Art Criticism - Tumblr Posts

Tried drawing soundwave. I’m not a good artist and I do see a WHOLE lot wrong with this. But I honestly love it regardless! First time I’ve actually been dedicated to draw something in a long time, and i think it’s a nice starting off point, if nothing else!
Used the siege soundwave mold for reference
Any advice to help me improve (as well as any criticism) would be greatly appreciated!

So I’m designing Embers’s Tokugawa frame mecha, and I hate this design
Any suggestions to get this guy out of bad leg day and into the skrunkle zone? Please help me

Hi! I’m in the early stages of making a picture book based on two of my stuffed animals growing up, and I’m experimenting with the art style I want to use. Any thoughts on this test drawing of the two characters? I’m struggling a little with the line values… but this is just a first pass, the idea is to learn what I want for the book and determine how I can achieve that : )
If it makes a difference, I want the book to explore childhood OCD via Bitsy. The tone is light and gentle, kind of like Winnie the Pooh.










It bothers me when I see people just go “black washing isn’t bad!” And ignore all the stereotypes people can make, even unintentionally , and I’m definitely not immune to falling into that trap myself

I participated in Lori Waxman's 60 WRD/MIN Art Critic project held at Institute 193. Here are the collected reviews from last weekend.
Art dump !!!



These are all commissions I’ve done this January ! Please feel free to offer criticism and advice

Portrait of Denis Diderot (1767) by Louis-Michel van Loo. Musée du Louvre.