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Literally going to sell my soul for a continuation of this fic
How you get the ghostbusters back for trapping you
Warnings: reader is super petty, non canon events, the guys are assholes in this, aggression
After being trapped for three months in that stupid ghost trap, you are severely pissed off with the ghostbusters
You’d spend months beforehand innocently haunting them and building individual bonds with them
All for them to take your one mistake as reason to punish you, you never meant to hurt Dana so why were you punished so severely
You, being as stubborn and strong willed as you are, expected them to be begging for forgiveness considering what they put you through
But they all acted like everything was going to go back to the way it was before, they didn’t even offer you the slightest apology for what they did
This did not bode well with you
In fact, it only seemed to enrage you further
You started off with your usual pettiness, but it lacked your standard playful style and just came off malicious
But the ghostbusters still found a way to make it a joke
You would mess with Egon’s lab equipment and experiments, but he’d just laugh it off in an Egon fashion and then suggest to your invisible figure that the two of you play chess again like you used to do so you could get your anger out
You’d hide the traps Winston was cleaning and storing in ridiculous hiding places, but Winston would just laugh and ask if you were playing hide and seek again
You’d turn off and change Ray’s music on his radio to something aggressive, but the only reaction you received was Ray joking that your music taste had definitely changed since you last played music together
Whenever Venkman would read the crossword prompts out to you and hold his pen out expectingly, you would write profanity in all the gaps
But venkman only sarcastically commented that “that’s definitely doesn’t fit the hint”
It infuriated you, they turned your anger into a joke and treated you like a pet who did a cute trick instead of a (spirit) person
You started to retract yourself from showing your presence to them out of embarrassment that your anger and their reaction caused you
You felt like an embarrassed child who had just been scolded rather than someone who underwent a painful and traumatic process of your spirit being caged to a small confined trap
You stopped showing yourself and kept to yourself next to janine’s desk so you could listen to her conversations on the phone as your only source of entertainment
You even tried to leave the ghostbusters HQ but found yourself unable to leave the building without attaching yourself to a human person, and you weren’t going to follow any of the ghostbusters around anymore
Despite janine working for the ghostbusters and Dana being the reason you were put in the trap, you never treated them unkindly
You understood them both and you knew that your anger wasn’t directed at them and they were just coincidental bystanders
You let your anger simmer but eventually it bubbled over the top
You heard the boys joking that soon you’d be over your “tantrum” and would come back to hang out with them
They joked about how they could ever think you were dangerous when all you’ve pulled are childish stunts
You felt yourself twist and twitch in anger and embarrassment as you heard them mock your very real emotions as if you weren’t once breathing like them
You decided that if you were originally going to be labelled as dangerous, then you would become dangerous to them
Instead of messing with Egons equipment to ruin his test results, you’d smash it to pieces and throw them at him
Instead of hiding the traps that Winston was cleaning and storing, you’d smash them to pieces and release the spirits inside to cause chaos in the HQ
Instead of messing with the radio of the car that Ray was cleaning, you’d blast loud screaming music in his ears before smashing the windows of the car
Instead of writing profanity on Venkmans crosswords, you tore his office apart and disposed of important documents before writing “fuck you ghostbusters” on his desk
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, and you were living (dead) proof of that
Your anger infected you and turned you violent in a way you hadn’t been in your entire stay with the ghostbusters
And the ghostbusters weren’t sure what to do
They didn’t want to put you back into a trap considering that’s what caused this mess in the first place, and they missed you dearly when you were gone
But your aggression was getting out of hand
They decided that the best plan of action would be to find out more about your life when you were alive to appeal to your human side
And until they found something they could use, they had better get better at dodging thrown items…..
Incorrect Egon x reader quotes
Egon: I am so cool. I am an absolute Chad. I am the epitome of coolness and awesomeness— Y/N: Hi. Egon: *melts down in a flustered heap of softness*
Egon, trying to flirt with Y/N: I think both of our families suck.
Egon: Do you love me? Y/N: We’re literally married. Egon: Yeah, but as friends or—
Egon: Can I have 2 straws with that milkshake? Y/N: Aww- Egon: With 2 straws, I can drink it double as fast!
Egon: Are you trying to seduce me? Y/N: Why, are you seducible?
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Egon had blanked out quite some time ago, utterly entranced by the girl in a booth at the other end of the chinese restaurant. She was sitting by herself reading a book as she waited for her food to arrive. He had seen her smile brightly as the waiter came to take her order, and that smile was breathtaking.
“Dude, what are you staring at? It’s been five minutes,” Ray asked, snapping Egon out of his trance, “Uh, what?” Egon asked, tinting pink at having been caught. Peter followed Egon’s gaze to the girl and smirked. “Not a what, a who,” He teased, Peter and Ray exchanged a knowing look.
“It’s nothing, I was just thinking,” Egon rushed to explain, “Yeah, I’d be thinking about her too, she’s real pretty,” Winston said as he glanced over to the girl who was now getting her food. “You should go talk to her,” Peter encouraged him, “Yeah, what’s the worst that could happen?” Winston tacked onto Peter’s statement.
“She could hear me,” Egon muttered to himself, shaking his head. “Okay,” Peter said in what seemed to be a surrender. Everyone at the table sat in shocked silence for a minute at how quickly Peter dropped it.
Peter excused himself to use the bathroom before standing up and leaving the table. What no one at the table knew was that he was actually making a beeline for the girl in the booth. On his way over he stopped a waiter, “Hey could you tell the people at that table that there’s a call for Winston and Ray?” he requested and the waiter nodded curtly and made his way to their table. He continued on his way.
“Hello,” Peter greeted the girl kindly, “I’m Peter,” he introduced himself. She looked up from her book, “Oh, hi, I’m Y/N,” She replied quietly. Peter looked over his shoulder to see Egon alone at the table, “I was wondering,” He started, pointing in Egon’s direction, “You see my friend over there?” He asked her, “Well yes,” She said skeptically. “He thinks you’re really pretty and I was wondering if you’d like to switch seats with me and sit with him,” Peter explained in a hushed tone.
Y/N looked up at Peter with a raised eyebrow, “There are other people around, it’s not like I’m asking you to the back alley,” He pleaded with her. She seemed convinced by this reasoning, “Okay,” Y/N agreed and picked up her plate, “Thanks, you won’t regret it,” Peter assured her, “That remains to be seen,” she said before leaving the table.
Y/N walked nervously to Peter’s friend, who upon further inspection, was really quite handsome. “Hi,” Y/N greeted as she came to a stop in front of him. Egon’s eyes widened and looked as though they might actually fall out of his head, “Erm, hello,” he managed, looking around to see that she indeed had to be talking to him.
“I’m Y/N,” She said as she put down her plate and sat across from Egon in the booth. “Hello Y/N, I’m Dr. Egon Spengler,” He said, putting out his hand for a handshake and feeling like an idiot in the process. It’s not like this some formal event, why couldn’t he just be normal? He asked himself.
“Oh, a Doctor, fancy that,” Y/N said with a giggle, “Glad you think so,” Egon smiled and began looking for a waiter. As one walked by, he gestured him over to the table, “May I have a glass of water and whatever she has?” Egon asked the waiter, who briefly looked at Y/N’s dish before scribbling it on his notepad and walking away.
Ray and Winston walked back out to see that their place at the table had been taken by the girl Egon had been eyeing just a few minutes before. “Good for him,” Ray muttered while Winston looked for Peter. Peter was waving them over to the table where the girl had been sitting when they left.
“This,” Winston started, pointing at the table where Egon and the girl sat, “Was your doing, wasn’t it?” Winston accused more than he asked. “Of course,” Peter said, smiling proudly as he sat up a little straighter. “Go on have a seat, I have a feeling we aren’t invited to dinner,” He commented cooly as he opened up a menu.
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Egon: Come to dinner tonight. I can’t cook, but I’ll bring plenty of free wine. Y/N: Marry me.
change wine to twinkies
Egon: I feel like doing something stupid. Y/N: I’m stupid, do me.
Egon: You’re not jealous, are you? Y/N: No! Egon: Good, ‘cause I consider my fake relationship with you a lot more meaningful.
Egon: You are the love of my life and I would do anything within reason to make you happy. Y/N: I would be happy if you ate, stayed hydrated and got a reasonable amount of sleep. Egon: I said within reason, Y/N. How about I murder that guy? Y/N: So murder is in reason but proper self care isn't? Egon: Well, duh. What kind of question is that?
Egon: My crush isn’t picking up on my hints. Y/N: What hints have you given them? Egon: Well, I think about them a lot. Egon: And sometimes I even think about talking to them.
Egon x reader incorrect quotes ~the saga continues or whatever~
Egon: banging a pen on the table out of frustration Y/N: Stop that. How would YOU feel if I banged you on the table? Egon: I— Egon: I don’t know the correct answer to that question.
Y/N: What the hell is wrong with you? Egon: I have this weird self-esteem issue where I hate myself but still think I’m better than everyone else.
Egon: As top in this relationship, I think we should- Y/N: I can't believe you're pulling rank on me.
This could really go either way
Y/N: You know my motto: carpe diem, carpe noctem, carpe coles. Egon: Seize the day, seize the night, what’s the last one? Y/N: Seize the dick.
Y/N: Stay foxy. Egon: Die lonely.
Ooh ooh can i request where fem reader is possessed on a job and after Egon and the boys save her, Egon takes care of her? Bonus points for protective egon and lots of fluffy hurt/comfort?
Of course!! I have thought about writing one of these for a while now, and you just gave me more of a reason.
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Your possession.
Pairing: Egon x Fem Reader.
Description: as above in request.
Warnings- Possession, mild language, mention of a panic attack, and fluffy Egon.
Friday night, and the guys and y/n were out on a bust. Fridays were their busiest days, but never anything severe. Well tonight that might seem to change for all of them. With little mishaps here and there, the ghostbusters were already frustrated and could possibly be having a bigger problem on their hands.
“Venkman, I need you to move to that side of the room” Ray ordered as the other guys moved around. They were so close to catching the ghost, but there was one minor problem. Y/n’s proton pack wasn’t working. She was having a problem throwing the stream, so instinctively she turned her back to the others. Trying to figure out what was going on, she heard commotion behind her and without thinking she yelled back that she couldn’t throw her stream.
No one heard her, so she silently moved away from them just a little so she could focus. She took her proton pack off and kneeled to see what the issue was. What she didn’t see was the ghost flying her way. Feeling a shove she turned back to where she thought one of the others had pushed her but she didn’t see anyone else. All of a sudden it felt really hard to breathe for her.
She felt out of her body, or more like she was shoved to the back of her mind but couldn’t control any part of herself. It had gone quiet, and the guys looked between each other before looking at y/n. She was still kneeling but something was different, slowly standing up she looked down at her hands before feeling from her pockets to her chest to her face (like Janosz did in gbII)
“Holy shit I’m real” she whispered to herself before grinning and turning to the others “oh hi guys, did you get the ghost?” She said, a bright smile on her face. The four men looked at each other before carefully stepping closer to Y/n. “Y/n sweetheart are you alright?” Venkman asked, as he began to reach out to touch her head, carefully placing his hand on her forehead to feel.
“Yea, I’m perfectly fine, why wouldn’t I be?” She asked, a smile still on her face as he felt for any kind of difference in temperature, other than that fact that her body was really cold compared to her usual warmth. Peter simply nodded before looking over at Egon, doing a simple head tilt to tell him to check it out.
He walked over and did the same as Peter, before stepping away, a look of uncertainty on his face. With a shrug, Y/n turned around once again, only it wasn’t really her. “I could really go for a strawberry shake right now” She said as she picked up the proton pack, usually needing help. “That’s funny to say L/n, You hate strawberry” Winston chuckled as he prepared to slime her. “Did I say strawberry, I meant chocolate” she laughed hesitantly as she turned, a shy smile on her face as if she had just been caught in the cookie jar.
“Funny, You don’t like shakes, never have” Egon responded, turning to Winston before looking at Y/n. “So, you can come out of her body now, and we won’t do things the hard way, or we do it the hard way” Peter spoke with a shrug, Y/n’s smile only dropping as she raised her arms “you caught me” she smirked, before running at Ray, before Winston had began to slime her, causing her to stop and shield her face best as possible.
As she tried to cover, she had fallen back, the ghost coming out. Peter and Egon threw the stream to catch it finally. As Ray quickly got up, he set the trap out, the other guys beginning to contain it as Winston went to check on Y/n who was out of it. Once the ghost was contained, they all went to check on Y/n, panic all over their faces as she was still slightly unconscious.
I mean, getting hosed down with some slime, didn’t sound like the best idea when possessed. With a sigh, Peter turned to the other guys, patting whoever it was beside him. “Looks like she’s out. Meaning we should try to get her awake so we can get out of here” He spoke, beginning to stand just as she had began hyperventilating.
With the sudden movements of her chest, Egon was quick to get her sitting up, using something to clean her face off as she was breathing too fast. Y/n was clinging onto anything, specifically Egon’s arm, and her grip was one as if she’d lose anything and everything if she let go. “Y/n, I’m right here I need you to breathe” he told her, only making her look at him with wide eyes, her breathing still erratic.
Falling unconscious once more, Egon had removed her proton pack before lifting her, bridal style of course, he took her back to the ecto-1, panic all over his expressions once more. Y/n had never freaked out like this, but then again she’s never been possessed, usually it was Ray or Winston but the one time she was distracted she gets possessed.
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Back at the station, Egon was able to convince Janine to help bathe Y/n so that she’d know she was home. Janine didn’t mind, of course they were the closest ones in the station. After her bath and getting settled, she sat at the couches simply staring off into space. The others would pass by but Egon was quick to notice her off-ish behavior.
“Y/n? You alright?” He asked, only she didn’t hear so he called her name once more before her head snapped up and she looked at him, automatically relaxing. “Are you okay?” He asked her softly as she scooted over so he could sit. “I don’t know. I don’t feel… here” She replied, looking at him as she hugged her knees to her chest, resting her chin on one of her knees.
“It’s weird, I don’t feel real right now. I know I’ll be back to how I normally am, but I just don’t feel… right” she rambled before putting her head down, taking in a deep breath to keep herself calm. Egon felt horrible, but there really wasn’t much to do except comfort the poor girl. “How does Ray do it…” she asked herself, as she propped her head up once more. “I don’t know, but it’s possibly tiring” “I feel bad, I tackled him, and I didn’t even want to” she whispered with a pained look on her face.
Egon could only smile at her antics, but he scooted closer to her and pulled her to him. “I hope you don’t mind this, I just don’t want you to feel or be by yourself right now” he explained as he rubbed her side gently. “Yea no, that was pretty fucking scary and I’d rather sit with you than keep thinking about it” She said as she laid her head onto his, relaxing more.
“If you don’t want to go on any busts I understand, it’s pretty scary and that was your first time” Egon hummed as Y/n had slightly began to doze off now that she was comfortable “I think… I’ll be okay” she yawned as she closed her eyes before falling asleep.
She was drained after all, during the ride home, she would come in and out of consciousness, panicking before she’d pass out again. And when they got her home, they were able to get her awake without freaking out or anything. She would mention little things about what she felt to Janine as she was bathed before she was out and sitting down. Only the feeling of being in the back of her mind stuck. Glad to say she wouldn’t get distracted anymore.
I really hope you enjoyed this, I kinda feel like it was rushed but at the same time like I didn’t spend enough time with it. I love you all so much, and I hope you’re doing well!
So all Egon spengler simps listen up !!
I'm writing a Fanfiction and I'm gonna upload this stuff here and not like I normally would on Wattpad so stay tuned.
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Chapter 4
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Chapter 14
Chapter 15
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(Model is Lillian Kruk) (not my art too)
Name: Jane Allison McCall Age: 25 (All Charakters are slightly aged down) She has a Doctor in Physiks and Electronic Personality: Kind, Sarcastic, slight Anger issues
How did they all Meet:
Jane is an Old Childhood friend of Ray. They became friends when they where just in Kindergarden. They went to the same schools. They met Peter Vankman in Highschool and they all went to the same University, where they endet up Meeting Egon since he was the Dorm mate of Peter. 3 months after she met Egon she grew a chrush on him, but it wasn't easy to talk to him at first.
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It’s just a Normal day in the University. I just Finished teaching as Ray storms in, all my students look at him
J: Dr. Stantz how can I help you ?
R: Library … they saw one.
Exited I grab my Bag and look at my students.
J: You can Go.
I turn to Ray and we walk to our Office.
J: Is Egon there ?
R: Yes
We storm in and there is Vankman with a Female Student, Jennifer, normal Blondie It girl.
R: This is it.
We grab our Equipment.
J: This is it.
I rush to grab my testing kit and pull Peter and Ray with me.
J: Come on now !
When we arrive at the Library I rush in, to Egon who sits cross legged on the floor. Venkman teases him. The Librarian leads us to a Lady.
La: I don’t Remember seeing legs but it definitely had arms, ‘cause it Reached out for me.
R: Arms ? I can’t wait to have a look at it.
I run some tests on her. I look at her eyes and check her pulse.
J: Normal eye dilation, high heart rate.
I look at her and check her abdomen.
J: What did you eat for breakfast ?
La: Rasin-brain and Tea.
I nod.
J: Are you Menstruating right now ?
The Guy from the Library looks at me.
LG: What has that to do with it.
I look at him and he’s a little bit too close to me.
J: Back off man I’m a Scientist.
Egon comes Back to us the PKE Meter in his Hands.
E: It’s Moving !
I look at the Boys.
J: Go, I’ll do more tests on her.
They nod and go off. I look back to the Lady.
J: So, are you ?
She shakes her Head.
La: I’m too old.
J: OK
I run a few last tests.
J: How old are you if I may ask
La: 56
I nod and get a sample box.
J: Can I have some of your hair my Partner would like to analyze it.
She nods and pulls some out and places it in the Sample Box. I close it up and put everything in my Bag.
J: Thank you, your good to Go.
Then I see the boys running out, I grab my Bag and Run after them. Egon grabs my Hand. We stop running at the Park. When we get to our office men are putting away some of our stuff.
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I run to my shelf and grab my stuff. I see a man grabung one of my Veils.
J: Hey don't touch that !
I get a corkscrew and put it on top and put it in my bag.
DY: Dr. McCall !
He walks to me
DY: You are not allowed to take this Equipment with you !
J: Oh, but I do, this is my Equipment ! The stuff that I got from the University got for me was bad quality.
I slightly push him away from me.
J: Now let me collect my stuff.
He looks at me Furious, probably not used to a woman talking to him like that, but before ha could say anything else Egon goes to stand in front of me. I Quickly grab my stuff and securely put them away. While the boys found Rays parents house I collect the rest of our stuff that we brought on our own and then I meet the boys at an old building.
J: Is this it ?
R: Yep !
We clean everything and Repair anything a few months later we have everything finished. We even have our own Secretary, Janine, she’s nice. But a little to nice with Egon. I get downstairs and see Egon Crawling out from under Janine’s desk, which she was sitting at. Slightly Jealous I storm back to our lab and drown myself in my Work, I don’t even notice that we have a client. I just notice it when. I was about to throw a Veil angry accross the room.
J: Oh ... Hello.
She waves at me. I reach my hand out to her.
J: Dr. Jane McCall.
?: Dana Barrett.
I shake her hand and get back to work still jealous and mad. I thought we had something, that he felt the same about me that I feel for him. But apparently not. It hurts really Bad. As I feel Tears beginning to Pool in my eyes. I quickly discharge of my Lab coat grab my Jacket and storm out. I hear the boys calling after me confused as to what is wrong with me. I stop running at the Central Park where I sit down under a tree. Trying to calm down. I see Ray coming towards me.
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J: How did you know I would be here ?
R: You always come here when you're upset.
He sits down next to me and lays an arm around me.
R: What’s wrong, did something happen ?
J: Yes, no ... arg I don’t know.
R: You can tell me.
J: It's about him.
He looks at me.
R: What about him ?
J: It took me a Year to talk with him about something that doesn’t evolve around school or anything Paranormal. A Year and now this Woman shows up and he only has Eyes for her, talks easy with her ... I-I thought that he felt the same for me ... the hints the way he speaks to me I-I-I ...
Crying I lay my head on Rays shoulder.
R: Maybe you should talk to him ?
I look at him.
J: Talk to him ?! Right now I don’t even want to see him.
We get up and walk trough the Park to the Fire station.
R: Then don’t talk to him right now, but you can’t ignore him forever.
J: I know and i don’t want to, I-I still love him.
Ray looks at me with wide eyes.
R: You love him that’s new.
I laugh a little and we walk into the fire Station.
J: Jup, with the way I feel right now I just discovered it.
E: Discovered what ?
I look at him
J: Just ... something.
I climb up the stairs to my lab where I see Janine. She closes the Door behind me.
Ja: We need to talk.
She pushes me on my chair and Gives me my Tea.
J: W-we do ? About what ?
Ja: You, me and Egon.
J: Uh ... what about us ?
She looks at me with a raised Eyebrow.
Ja: you obviously have feelings for him.
I take a sip from my Tea.
J: O-Obvious ?
Ja: Yes, I just want to tell you that i want nothing from him.
I look into my Cup.
J: Really ?
She nods md lays a hand on my Shoulder.
Ja: Why are you even Jealous ?
J: He is not one that is easy to talk to, I needed a Year to talk normal to him and with you, he talked with you like you knew each other for Years.
A tear rolls down my cheek.
J: You may want nothing from him, but you don’t know what he wants from you.
She hugs me.
Ja: and that makes you Jealous ?
J: Yes and it’s embarrassing, you get his attention so fast and I feel like I need to fight for it.
Ja: you love him right ?
Ashamed I look to the floor and nod. We talk for a long-time and surprisingly become friends.
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We talk until Vankman gets back.
Ja: He has really weird hobbies.
J: I don’t think it’s weird, I think it’s rather interesting.
Ja: what is interesting about that ?
J: Everything it’s the way ...
R: Vankmans back.
I get up and go with Ray.
J: And what did ya find ?
P: Nothing !
We get take-out and while the boys eat upstairs I eat with Janine.
J: I’m glad you’re here.
Ja: With only these boys it would be too much Testosterone.
J: Right and I had that for 5 years. In college, in the university as professor. I’m surprised I didn’t go crazy.
Ja: Maybe because you already were ?
We both laugh when the phone rings.
Ja: Hello ghostbusters ... Yes of course they’re serious ... You do ? You have ? No kidding !
I look at her as she writes something down.
Ja: Aha ... well ... U ... well ... just give me the address ... Yes of course they’ll be totally discreet. Thank you.
She hangs up.
J: Was that what I hope it was.
She nods.
Ja: We got one !
We push the button for the alarm and I rush to my Closet and put on my uniform just like the boys, we get into Ecto-1 and drive to the Sedwick hotel. Egon Ray and I build Proton packs and Ray and I constructed Ghost traps. We all get a Proton pack.
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We get into the hotel.
P: Anyone seen a Ghost ?
The Manger comes to us.
Ma: Thank you for coming so quickly.
We look at him.
Ma: The guests are starting to ask Questions and I’m running out of excuses.
R: Has that Happened before ?
Ma: well, most of the original stuff knows about the 12th floor. The disturbances I mean.
I nod
J: Ok and for how long has it been here ?
Ma: It’s been Quiet for Years. Up until two weeks ago. It was never this bad though.
E: Did you ever report it to anyone ?
Ma: No. Heavens, no. The owners don’t even like us talking about it, I hoped we could take care of this Quietly.
R: Yes Sir, don’t worry.
J: We take care of things like this everyday.
We get to the Elevator, a man just pressed the Button.
?: What are you supposed to be, some kind of a Cosmonaut ?
P: No, we’re exterminators. Somebody saw a Cockroach up on 12.
?: That’s gotta be some Cockroach.
J: It’ll bite your head off.
We get Into the Elevator.
J: You know what just accrued to me, We really haven’t had a completely successful test of this Equipment.
E: I blame myself.
P: So do I.
R: Well, no sense worrying about it now.
P: Why worry ? Each of us is wearing an unlicensed nuclear accelerator on their back.
R: Yep, well let’s get ready. Switch me on.
Egon pushes the button and a buzzing sound appears. Peter and Egon step aside and Egon pulls me with him. In 12 we get out and on accident we get spooked and fire our Proton Packs on a Maid and her Wagon. She’s not hurt Thankfully.
?: What the hell are you doin’ ?
E: Sorry.
J: Really sorry.
P: We thought you were someone else.
He Turns to us.
P: Successful Test.
R: I guess so ... uh.
J: I think we’d better split up.
E: Good idea.
P: Yeah, we can do more Damage that way.
I walk down a hallway and see a Slime patch on a Wall. I take a Sample for Egon. Then I follow Egon downstairs to the Ballroom.
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We get inside with the others.
R: Ok sir, if you and your Staff can just wait here we’ll take care of everything.
We lock the door and I see the ghost, a green blob thingy, at the ceiling
R: There it is on the Ceiling.
P: That’s the one that got me.
We go further inside.
J: Alright boys.
R: Ready ? Throw it !
We try to blast it but destroy the chandelier.
R: I did that. I did that. That’s my fault.
P: It’s ok, the table broke the fall.
I look at Egon and then the boys.
J: There’s something very important we forgot to tell you guys.
P: What ?
E: Don’t cross the Streams.
P: What ?
J: Don’t cross the streams !
P: Why ?
E: It would be Bad.
P: I’m fussy on the whole good-Bad thing. What do you mean ‘Bad’.
E: Try to Imagine all life as you know it stopping instantaneously and every molecule in your body exploding at the Speed of light.
R: Total protonic reversal.
P: Right that’s bad. Okay. Alright, Important Safety tip. Thanks, to the both of you. Alright Ray take the Left. Egon take the middle. Jane the right middle.
I go to the right middle as Peter goes to the Left middle.
P: Okay Ray, just give me one high and outside. Ray !
He fires right at it, but flees.
P: Egon !
He fires too and follows it but slightly loses control. I rush to him and turn it down, Egon can stop firing.
P: Nice shooting tex.
Egon looks at me.
E: Thanks.
J: No problem. I definitely have to work on that.
R: The last throw took something out of him, but he’s gonna move. I need some Room to put the Trap down.
We push the tables away.
R: We’ve gotta get this in the Clear.
Peter try’s to do a trick but Fails. Ray puts down the Trap. I load my Proton pack.
R: Okay, on my go- signal. Spengler, I want a confinement stream form you. Okay ? GO !
He shoots and the Stream grabs it.
R: Vankman !
He shoots too and his stream grabs it too.
R: McCall.
I shoot and we slowly lead the ghost down.
J: Vankman shorten your stream, we don’t want Egon’s face burned off.
Peter looks at me shortly and then he does just that.
R: Alright, I’m opening the Trap now.
J: Don’t look directly in the Trap.
Ray opens the Trap.
E: I looked in the Trap guys.
J: Of course you did.
R: Turn the Streams off as soon as I close the Trap. Get ready, I’m closing it ! NOW !
We all stop our streams. I look at the Trap.
J: Did we get it ?
E: It’s in there
R: Well, that wasn’t such a chore now was it ?
As Ray picks up the Trap I quickly check Egon’s eyes who didn’t take any more damage due to looking in the Trap. We open the door and go outside.
P: We came, We saw, We kicked ass !
Ma: Did you see it ? What is it ?
R: We got it !
Ma: What is it ? Will there be anymore of them ?
R: Sir what you had there was what we refer to as a focused, non-thermal repeating phantasm.
J: Or a Class 5 full- Roaming Vapour.
R: And a Real nasty one too.
P: And now ... let’s talk seriously. Now for the entrapment we’re gonna have to ask you for ... Four big ones. 4000 $ for that. But, we are having a special this week on Proton charging and Storage of the Beast. And that’s only gonna come to ... 1000 $ fortunately.
Ma: 5000 $ ?! I had no idea it’d be so much. I won’t pay it.
J: Oh that’s alright. We can just put it back in there. Dr. Stantz.
R: WE clearly can, Dr. McCall.
He starts walking towards the Ballroom.
MA: NO, NO, NO, NO ! No. Alright, anything.
Peter hands him the Bill.
P: Thanks so much.
J: Thank you, We hope we can help you Again.
Ray walks behind peter outside to the Car.
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The next few weeks we have a kick start after fixing the Proton Packs we get ghosts everyday, we appear in Magazines, Tv shows, Interviews , even on the Radio, we even get our own Comic it’s amazing. Janine gets so much calls, the Phone never stops ringing. We even start sleeping in our uniforms so we don’t need the time to change. But we notice that with even four Ghostbusters we need help, we need another ghostbuster and we got one his name is Winston. He quickly settles into the Team. We show him how everything works. Me and Egon work on some experiments on the Samples that we took from the last Two ghosts.
J: That’s interesting.
E: What ?
J: It turned red.
He comes to me.
E: Red ?
J: Jup.
I put it away and go downstairs to the protection grid. Egon checks everything while I look to Ray and Winston.
J: So how do you like this Job so far.
W: Great.
Egon turns to us while the boys smoke i eat a Twinkie.
E: I’m worried guys. It’s getting crowded in there and all our recent data points to something big on the Horizon.
W: What do you mean by ‘’big’’ ?
I swallow my Twinkie and Look at him.
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J: Well let’s say this Twinkie Represents the Normal amount of Psychokinetic energy in New York.
I point to Egon who is Holding up his Twinkie.
J: According to this morning’s Sample it would be a Twinkie 35-feet long weighing approximately 600 pounds.
W: That’s a big Twinkie.
Winston points to me. I swallow the rest of my Twinkie.
P: What about the Twinkie ?
I explain it to him.
P: That could be a Problem.
J: Really ? Didn’t think of it.
I look at him with a sarcastic Smile. Peter goes to get ready for a Date, Ray and Winston go on a Mission, Egon checks something and I read my book sitting by Janine.
P: Should I bring Flowers ?
J: Yes Peter, Buy roses though it’s better.
He goes on his way.
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Ja: How’s the Book ?
J: Could be better.
Ja: How are you and Egon doin’ ?
She looks at me with a sly smile.
J: Uh I accidently fell asleep on him on our Way home after the Last mission and he did put his arm around me, but we didn’t talk about it so I don’t really know.
Ja: That’s something.
J: He probably thinks I passed out because of exhaustion.
Ja: It wasn’t ?
J: No, I was just Tired.
Then there’s a knock on our Door, Janine opens, It’s the Police.
Ja: Dropping off or Picking up ?
Pol: Dropping off.
Ja: Just a moment.
She closes the Door.
J: Egon Police.
He comes to us, we both go to the Door.
Pol: You Two Ghostbusters ?
E: Yes.
Pol: We picked up this guy. Now we don’t know what to do with him. Bellevue doesn’t want him, I’m afraid to put him in Lock-Up.
We go with him.
Pol: And I know you guys are into this stuff, so I figured we’d check with you.
E: Alright.
Egon checks him with the PKE. The guy looks at me
?: Are you the Gate keeper ?
J: Uhh ?
I look from him to Egon who nods.
J: Yes.
He instantly latches onto my arm. I look at the Police officer.
J. We’re gonna take him inside.
We go to Janine as the guy holds onto my arm.
Ja: you both are so kind to take care of that Man. You know, you two are real humanitarians.
J: I wouldn’t say that but Thanks.
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We bring him inside and put him on our Testing Machine.
E: What did you say your name was ?
?: Vinz Clortho, Key master of gozer.
Ja: Well, according to this his name is Louis Tully. He lives in Central-Park west.
She gives us his Wallet.
Ja: Do you want some coffee Mr. Tully ?
He looks at me
L: Do I ?
J: Yes have some.
L: Yes have some.
I furrow my eyebrows.
E: Vinz you said before you were waiting for a sign. What sign are you waiting for ?
L: Gozer, the Traveller. He will come in one of the pre-chosen forms. During the rectification the Vuldronaii, the Traveller came as the large and Moving Torb. Then during the third reconcialtion of the last of the Meketrex supplicant, they choose a new form for him, that of the solar ! Many Shubs and Zuuls knew what it was to be Roasted in the depths of the solar that day, I can tell you.
Me and Egon look at each other.
Ja: Egon, Jane ?
We look at her, she silently tells us to come to her, i walk to her, Egon by my side.
Ja: There’s something very Strange about that man.
I look at him He’s sniffing on the Popcorn Jar. I turn to Janine.
Ja: Listen, I’m usually very psychic and I have a terrible feeling that something awful’s gonna happen to you both. I’m afraid you’re gonna die.
She lays her head on my shoulder and takes his hand. I pat her Back and then the phone rings.
E: I’ll get it.
He goes to pick it up and I hug Janine.
J: Everything’s gonna be fine.
Ja: I know you’ll protect him but what about you ? Your my only female friend.
J: I’ll keep watch on myself.
Egon hangs up and Louis is giving him a Pan.
E: We have to find Ray. I need him here Immediately.
Louis hands me a Lamp, i smile at him and nod.
J: Fast.
We run tests on Louis the whole night.