Heart On Fire: Spark.

Heart on fire: spark.

Yang woke up as stretched before hoping out of bed and noticed... Her teams form was empty. Guess she probably overslept. She soon got dressed and made her way down to the mess hall as she saw something not surprising. Jaune frozen in a block of ice as a very frustrated Weiss was eating her eggs.

Yang: what VB do this time?

Thats when yang noticed a box of chocolates that ruby was devouring. With Weiss glaring at the red reaper.

Weiss: you have no idea if bad timing do you dolt?

Ruby: what? Jaune spent L50 on this for you. And I don't feel like having good things go to waste. You want some pyrrha?

Pyrrha: o-oh thank you ruby but I'll have to decline and also Weiss I wanna ask you something.

Weiss raised an eyebrow as pyrrha whispered into her ear before Weiss went red in the face.

Weiss: t-thats very bold of you pyrrha. Let's discuss this in my teams dorm.

Weiss got up as her pyrrha left with yang just sitting at the table.

Yang: Blake how much you wanna bet-

Blake: oh their already doing it.

Yang: oh right you can hear em.

yang then stared at the still frozen jaune as she sighed.

Yang: VB probably is gonna have the shock of his life

Ren: he's still conscious. So he just saw everything.

Nora: yep. Atleast now he's not gonna be frozen in ice anymore... Hopefully.

Yang: well look on the bright side next time he'll keep his c-

Blake: yang. Don't even finish that joke.

Yang: oh come on it's funny.

Ruby: yang. No offense sis but I think you can hold off on the jokes for today

Yang: you sure? Alright then. and tell vb good luck with the reveal

Yang got up and began walking as Blake perked up and looked at her questioningly

Blake: and what leads you to say that?

Yang just shrugged as she continued walking

Soon the lewd moaning of Weiss was heard and gauging from the height the sound was coming from. They were doing it on Ruby's bed... Lovely.

To describe how jaune felt could be summed up In one word... Humiliated. he felt so stupid for all the attempts he made for Weiss. Jaune wanted to just bury his face in the dirt as he groaned into his hands. That's before a knock was heard on his teams door as he got up and opened it and was immediately met with a bag being handed to him... Well more of.. thrown at him.

As he caught it he saw one familiar yang xiao long.

Jaune: oh hey yang. Uh what do you need? And why did you throw a bag-

Yang: we're training lady killer. So pack a towel and extra clothes because I'm gonna make you sweat.

Jaune went wide eyed as yang had a grin on her face before jaune responded with a smile on his face as he nodded.

(feel free to continue this if you want everyone.)

(and sorry my writing is probably shit, really tired at the moment)

PISTON/RHINO E-VICE

TIGER/ENGINE EVO

I wanna talk about yang but I just got nothing despite her being my #1 favorite..

Maybe I'm just shallow and find her really fuckin cool. (And hot but that's kinda obvious :/ and I'm not THAT shallow I so fucking am)

Regardless have a great day everyone.

Rock on till ya drop tata mothafuckers 🤘.

(the following is just straight up smut so please don't continue reading)

Jaune couldn't exactly pin down what happened in his head after those five simple words. But now hes here pounding weiss like a dog in a rut as weiss moaned out his name.

(gentlemen this is the rare time I go against my rule of wanting to make jaune tender and it is because of one of thing. Weiss is a fuckin bottom)

"want to play a game?"

Weiss: j-jaune~ don't stop~ d-destroy me~

Jaune knew that this was wrong, he was fucking one of his friends who was ABSOLUTELY drunk but he felt this urge just to pound the heiress into the sheets and so far the face she had on her was definitely making jaune more turned on. He face was contorted into a wide open-mouthed smile as she panted heavily, as her pupils were hearts at this point as she continued moaning out his name.

Jaune kept pounding as he smacked her ass hard with her moaning louder as her tongue stuck out a she continued to pant heavily.

Jaune: f-fuck, so tight~

Weiss: good to k-know you like my insides~

Jaune went harder as Weiss moaned more and more as she could feel her mind slipping. Jaune continued the assault on her cunt as he sped up with him delivering another powerful SLAP to her ass with another loud moan escaping Weiss.

Jaune had no doubt everyone could hear the things he was doing to Weiss, the sound of sweat soaked flesh pounding against one another, the begging for more of the lust driven abuse, and the gutteral MOANS that escaped the once Nobel and prestigious heiress known as Weiss schnee's mouth as jaune reshaped her insides to fit his dick.

Jaune: Weiss, I pray you don't remember this.. i pray this is just a wet dream

Jaune would keep going as weiss' face showed that she was in all sense of word, "broken" her eyes were rolled to the back of her skull, her mouth was wide open as she was speaking gibberish as tongue hung out, her face was red from her forehead down to her eyes as jaune soon felt his dick THROB, signifying he was about to climax. He kept going as he reached out before grabbing the heiress by the hair and tugged on it causing her head to be forced upwards as she soon felt him go DEEP and began emptying his GALLONS of seed as Weiss let out one last moan.

Weiss: JAUNE~

Jaune could barely remember after that as he and Weiss flopped on top of the bed as Jaune panted heavily as he saw Weiss look at him before hugging him as he last thing he heard before falling asleep was-

Weiss: I love you~

(end?)

Weiss: So listen *hic* I’m somewhere between fuck you and I’d let you fuck me.

Jaune: Did Yang spike the eggnog?

Jaune: *looks around for Yang*

Weiss: Don’t change the subject. Eyes on me please. Thank you.

Weiss: *Cups his cheek and makes him look at her*

Weiss: There. Now that’s better for everyone involved.

Jaune: What has gotten into you?

Weiss: Not sure. Have you always had such pretty eyes?

Jaune: Last time I checked. Don’t start flirting with me Weiss. I will catch feelings and you won’t.

Weiss: *pouts* I wouldn’t *hic* be so sure about that. What makes you think I won’t catch feelings.

Jaune: General rule of thumb for me and women.

Weiss: Maybe I feel like breaking the rules.

Jaune: I didn’t have you pegged as the naughty type. More of a stickler for the rules.

Weiss: Maybe tonight I’m feeling naughty. Who could say?

Jaune: It sounds like you could.

Weiss: Then where would be the fun for you? Do you like mysteries? Want to play a *hic* game?

RWBY: FATE

(VOLUME 1 IS DONE MOTHAFUCKERS! HIP HIP HOORAY I FINALLY GOT SOMETHING DONE! enjoy everyone)

(Hub to the rest of the pages.)

Ruby could barely stand still as she leaped up and down with joy as her, Weiss, Blake, Yang, Jaune, Nora, pyrrha, and Ren were lined up next to each aswell as everyone else that had seemingly passed the test. Ozpin walked infront of them before stopping with hazel right behind him as everyone stood on a stage with the crowd of hundreds of others standing beneath them.

"Greetings students, due to my lack of foresight I had sent you all out without you receiving a flare gun so this test will be redone tomorrow. That is for those who have not passed. As for the ones who did I'm going to announce them." Ozpin spoke plainly into the mic infront of him, as hazel just grumbled something.

"To begin I'd like to announce the first team that had completed the test, the new team CRDL. Lead by Cardin Winchester. If the team may step up and say a few words. Please." Ozpin continued as a group of men walked up as one brunette wearing chainmail and metal-plate armor lead the group as what looked like the insignia of a cardinal flapping its wings was plastered on his chest plate. The group stopped in front of the mic as Ozpin stepped aside for them. The one in the armor grabbed the mic and began speaking.

"Howdy folks, pleasure to meet y'all. I'm cardin obviously, and Just know that me and my team are going to do our best so.. don't fall behind us." Cardin spoke as he and his team left with jaune raising an eyebrow as the message seemed too friendly for some reason.

Ozpin walked back to his mic. As he began listing off the different teams, team RZER, team BRKR, team BRZE untill he said something that caught Ruby's attention.

"Team RWBY, lead by ruby rose." Ozpin spoke as Ruby, Weiss, blake, and yang all felt their scrolls vibrate as they pulled them out and saw the word "RWBY" was typed in as Ruby's eyes sparkled as Ruby shot towards the mic before yelling to the top of her lungs with joy. "HELLO EVERYONE!", to which everyone including her teammates covered their ears as Weiss grumbled, so THIS was her leader. Well Atleast she wasn't annoying and so far seemed... Nice.

And so the rest of the teams were announced as turns out jaune was also a leader and he leads team JNPR consisting of him, Nora, Pyrrha- to weiss' annoyance- and Ren.

We see Ruby marching along with Weiss, Blake, and yang following behind her as ruby had a huge dopey grin on her face. "Ooh this is SOOO great! I get to lead my own team!" Ruby spoke with glee as yang chuckled softly as she pat her sister on the back. "Don't get over your head rubes, being the leader of your team is probably gonna be a tough job." Yang added before hugging ruby as Ruby hugged back as Blake narrowed her eyes. This was going to be a LOOONG year.

Soon they arrived at their door and opened it as Ruby and yangs face immediately contorted to disgust as Weiss and Blake looked inside and saw four neatly cleaned beds set up in a horizontal line. Weiss raised an eyebrow "I don't see the problem here" Weiss spoke as she looked at yang and ruby.

"The beds... T-their... Their not-" "BUNK BEDS!" Yang interrupted her sister as they immediately shot forward as Blake and Weiss were left confused.

"Why is the fact that their not bunk beds such a big deal?" Blake questioned as yang and ruby looked at them as their faces were covered in Shadows. and to make things quick their made their beds into bunk beds... somehow.

Then our vision changes to Roman sitting in his cell as he sees a female guard walking by before stopping right in front of his cell.

"... Well what is it? Am I needed for something?" There was only silence before something dawned on Roman as he grinned. "That's my girl, you got the key?" Roman asked as the guard nodded before she took out a key before putting it in the lock as we hear a click as we fade to black.

"Thanks neo, I can always rely on ya"

[End of volume 1 "the race"]

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Annnd DONE WITH V1! whoo I'm glad I'm done for now. So what do y'all think of rwby fate so far? Any criticisms, any part you feel I should have done? Let me know by commenting.

Regardless enjoy everyone because WHO-BOY I'm out of gas.

Rock on till ya drop tata mothafuckers 🤘.

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RWBY: fate will be continued in Volume 2. (Also in some rwby: minis)

I'll be up front with you all, I don't care for the brothers. The ice just have no interest it's just the same boring "god of light, creation, and good" and "god of darkness, destruction and EvIl" like for fucks sake it's boring and I don't care, they could have done something really cool with them and instead we got boring ass gods and I just don't care about them.

But since I am making a rwby rewrite I'm feeling rather shameless today I have a suggestion.

Make the gods just one

We don't NEED a pantheon that's been done to death. I suggest perhaps have the gods be the god of balance. A being born from neutrality that does both Good and evil, not because it wants to help or hurt people just because that's what it's supposed to do it means to deal out equality. Before there was anything there was only nothingness, then the god of balance arrived and created everything that exists in the world of remnant. Simply because balance needs to exist.

But what if we had to keep it as a pantheon? Well I suggest sticking to certain fairy tales.

And instead of it just being the brothers have it be multiple different gods, the god of faunus could be based on Pan, pan is a trickster is a saytr, and with how fast genetics work you can definitely call that genetic trickery (or "genetic bullshit GO!" As I would probably say, make it a lot more fun) and hell assign him the relic of desire! (I mean there's a fuckin GENIE which you know, can screw you over if you aren't specific with your wish)

And if we're going with the relics maybe make a god of hunting based on Cain, or if you feel like avoiding biblical references, king fuckin Arthur, assign him the relic of destruction, and just don't make him, not all destruction is bad sometimes it helps with bringing in New Life, speaking of new life.

The god of birth (which can also be taken as creation), based on izanagi from The kojiki, the Japanese god of CREATION. (Plus the kojiki is full of japenese LEGENDS and STORIES)

The god of direction (aka choice) which... Hermes exists, he's a god of Paths. But we can also use

BUDDHA

The mf who is connected with everything by taking the path of enlightenment which requires tough decision (this one's a little iffy but still)

That or use the legend of momotaro for all the gods. (I'm sorry it's just good)

Anyway that's all.

Fuck you all and have a great night/day/whatever the fuckin time is.

For those of you who have watched RWBY what are your opinions regarding the brothers and their actions? I am asking for science.