything, me," Val says, hopping to his feet and heading to the fridge.

Friendly: The end product created a friendly, but rather mysterious picture of ‘The Ambassador from beyond the sky', as they took to calling the Kalilith on multiple media fronts.

Ardent: Kazimier raises a brow at the position, half expecting his meal to get on hands and knees. That means the rise in submissiveness, that ardent plea, those were for..

Conscious: Seeker pulls the blanket higher, shivering and covering their chest self-consciously, scandalized at their current state.

Hook: Kazimier hooks a few fingers around the collar, as if trying to give himself more room to breathe, and tips his head back, horns scraping the wall. Excuse: "If that ever comes to pass, you must find whoever you sell me to and tell me how you managed to explain away your involvement, Father," Klaus replies, baring his own fangs in what most people would mistake for a smile. "I'd love to see what excuse you feed to the Sovereign Executive for how I escaped your notice for such a long time."

Fidget: Their upper right hand fidgets in their lap, the east palm longing to reach out and hold Val's thin green fingers for reassurance.

Choice: His choice hadn't been made out of some misguided attempt to dodge his own complicity. How could it be? He's using Kazimier as a sacrifice..

Tagging @katenewmanwrites @zackprincebooks @officialauthorofanotherworld @wyked-ao3 @cowboybrunch @officialauthorofanotherworld @smellyrottentrees @urbiggestfan-01(no pressure) + Open Tag!